Dangerous Sea

The writing is good, please come on the author (ง •̀_•́)ง.

I would like to trouble all readers not to keep reading. My recent reading scores have been too poor and I have not been able to get recommended spots. It is updated every day and everyone can give me a follow-up reading! 😭

He has been threatened all the time, all kinds of threats, constant threats, right, and pig's feet still have no ability to resist. Every time he is threatened, he pulls out the gun and does not use it. He only shouts "fetters"? If I take action once, I will not discuss posting this

I've read over 70 chapters and can't stand it anymore. The author's writing is good, and the structure of the story is complete. It was quite interesting at first, but I feel that the protagonist is going back to life, he is indecisive, and he is restricted everywhere. At the beginning, he said how he is so good, and he has experienced so many things, and he can still be soft-hearted. He must not be like a battle-hardened old captain.

Brother, there is a thing in psychology called diminishing marginal utility. If you take out the same thing and write about it for a long time, the coolness itself will become poisonous. Originally, themes like navigation can be very close to life, but it had to be written in a Western fantasy style. It's not impossible, but there are too few highlights. I have read it carefully and found that this book is very familiar with the environment, characterization, and combat. But the failure lies here, it continues to stimulate the readers' senses, and everyone will get used to it after reading too much. Once you get used to it, you need more refined descriptions to stay alive, which is a vicious circle. In the end, this is probably the reason why the book died and was discarded. The above are words from the bottom of my heart.

AI painting Celtic design, a bit young.

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Rowling's character picture, the previous one was really eye-catching

The book is still very good and the writing style is sophisticated, but it seems boring without being exciting. I don't feel like I am looking forward to the next chapter to be updated quickly. If the author wants to continue reading, it is best to improve it.

Rock's character design seems to lack a bit of temperament.

There is a gram element, so what abilities are assigned to the protagonist?

It has writing but no ideas, pictures but no rhythm, and plot but no excitement. Tepid. . .

Has the protagonist suffered from the Church of the Deep Sea before? There was no foreshadowing. He showed the feeling of being an unfair and sworn enemy right from the beginning. It was expected that he was threatened.

After it is released, I will start to revise the book. There will be less updates in the past few days. I will try my best to cut off the bad spots in the front so that the reading will be smoother. (Of course I won't tell you that I am actually still preparing a new book. This book makes me want to cry.) All in all, this book will definitely have 300,000 words on the shelves, and it may be published in two volumes in the future. I would like to thank my book friends for their support. The original plan for this book was to write more than two million words, but I can only compress it to less than 1.5 Million words, but I will still try my best to write this book well👌

I think there seems to be a similar game, I forgot what it was called. A game about sailing in a strange underground ocean.

I personally feel that the author's description of historical features is not very rich. It seems that he looks down on businessmen a little, or he doesn't want to become a noble class. This doesn't seem normal to me anyway. The concept of knighthood is not introduced. In the Western Middle Ages, the Knights were very popular and an important force. For example, Vasco da Gama and Columbus were both members of the Knights of different countries. There is not much written about pirates. Foreign invasions can also be appropriately introduced, such as Normans and Arabs. The pursuit of wealth and money opens up business channels. And for the church, it should be used. The protagonist seems to be very weak against the forces of the church. I feel like the author could give it a try and directly take over the power of the church, change the outlook, and have some manpower and wealth. It can be written that the protagonist uses the ritual to control a meat ball. In the presence of the church, the lump of flesh became a human being. This man killed the original bishop, and the believers were convinced. The protagonist is behind the scenes. Or you can write that the protagonist discovers another plant, either tobacco or sugar cane, and then the businessman invests, and the protagonist forms a chamber of commerce or a company. Then you can also write about Christianity. You can say that there is a Christian force on the island and the protagonist is supported. Then you can get married and get the other person's island. Normally, if there is really no one in the other person's family, the protagonist can get the other person's grandfather or grandfather's island. He can be called a king directly. The author seems to be very reluctant to come into contact with religious forces. In fact, there must be some.

The author's writing style is really good. The author takes advantage of the lack of words to polish the plot and details. Too many bugs

I've read a few chapters, and the writing is sophisticated, so go for it, author!