Don't Mess With That Turtle

I finally understood that this kind of novel about strange beasts cannot touch on human beings. When it comes to human beings, it feels like a fantasy novel with a deformed protagonist, except that the protagonist is physically disabled and looks like an animal. Looking back, I have indeed read a lot of books on alien beasts. Some of the better ones dealt with beasts from beginning to end, and the humans they encountered were either villains or sidekicks. As for those alien beasts who hang out with people and can't wait to turn back into human bodies even a hundred chapters ago, they always drive and enjoy themselves while writing, and then collapse. Of course this is my own reading experience. Maybe I am short-sighted and made a mistake.

The leader's wife died, the leader faked his death and escaped, and the shadow was behind the scenes. The little girl recognized the turtle as her father, and the journey of being a daddy turtle officially started. A few years later... (The little girl) the empress unified the world! In the post-federal era, does the era of magic, magic, and empress exist? Keep arguing! Until the Empress Monument appeared, the world knew that her achievements were all related to the Treasure of the Divine Turtle. The whole federation is in a state of excitement, and this begins the era of turtle hunting in the universe...

For me, the biggest poisonous point is the wife. No matter how you fill the gap behind, but in the front, you know that they are a family, but you are still kind to you, and you still have unreasonable thoughts. I really can't stand the three views. Even if you set it to be pregnant before marriage, it's okay to have no father. Everyone has one father, and you still want to be his father!

Let me tell you what I think of these recent chapters. The story in the fantasy world is not much to say, it is very well written. It just happened at the wrong time. The battle was at its climax, and suddenly a heartwarming personal trial came. To be honest, it was very uncomfortable (especially since the trial was still very long). Finally, I want to complain, Guigui has been plotted by his own people again, so he might as well rebel against the sect!

This novel is not a novel about exotic beasts, or should be said to be a different kind of fairy tale. However, it is criticized because of the reader group. In other words, as a fairy tale or a fantasy novel, it is good. The characters are very three-dimensional and interesting, even if there are some comparisons in the middle. It's a more common micro-master plot, but his purpose is to fill holes, which is understandable. Personally, I think the meaning of the alien beast novel itself is to be unruly, and it should have a kind of pleasure brought by barbaric destruction, which has been a special feature in the early years. This is a very cool novel, with no intrigues, just savage desires and destruction. Therefore, many authors who want to write in this way have a misunderstanding that they make the protagonist too like a human being. This does not mean that the book is not good-looking. As a traditional upgrade novel and a fantasy system of cultivating immortals, he has There are many advantages, but as his core theme, the alien beasts themselves have conflicts. I have said before that the protagonist is too human-like, and the entanglements caused by people will always bring about conflicts in the theme. It is not that there is no way to solve it, but that way of handling will lead to harmony.

The protagonist's sense of presence in this book is really low. Every time the protagonist and the villain are pecking each other, there are a bunch of big guys around them every day. How do you ask the readers to take on the role? The most important thing is that the protagonist is a time-traveler with a cheating device, and his training route is actually arranged. Can you believe it? Even if this is the author's foreshadowing, you are writing a fantasy novel. Fantasy novels must first highlight the word "cool". I have not seen this at all, and how many readers can stick to it. The protagonist was a waste before it was released. After reading it, it is still the same (mainly because the boss appears too frequently). It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist. There is also the issue of female protagonists. No matter what type of novel, I do not reject multiple female protagonists, but one of the female protagonists in this book, Ji Feixue, appears so suddenly (does the author mean that this is foreshadowing and there is an arrangement later?). The key is that "Ji Feixue" makes me feel like a brothel girl. Like this, the main reason is that the author wrote Su Huanian very well (mainly because of the contrast), and there should be a Bai Ling who did not appear in the back... The author dug a bit too many holes, but these are okay, as long as the protagonist cannot be written as such a waste, this is a fantasy novel, and "coolness" is the first priority.

Faster and faster! I hope the author can write well and not turn it into a pornographic article. I'd better forget about Yaya's mother. I think it's a bit poisonous

I read it in one go, what can I say? There is a reversal, but maybe the protagonist is too weak and the existence of the protagonist is not strong. When a Qing Yuan fights, it feels like the protagonist is being pressured too hard. The supporting characters are well drawn and quite interesting. It's not your ordinary fast food.

The writing is good, but the father figure should be removed.

I have caught up with the update now. Overall, I think it is a good book. Although the author is a bit green in design, the writing style is passable for me. Currently, book reviews are a mirror, but it does not mean that every mirror can correctly reflect the real problems of the book. I hope that while paying attention to the comments, the author will stick to his core and not suddenly change the general direction. In other words, the author can regard writing this book as an upgrade, and the criticized parts in the book as experience. No one can eat a big fat man in one sitting. The author writes according to his own style, learns lessons, and will naturally write more mature books in the future To put it simply, the author needs to write down-to-earth, and don't overdo it because of book reviews. At the same time, as the author's first book, the author should expose his own problems. It will be better to make a reflection and summary after writing.