Immortality Begins with Alchemy

It's a bit poisonous. One is that the protagonist takes in this mother and son. Whether in real life or reading novels, everyone is more accepting of marrying a mother and daughter or simply a widow. Marrying a widow is very popular next door and people often complain about it. You have a son. The second is the relationship with Boss Hu. You asked Shao Juan to run errands and deliver elixirs to Hu. You knew clearly that it was Boss Hu who planned the death of the mother and son. You don't need to let them hide or keep a distance. Are the supporting characters so mindless?

How dare you write about such a vicious point as taking in a widow and raising a son? He was also cheated by the widow's son and hated by the widow's son. It can be said to be the most vicious book of its kind that I have read recently.

The son is a wolf in the mountains, and when he succeeds, he becomes rampant. The golden boudoir flower and willow quality will last for a long time. This is what the protagonist is like. It's nothing. He actually went out to take advantage of others and specifically said that no one would be killed. If he had to be a bit of a character, he might become something! However, I think that when the author is creating this character, he must not be both at the same time, otherwise, there will be contradictions!

The biggest failure of this book is that it contains a mother and son, and a son who hates him the most! Rubbish! Shennong was poisoned to death for twenty years

The first three chapters are really poisonous, a poison that even Shen Nong can't resist.

Too stupid not worth watching

I am speechless. If you are a cheap father and your cheap son still hates you, then it would be best to raise a white-eyed wolf and kill you.

I don't know what I want to write until the end, what does it have to do with practicing alchemy...

Perhaps because of the new books being added to the library, there have been more comments (paragraph reviews). Anyway, I have my thoughts, and you have yours, so if you really have any thoughts, feel free to speak out! Whether we agree, criticize or accuse, we will continue to accept it. Thunder, rain and dew are all God's grace. Also, although there are panels, it is actually written in the style of mortals. The author himself deliberately wrote that "people are coerced by events and have to make decisions based on circumstances, as well as the sense of the passage of time." Because of this, there is a lot of foreshadowing, and it is not possible to rise up and down and kill people with eyes open, but in any case, it is generally in the direction of a serious drama. Readers, please rest assured. In addition, if you have any comments or suggestions, you can leave a comment. I will read it and absorb the ones I think are meaningful. I will also correct the mistakes pointed out if they are reasonable. In any case, since the author chooses to sell, I still have to have a minimum attitude. Finally, I have finished writing it anyway, so I am licking my face and begging readers who think it is worth reading to save it, read it, and vote for it for free. The author is very grateful to everyone here! ! !

Trash, recognized as a supercilious son.

The system is a modern technology product. If it is mixed with Xiu Xian, it feels like playing the game too much will make you addicted.

I hope the author makes the protagonist a little more selfish! Otherwise, there is no way to survive. Don't think that I am setting the stage for a change of character later. Most people don't have the patience to give up as soon as they see the Holy Mother dragging a family with her.

Let me reply again. The protagonist of this article is an orphan. Although the author himself has no experience of being an orphan, I personally think that the character of an orphan must lack love. And I think that if you think about it, the orphan must be "cruel" to some extent. I also think that the orphan must be confused. "Lack of love", "cruel-hearted", "confused and firm at the same time" The above are the three characters that the author set for the protagonist in the early stage. As for what you think of the protagonist from the article, I can't say, because I also admit that I am lacking in written expression and plot design. In short, it is still the same sentence, everyone comes and goes as he pleases, thunder, rain and dew are God's blessings, just do whatever you want!

The sword knocks on the gate of heaven, the flow of mortals, the sword cultivator, the decisive killing. Please send me a wave of support from all Taoist brothers, thank you, thank you.

I have written 80,000 words, but I still have some readers. I would like to say "thank you" to everyone here. Your continued reading is my motivation to continue writing! Up to now, there are only a few words and a lot of questions. Here I will explain the objections of some readers and why I made the following settings: 1. Why set up a character like "ex-wife Ye Qianhui"? Me: The "immortality" in the title of the book is not just to gain popularity. I really want to write about the feeling of "years". For this I need to set the benchmark and someone needs to witness the rise of "Protagonist Su Yi". As the protagonist, Su Yi's life is destined to be "upward", and he will go up along with those who are close to him, while the life of those who are far away from the protagonist, that is, the counterexample (Ye Qianhui) is destined to go down, so there is a contrast. The identity of "ex-wife" is set to increase the logic and rationality of the drama, so that people will not continue to pay attention to completely unrelated people. 2. Regarding the combination of Su Yi and "Shao Juan". Me: First of all, let me declare that the reason why I write this is not to cause trouble for everyone, but entirely to "set the logic" to be reasonable. Personally, I think it's hard for everyone to accept this because they don't understand the character Su Yi and don't start from his perspective. The protagonist Su Yi was born as an "orphan" and entered a completely unfamiliar environment after two lifetimes. His innate characteristics such as "lack of love", "self-improvement" and "fear" are all destined. Even if he suddenly obtains a golden finger, his "personality" will not be drastically changed. On the other hand, this article assumes that monks in the Qi training period, although their status is higher than ordinary people, are actually at the "bottom level" in the world of cultivation, and they have not even fully reached the "threshold of cultivation." The "bottom level" is destined to be "chaotic", and the monks who live at the bottom are destined to be "chaotic". They are no different from ordinary people. They all take "survival and continuation" as the basic starting point. As long as everything they do conforms to this "point", it will be "reasonable and possible." The purpose of setting up the role of Shao Juan (who died with a child) is to highlight the complexity of the protagonist's character. "Orphan", "Travel", "Strange World", "Little Ability" First of all, it can be determined that the protagonist Su Yi has emotional needs and desires to "love and be loved". He is a living person, and it is very reasonable to have such needs. A person came to a strange world and happened to meet someone like Shao Juan. Shao Juan took the initiative and he did not refuse. The relationship between them did not start with "passion", and perhaps it was not that "pure", so only time can confirm the relationship between them. There are difficulties, and the first one is the problem of "stepson", but love life can never be smooth sailing. Or why not design a "perfect" character for the protagonist? For the sake of drama, a person who is destined to live forever falls in love with someone, and in the end the lover dies. This is meaningless. It is basically a "pendant". (It's not that I don't know that this is a poisonous point for some readers, and it may be that the younger readers are, the harder it is to accept this. After all, younger readers have not experienced the hardships of life and will not really understand the underlying logic of life. But after careful consideration, we still follow this setting. Everyone has their own reasons for whether they can accept it or not) 3. Regarding the issue of "panel". If the "immortality" in the title of the book has some "original meaning", then the "panel" is indeed suspected of gaining popularity. I just chose a golden finger that is more acceptable or popular among everyone. However, I still need to explain the usage of "panel". It is briefly mentioned in the article. Some readers said that they cannot understand it. Here is an explanation: After the level of spells or skills is sufficient, you can directly upgrade them through the panel. Whether it is a spell or a skill, as long as it is successfully completed once, it is the entry level; ten times of small success; a hundred times of mastery; a thousand times of great achievement. Well, these are the main issues at present. If there are more concentrated objections in the future, I will explain them again. Finally, I still want to ask everyone for votes for collection, follow-up reading, and recommendation. I will try my best to write a plot that everyone will like. I would like to thank everyone in advance!

A new author dares to write about emotions when he first starts writing. Big author authors are afraid of overturning. They can't become fat after one bite, so they can't take their time.

I thought it was okay, but unexpectedly, it was a bit poisonous, so I quit it.

The speed of practice is too slow. At least the foundation should be established before the age of thirty, and the golden elixir should be established before the age of sixty.

Wouldn't it be good to just get a golden finger for cultivating immortality? The system is just a modern technological product and seems to be artificially intelligent.

At the beginning, I started this book with the idea that I had the ambition to live forever and would not be afraid of heavy rain or heavy wind. I also predicted from the beginning that the results would not be good. After all, the author's personal ability is very limited and the writing style is not very pleasing. But today when I saw a brother who was a recent reader and thought that the protagonist Su Yi was too much like a virgin, I realized that there was a big problem with my writing method. So I want to share with you the original intention and some ideas of writing this story. At the same time, I will also make a summary myself, so that if I open the next book, I will try to avoid detours. My initial setting was "the experience of a time traveler practicing immortality." What I wanted was to describe everything the protagonist experienced as objectively as possible while following the logic of the setting. I personally prefer that "whatever a person has experienced will lead to what kind of consequences." Just like Jia Baoyu, he grew up in doting and was overprotected, so when he grew up, he neither showed the abilities that a child of a big family should have nor had the minimum responsibility. I personally think that the result of becoming a monk and escaping from the world is more reasonable. Lin Daiyu is the white lotus in the author's heart, so it is difficult for her to live in troubled times. Wu Song had anger in his heart, which made him ruthless; Lin Chong had greed in his heart, which made him cowardly. Zhuge Liang is a father and a mother by himself. He should not be exhausted, or even deserve to be cruel. It is precisely because of this tendency that when I wrote this book, I also thought about using "experience to promote development." Past experiences lead to current choices and results, and current experiences will also affect the future to a certain extent. In fact, both I and everyone who reads the book know that the protagonist's life trajectory is all the way up. After all, this is an online novel. When I first wrote this book, I also positioned it as a "relaxing and casual gadget." What I want to say is, It's just like watching TV, just watching "other people's stories" and "the life experience of a certain time traveler" in your spare time. ... The writing is a bit messy, I wrote it wherever I thought, and I don't know whether the specific meaning was expressed. Let's make some summaries below. If there is another book, try to absorb some experiences and lessons. 1. The setting problem of the character Ye Qianhui. At first, I was hesitant about "the original ex-wife, who finally betrayed her" or "the original pursuer, who couldn't get what he asked for, and ran away in anger." Now it seems that the setting of this character is not cautious enough, and there should be a better choice. 2. The protagonist's marriage and heir issues. At first, I was thinking more about how to end these relationships (mainly because of the difficulty of writing. I know I can't write it when I have a family to support). After all, you can't give up easily if you have children, especially if the protagonist has certain abilities. Looking at it now, it is better not to write it at all and give up the fullness of the character. If you decide to write, then you must monitor the fullness of the supporting characters and give them a sufficient reason to love or be loved. 3. The problem of theme selection. If you choose a good subject matter, you can give up logical authenticity to a certain extent, which will make it easier to write and more acceptable to readers. Of course, you must also consider the compatibility issue with the individual. If you can't write it, it's useless to say anything. This book was written because I couldn't outrun others on the big track, so I thought of walking on a small road first to practice my skills. This was a choice I had foreseen from the beginning, so I am not too affected by the unsatisfactory results now. I hope I will have a better choice next time. ...... These are the things for now, and I will add them later. Finally, set a small goal for yourself. I remember watching Mr. Shen's "Baicai" many years ago I still can't forget that feeling. I hope that I can write such a return to nature in my lifetime (although it is known that it will be difficult to complete the series in my lifetime, but I still have the goal, come on!)