Mortal's Road to Money

What did you write? It's a mess.

Today's novels are really unreliable. Even if you are a time traveler who ran to Tainan Valley alone when you were only eight years old, you are not afraid of laughing your head off. Let me ask you, are you going to eat outside? Or are you not afraid of someone killing a child casually? If you encounter an accident and die without the ability to resist, if you still have a system, you can't go older and at least practice some martial arts. If your family has money, you can't have someone escort you wherever you go? If you have to be alone, can't you use gold and silver to collect elixirs in the world and sell them?

Go move bricks. You can earn more by moving bricks than by writing books.

Li Huayuan already had the golden elixir, and Hongfu was still building the foundation. How could the golden elixir be late 80 years later?

It's really intoxicating to write a novel about cultivating immortals as a martial arts novel.

It's okay to create an original world, why are you trying to pull off the skin of a mortal? Selling dog meat for sale!

The writing is good, but it looks a bit awkward. There are a lot of modern tones and words in it, as well as the names of various characters. Is Jackie Chan your classmate? What the hell is 10 years and 4 years old and 15 years old? They will weld your door shut. These things look very dramatic. Try not to write about brothers and sisters. As long as they are not blood relatives, use senior brothers, senior sisters, junior brothers, seniors and fellow Taoists instead. Use the words to bring the protagonist into the story as much as possible. Don't use your ordinary language. I hope the writing will be better and better.

The krypton gold system is a very good golden finger. It is written around earning spiritual stones. The Immortal Way of Immortality is also a krypton gold system. The author can refer to it. When it will be on the shelves, I will give you an initial order!

Why don't you be more rigorous? Just after you say you can't read, you test your spiritual roots, take the exercises, and practice qi to the first level. His father also immediately gave the ancestral storage bag to a child. The child went up the mountain to practice by himself. You have hundreds of slaves, and he ran up the mountain without anyone following him. Is it reasonable to produce such a treasure for hundreds of years? It seems like he is rushing to catch the train.

There are too many modern words, it's a bit of a show, Arabic numerals, Washington

In the later stage of Jindan, he also pretended to be a mortal to enter Qixuanmen. . . What's the point? , Is it necessary? The previous article said that you should prepare your Nascent Soul early to prevent the evil way from invading you uncontrollably. To earn spiritual stones, what are you doing in these chapters? . . . Can't stand it anymore

300,000 Words, it should be on the shelves, brother!

Um, you are writing martial arts novels about cultivating immortals! It seems embarrassing at first glance. What kind of dental shop pays money for food? When you go to the Red Buddha Cave, you knock on the door. It's funny.

The verbosity and confusion are also a genre. There are some traces of the lives of the lower class people. There is no amazing writing style, only traces of trivial life.

How strange! Can't attribute points be placed on exercises? Even if you can't increase your cultivation level, your skill proficiency will still be enough

There are so many words, why haven't they been published yet?

Elementary school composition, is it self-paying with the monthly pass?

Let's not talk about the content first. This update speed is better than other mortal fan authors

Now, just eat up your perfect attendance. Your points will be updated on the 19th. 100 Points can be exchanged for a leave request!

The author's writing is really good. I borrowed the building to advertise "I Simulated Cultivation as a Mortal"

It doesn't feel like the world of mortals cultivating immortals at all. Whenever the male protagonist has something to do, he has to find his friends, the leader, and the ancestor~ I'm convinced, and he also has to find the master where he practices. He doesn't know when he was tricked. I feel that there are no conspiracy theories in the biography of mortals cultivating immortals that you wrote. The original novel is full of conspiracy theories. Since you are a fan, but you write very stubbornly and everything goes smoothly.

Starting next month, the author remembers to update 4,000 words every day. Each chapter must be at least 2,000 words. Otherwise, if it is less than 2,000 words, it will be counted as 1,000. For example, if it is 1,999 words, it will be counted as 1,000. If you write more than 2,000 words, the system may block you, and you will lose 2,000!

The writing style is too immature. The more I read this article, the more uncomfortable I feel. I originally had more than a dozen monthly votes, but it seems I can't vote for them.

The writing style is a bit immature and the sentences are too casual. Do you use punctuation to make up the word count?

I'll push down the new book, "The Legend of Mortal Feiyu", just click on my avatar or the starting point to search directly. Fans, support me and witness together how Li Feiyu, who kills people and sets fire, gallops through the world of immortality. (The protagonist is stable, the IQ of the protagonist and supporting characters is online, the mentality grows with the plot of the story, the characters are flesh and blood, friends are welcome to come and give opinions)

Change the name to Family Fun Cultivation of Immortality. You have never seen Mortal Cultivation of Immortality.

The road is long and long, I will search up and down 😁

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

The Five Spiritual Roots persuaded more than half of them to retreat. Now who cares about the counterattack of useless people, even if there is a systematic golden finger? Can I think that you suppress the protagonist because he has a system?