Red Dead Redemption: The Golden Empire

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The scene where the gang breaks up is really stiff, and the pure protagonist's bastard spirit is overwhelming. It seems that the protagonist is strategizing, but in fact everyone is wise. A few points to mention: 1. Arthur and John took the protagonist to question Dutch in the tavern because the protagonist said that Dutch had hidden money. Not to mention that Arthur still trusts Dutch at this time. Your protagonist has only known Arthur for a long time. Why should Arthur trust your protagonist but not his boss? 2. Bring the protagonist to a face-to-face showdown. It is said that there is a problem within the gang, why do you need to bring you as an outsider to participate? From Arthur's perspective, bring an outsider to question the boss in front of the whole gang. If what the protagonist tells is a lie, what will Arthur do? The Arthur in me is not that stupid. 3. Shadi Valkyrie leaves. Dutch just saved your life, Sadie, and gave you food, shelter, and psychological counseling. But to add insult to injury, you patted your butt and left on the spot. You wanted to slap your savior in the face, right? And even if Dutch doesn't go to Tahiti, Dutch and the Odrix gang are sworn enemies. Sadie and Dutch have a common enemy. Why should they join you as the protagonist? 4. John's family. If I remember correctly, John had little contact with the protagonist before, and at best he was just a familiar face. But the protagonist's bastard temper was shaken, and John's family followed the protagonist. To be honest. John's family had just received a large amount of money, so they followed the stranger. They were still an unknown gang and were not afraid of being blamed. 5. Arthur leaves. I haven't read the rest of it, so I don't know how the author arranged Arthur, so I won't comment. I don't know what the author means by being so hurried🤷‍♂️. Scenes like gang breakup should be better arranged, with gang characters confronting each other, and emotional entanglements. Of course, if the author just gathers the gang members around him as tool men like stamp collectors, and then comes up with a passionate adventure story, I didn't say it, it's just the second Dutch.

The author's own surname is Song? Otherwise, I would not be able to understand why so many readers suggested changing the name of the protagonist in the early stage, so why did they insist on not changing it. This name probably won't be supported by many readers. It's not consistent with the name and it's not convenient for people to join the Party (white people in the West in the 1900s used Chinese names).

You can kill about 20 bandits by yourself, and then let the sheriff block the door of a bar. How ridiculous is this logic?!

I like to read western cowboy novels, but I don't like to see so much romance. As a result, the heroine appeared in Chapter 26, and she was forced to do it. Wouldn't it be possible to write without a woman? Take an adventure and take a woman with you. A bounty hunter brings a woman with him. I don't mean to look down on women. A normal team would be great, no problem, but you lick one of them hard. It was really unpleasant to watch.

Just the name of the protagonist eliminated 80% of the people

A Chinese name suddenly popped up in Western Cowboy, which is similar to the Chinese emperor's name Johnson.

In fact, I was more interested in watching it at first, but when I saw the name of the protagonist, it really stuck in my mouth and I was unhappy. . . Which fairy tale novel has the protagonists named John Zhao and George Qian? It's okay to dissuade most of the readers with just one name, maybe there is some obsession. 😰😰😰

Those who haven't played Big Cousin won't have any feelings for it. The author still needs to think more about how to tell a good story to people who have never played the game.