Mortal Fairy Stone

You told me this is the heroine? First, he was gang-raped to death by bandits, and the protagonist was saved by taking drugs. Then she was knocked unconscious and raped by a demon cultivator (the second time it was the male protagonist but she didn't know who it was), and was saved by the protagonist again. This protagonist is still deeply in love and infatuated with you. How dare he accept your affection for his broken shoes? The key is that not long after, the protagonist started to disappear when he was having a nightmare. Disappeared for more than a hundred years. Looking at the adjectives used to describe this woman's tribulation, she was first in agony, then mixed with joy and sorrow, and finally she died with a smile on her face. Isn't it just that these embarrassing things in the inner demons have been experienced again, and then the protagonist has been exposed to them in front of him? It's a shame when you get what you wanted after you're done but don't want to wake up and face reality. No, author, do you know how to write emotional drama? It successfully awakened the psychological shadow of me reading painful urban romance novels in junior high school. The heroine passed by the construction site and was dragged through the grass and gang-raped, and then had various psychological activities to fight for her life or death. I don't have the ability to write any emotional scenes, so it's usually fine, but the quality of the plot drops significantly when a woman appears. The key point is that she is quite innocent. The girl in the original novel is a senior sister Ye who only participated in a few chapters of the plot without touching her.

In the Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Han Lao Mo's golden elixir can only save his life in the early stage of Yuanying. In the human world of mortals, gods cannot emerge. Below Yuanying, they are all ants. Don't write those Yuanying old monsters as too weak. They can be invincible at the same level as the protagonist. Killing the middle stage of Jindan to kill Yuanying in the middle stage is too exaggerated. Come on, the author. In fact, the writing is very good, but the publicity is a bit poor. It is no worse than the mortals' scientific cultivation of immortality. I feel better than other mortals.

In order to suppress the strength and keep in sync with Han Li, even if the cultivation level is completely destroyed, start over again. I'm convinced. How can your book become popular?

I really admire the author for being able to write more than 400 chapters. After reading 200 chapters, the more I read, the more damn angry I became. I can't figure it out. I've written more than 400 chapters in a novel and there's no progress at all.

I'm really convinced that the protagonist is a waste. Anyone can fight with the protagonist for a long time before beating someone to death. What's the use of practicing so many exercises? It's hard to see if you haven't used them at all.

It's a pity to throw away tasteless food. Always talking to myself

Author, have you noticed that the protagonist has a weak point? Although Qing Qi can upgrade elixirs, he doesn't know how to practice elixirs at all. He can only find Junior Brother Han, which is okay. He doesn't understand the formations at all. Breaking the formations relies entirely on brute force. Needless to say, the charms have never been used. Unlike Han Laomo, who is a hexagonal warrior, haven't you considered strengthening these? Anyway, he is only over 200 years old and has a Nascent Soul. Young people are going to die.

It was originally written quite well, but I blamed you for writing the heroine to death. I have to give you some extra points.

Because of some serious matter, you had to kill Man Beard in the Xutian Temple, and you didn't hesitate to use the Demon God's Cone and then failed. How did you set up this thing? Permanently losing part of the consciousness and causing soul damage to the enemy. How can this method be used easily for some trivial matter except in a life-and-death crisis? The fourth level of Dzogchen of Dayanjue plus demonic consciousness, the spiritual consciousness in the middle stage of the Golden Core is comparable to the late stage of the Golden Core. If it were Han Li, he would probably be able to compete with the middle stage of the Nascent Soul.

I didn't want to read it when I saw Chapter 128. They are all original plots. The main reason is that the plots are all in an assembly line. You can know the plot by reading the title, so skipping it will not affect you. I think Mortal is like an RPG game, and you are still left with more to experience after completing it. The fandom is similar to the game under the dnd rules. Each fanfic is a new character. So as long as the IQ is online (unit AI) and the system is reasonable (balanced), a wonderful story can be played. But some players like to add some MODs that make the game cumbersome (not good cheats, etc.), And add poor DLC (original content) I have read a few Mortal fandoms (basically those who listen to the books), and I can tell you what I don't like. Too many original plots The description of the plot for practicing and upgrading is too detailed Complicated cheats Slow pace It feels like the plot of Mortal is very long. We all know the plot. If we play it again, we can pass the level quickly. No matter whether the new character is honest, moderate, or evil. As long as the story system does not collapse, please speed up the pace. I have read that many books have been abandoned before reaching the spiritual world. . .

The protagonist knows the plot and practices the Six Paths of Magic! Isn't this seeking death? I won't say anything about your minor! Major? Do you want to use a plug-in to fight against the Six Paths Saint Ancestor? Is this hook too big? Is it weird not to be controlled by the Saint Ancestor of Six Paths when he reaches the stage of becoming a god? If you hadn't already subscribed to all chapters! I didn't really want to watch it when I saw that he majored in the Six Paths of Magic Skills.

Turn the low-key and forbearing mortal flow into a chicken-blood flow. What a pity.

It's okay, the bad thing is the original characters

Originally I just thought it was an excellent fan work, and I didn't plan to subscribe to it. But I've eaten a lot of shit recently, and when I looked back, I found that this book was probably so disgusting that I had to get rid of all the foreshadowing (poisonous points). Alas, things are really unpredictable, so I'll just read the ads and order. Really well written.

The writing is quite good, but I still can't stand it. They defend Han Li everywhere. This is too outrageous. I am also a part of it.

Compared with the Qingyuan Sword Art, the protagonist's skills are too rubbish 1. The Qingyuan Sword Art can be cultivated to the realm of deity transformation, but the protagonist's skills can only be cultivated to the golden elixir. 2. In terms of magical power, the third turn of the heavy element can make the cultivation far beyond the same level and increase the probability of elixir formation. It also comes with the magical power of the sword formation, which is either super auxiliary or cross-border killing enemies; the golden light shield of the protagonist's skill can block the foundation building. A random strike in the mid-term is not a full blow, and the sword energy does not calculate the damage according to the realm. The damage according to the level of the magic weapon is very confusing. It is still the damage of one hit of a mid-level magic weapon. In the previous fight with the foundation-building magic cultivator, the protagonist couldn't hit it for a long time with a top-level magic weapon and talismans. The attack of the middle-level magic weapon was useless. 3. The attached magic weapon Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword is the same level, invincible with the same level as the sword formation, and coupled with the refining of the Golden Thunder Bamboo, it is basically invincible at the same level under the Nascent Soul. The main character's magic weapon does not even have a function. To put it bluntly, it is useless for abusers. It is average at the same level, and cannot be defeated at higher levels. It relies solely on golden fingers. A very important point is that when the protagonist knows the Qingyuan Sword Technique, he still thinks that this technique is very strong, but it looks awkward. I don't know if the author has strengthened it in the later chapters. If you have any suggestions, please mention it. For example, if the technique is incomplete, the completion is also at the Qingyuan Sword Technique level, which makes people look forward to it. Or the protagonist knows that the technique is average, and there is currently no channel to obtain better techniques. Waiting for a stronger one in the future will also increase readers' expectations.

Chun Chun licked the dog, and she even licked Han Li. She knew how to lick the protagonist even though she didn't even have a golden finger to understand. You traveled through time just to be a dog, right? You might as well not go there.

If you have a monthly pass or recommendation vote, please support the author. This book makes me feel like I used to read The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. I refresh it every day to see the update.

Ye Qiqi's writing is so weird

The flight attendant sends the flight attendant to act as a nanny and as a nanny. If you go and get his era now, he will not know about it later. By chance, you will not take it and act as a nanny and send him away.

The nanny adds some points to give you opportunities🐶If opportunities don't use you, what can you do to fix it Like a bitch, you don't dare to use opportunities to fw

Han Li feels like the protagonist is the same as the author's father

No one can lick Han Li's character. Zhang Tie would have been far away if he hadn't turned into a zombie. You can only be safe by keeping a proper distance.

Among mortal fans, those who licked the original model workers seem to have less good grades. It feels like a supporting role. I just added a nanny to the model worker

I have subscribed to all of them. Can the author give me more help?

Are there other people who practice magic, just mortal novels?

This original character Ye Qiqi is really a big failure

This book is mainly based on Han Li and the original plot. The Chaos Star Sea basically surrounds Han Li, and the Chaos Star Sea basically separates from Han Li. Han Li does not snatch opportunities, and Han Li's heroines do not snatch them. They are very, very friendly to mortal fans There are not many female protagonists, and their combat power is a bit suppressed, but not much is acceptable. Small poisonous points are inevitable Note; It depends on snatching Han Li's opportunities. If the heroine is an enemy, you can leave. This is a book based on Han Li's original plot direction.

Why has the author been waiting for you for several days and still hasn't updated?

You went too far and gave Han Li all the good things. Your sincerity was wrong and it was a bit embarrassing.