This Elf World Is a Bit Strange

It has nothing to do with the novel itself, why do so many books include a dream monster? The Dream Monsters don't seem to be anything special. They have strength but are just usable. The Candlelight Spirit family is great. It has high speed and high attack and can perform tricks. The Gengar family is also good. It has high-speed Tiger Balm. The powerful Duolong family is also very good. After all, what is the racial value? Is it because I got better in competition and became a combat power party? I don't know why it just doesn't suit my eyes.

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Are there many female protagonists in elven literature? Just one is enough, I feel like the elf Wendo heroine is weird

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This book sounds good, but does it have multiple female protagonists? ?

Why do all the Pokémon fandom and humanities now like to impose age restrictions on travel? There is absolutely no need for it. Children in the Pokémon world are different from those in our real world. Children in the Pokémon world can already be compared with some weaker Pokémon. But people are just a type of Pokémon. There is absolutely no need for age restrictions on travel, and it is unreasonable.

The little dream monster is the best in the world!

The two heroines are ecstatic. Just read the book to read the two heroines. If you don't understand people, don't talk about it.

Make a suggestion. (I'm just making a suggestion, it's up to the author whether to adopt it or not) 1. In terms of the team, now it is 1008. You can choose a few relatively unpopular but powerful Pokémon. There is no need to always use Gengar, Fairycloth and the like. 2. In terms of battles, I hope that it will not only be singles, but also some special battles from time to time, such as doubles, limited skills, all-member battles, attribute battles, etc. There is still hope for tactics. We are all adults. Without tactics, wouldn't it still be the way primary school students play? Is there any need to be a victorious general? Losing is normal, and you can also sum up your shortcomings. 3. In terms of travel, you can have travel partners for a short period of time. For example, in a certain forest, you temporarily travel with someone for some reason. 4. As for mythical beasts, there is no need to conquer them, just gaining friendship is enough. 5. In terms of competition, if the third place is a bell, and you really need it, then there is no need to write that the protagonist inexplicably got the first place, and then say, I really just want to be the third place. ① It's unnecessary, ② it's a bit disgusting to watch too much. That's it. Let's just mention these. I'm just making a suggestion. It's up to the author whether you adopt it or not. Just write it according to your own wishes. I'm just making a suggestion.

The double heroine is the biggest flaw

I think this author's writing is pretty good, and the number of words is large. Why is the level so low? Has Pokémon literature really become a niche literature? It shouldn't be

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The hearty Pokémon tactical game and the delicate growth line are very attractive to me. The process of the Pokémon growing up from troubled childhood and experiencing spiritual transformation is also full of bonds and passion. However, when the protagonist deals with the ambiguous relationship between the two female characters, this harem plot instantly tears away the sense of reality of the story. If the author's characterization style of the relationship between Pokémon and trainers were continued, this Pokémon world should have conveyed pure love and companionship; such frivolous emotional treatment not only failed to live up to the solid portrayal of Pokémon in the early stage, but also tarnished the romantic core of trainers and Pokémon fighting side by side - deviating from the original intention.

Almost finished reading. I found that every time I encountered an incident, the protagonist entered passively or was used as bait or sold without knowing it. Is this feeling really not angry at all? Does the protagonist have any temper at all?

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Is the heroine Korni or Nazi?

I finally made it to the point where the great cruelty evolved, and I shed tears. By the way, the first picture is the inspiration for evolving the crustacean.

Although I like Pokémon very much, this book has too many secondary settings that make Pokémon become bad.

The writing is good, but as I read it, I found it unappealing. Why?

I read the last book after it was finished, so there was no problem in reading it in one sitting. This book is a catch-up read, and since I'm catching up on several novels at the same time, it becomes a big problem. There are too many characteristics that refer to characters, such as a tuft of green hair, a red afro, a boy with a billiard cue, etc., Or even just "someone". Not everyone has watched the special episode, and not everyone remembers the personalities and characteristics of the supporting characters in the main work. In addition, it is mixed with some supporting characters written by the author, making it difficult to identify who is who. It would be better to write more names of the supporting characters. The subject is omitted too much, and the protagonist is often described as doing a lot of things without even the name of the protagonist appearing, which makes people feel like they are scratching the surface. There are too many descriptions and too little, resulting in long paragraphs of descriptions that are obviously very exciting but no summary, and the emotions cannot be released. Especially during the battle, there are only descriptions of various special effects and no explanations of moves. In addition, the reasons for team battles are confusing, and it is all about guessing which Pokémon uses which skill. There are too many jumping paragraphs, just like fragments being put together one after another, without connection or the connection is postponed, and the emotions cannot be accumulated smoothly. It is common to first describe a result, then put a separator, write "(a certain period of time) before" and then start the description process, especially in the same chapter (such as the chapter about challenging the Citron Gym), it is nondescript and meaningless. There are too many adverbial attributives. I dream back to the time when I read translations. This way of writing is really not suitable for online writing. Just like Wang Guowei's comment on Jiang Baishi, "Separation", the plot is not aggrieved, and the writing is also good, but it seems to be in the fog, and the emotions are not up and running smoothly.

Is the main dream monster a bit weak? To be honest, the giant sting wasp is more worth cultivating than the dream monster, but the dream monster also has the ancient fluttering hair. I wonder if it can evolve in the future.

I feel that the Nazi in the author's works is too petite and doesn't look like a woman🤔️

Um! ? How do you feel? Where have you seen this introduction?

The writing is very nice, but it always seems weird. Many major events and battles are not brought into the protagonist, but are more wanted to be brought into the villain. The order of priority is a bit confusing, and I always feel that the protagonist is like a sheep except when killing the villain, and is bullied. It feels like the author wants to make the protagonist very smart, but cannot write it like that. Everything else is good.

After reading the free chapter, there is something wrong with the arrangement of the two heroines. You said that Nazi has improved the protagonist's ability or something, which is reasonable. I can imagine the future development, but I don't understand the other one. It was arranged inexplicably. I just said that I have known each other for a long time and we are not childhood sweethearts.

The writing is okay, but the key problem is that there are too many villain scenes, the power of good and evil is unbalanced, and villains suddenly appear in a good daily drama. Once I get there, I don't want to watch it.

It's a very interesting Pokémon story. The male protagonist's travels and life, his daily life with Pokémon, and his relationship with the female protagonists are all very warm. The shortcomings are that the emotional scenes are not smooth enough and a bit stiff, but they are much better than the emotional scenes in some books. Also, the description of the battle scenes is a bit middling. It's still good, I hope you, the author, will work harder 👏

The Ice Light of the Elf Shines The Dark King of the Elf The former is a new book by an old author, and the latter is a newcomer. The writing style is not bad.

You all play that Pokémon battle game. If you want to play it, please recommend it.