Mysterious Resurrection: Knock on the Door

Come on! I finally found out that the positive energy has mysteriously revived. Other fanfics all follow the protagonist's personality, and it's too boring to write a thousand rules.

The protagonist is an outlier. His emotions can be said to be cold-blooded and he usually has no idea of ​​saving the world. Also, the original headquarters is really not that good and people don't like it very much. Secondly, aliens are not invincible and will be suppressed. They also have great shortcomings and will be constantly eroded by tricks and their emotions will eventually become tricks with memories.

In the original drama, there was constant internal fighting in the headquarters, which was chilling. Human nature is not that beautiful and selfless. The protagonist looks like a fool

Let's take an analogy from your start. After the academician was reborn, he felt that he had to contribute to the country, and then decided to go to the countryside to teach and asked the village chief to help him solve the problem of three meals a day. In exchange, he would train pillars for the country.

Am I cold? I feel like no one is reading the books I wrote.

,,, After thinking about it for three or four days, I came up with "I want to contribute to this country, I want to join the headquarters.",,, Don't you think it's a bit embarrassing, author? It's not that your three views are too righteous, but that you are moved to tears before your emotions are in place.,, Besides, is it appropriate for you, a boss from the Republic of China period who had a ceiling in the first generation at the beginning, to become your younger brother in the third generation? A time traveler, it seems like he can't move without anyone commanding him. In short, it's a very bad start.

The one who knocks on the door, the one who blocks the door, the one who opens the door. . . . . . What else

As a newbie, I would like to give you some suggestions. First, remember to use symbols during dialogue. Many of your dialogues are not marked with punctuation marks. Second, you need to prepare a note about the character. What is the character of the protagonist? Then talk to the characters in the book based on the protagonist's personality. What happened in the plot that caused the protagonist's personality to change? The same goes for the supporting characters, what kind of characters are they? How to write, for example, Ye Zhen's chuunibyou in the original work, the author writes that it is indeed a chuunibyou. Thirdly, sometimes the first person is used, which is very dramatic when switched. Fourthly, you need to prepare an outline to control the direction of the plot, and set the character, plot, and combat power of the characters in the book. Of course, if it is a fan, there is no need for a detailed outline, but you also need to add an original plot. What is the general direction? You still need to think about a lot of details.

I understand. Dear brothers and sisters, you can scold me if you want. You can scold me. It will only make me grow. But I feel very uncomfortable when there is no movement at all. I can't write a book at all. My mind is full of thoughts such as whether I am cold, whether anyone will read this book, how I want to write, etc. After scolding, it is best to give some mental damage compensation, such as rewards, monthly recommendations, etc.

It still looks like a running account now. If it still doesn't work, I'm still learning. Can you give me some monthly tickets and rewards? (I'm a bit slow in updating because I'm constantly studying.)

This writing style makes my scalp numb with embarrassment. The subject matter is not bad, but the writing style is really written for the sake of writing. Not to mention how gorgeous or personal the words are, but there is still something wrong with this kind of writing that spreads over thousands of miles.

Zhang Dong is about to die, you can also go to Zhang Dong and let him control his own tricks. Anyway, you are also tricked. Besides, Zhang Dong is also the number one person in the Republic of China. With his tricks, you are not afraid of any ghosts or ghost paintings.

I don't think it's very rigorous. It's not that easy to achieve heterogeneity. You have to control at least one consciousness-type ghost to be considered a heterogeneity. Just like Tong Qian, even though both ghosts died, she didn't dare to say she was a heterogeneity. Not many of the captains in the later period dared to say that they had become a heterogeneity. Yang Jian also controlled three consciousness-type ghosts, namely the newspaper ghost, the ghost shadow head and the music box, to achieve a balance of consciousness and become a heterogeneity.

Does writing a fanfic count as plagiarism? Quite interesting setting