Duel City, Defeating Yu-Gi-Oh with Sister Zhuli

I just started reading this book. The author has a good understanding of Yu-Gi-Oh! And the battle design is very good. But there are many problems. First of all, it is not good enough, and there are no lines to describe the battle, which makes it look like plain water (who plays Yu-Gi-Oh and doesn't like Sister Shui's style?). Secondly, it has the strongest deck, so it has to constantly strengthen the supporting roles. I only do yy on a daily basis, but I can only say that there is still a lot of room for improvement in my writing skills. Finally, I would like to ask if anyone has any Yu-Gi-Oh stories that are more popular, rather than straightforward card-playing stories.

See the tears and discover the keywords. The more you resist, the more you feel the unfathomable depth of tears. The best way to fight Zhulei is to join Zhulei. A serious statement: I don't want to play Zhulei, but I just need to understand the operation of Zhulei in order to resist Zhulei. My anti-bead method is to add beads of tears and let the beads of tears grow bigger on the pie chart. If it gets bigger, it will be cut off. The above are all quotes from Kangzhu. As for me, I don't want to play Zhulei at all. I just love Bai Maomei Ka.

The writing is very interesting, and the interaction is quite entertaining. The main thing is that if the protagonist's deck is just a set of tears, he will definitely get tired after watching it too much. The plots of the first three games of Yu-Gi-Oh are just interoperable. You can use the event of Paradox in the theater version to have Judai and Brother Crab appear on the stage to open new maps and decks, or you can transform into a grandpa to cheat and update the deck for the protagonists. I like to watch the protagonist use his own reinforcement cards to fight BOSS😃

Evil fusion dimension players! Come and feel the wrath of the super dimension!

I just read a book. The protagonist claims to be able to make people cry violently, but all he uses are ZCG's fake cards.

The protagonist's reaction is really not good. The things and reactions inside are really embarrassing and a bit disgusting. Just post it and don't describe it so disgustingly. You can go into heat anytime and anywhere. Are you an octopus or a rabbit? The protagonist is too obscene and has double standards. I'm not reading comics with the mature male label on e-sites. Can my reaction be a little more normal?

Just play cards, play cards, do a lot of emotional scenes that are not there, and I can't write about the emotions. I skip them as much as possible when I see them. The main reason is that I should write as little as possible.

Have people in the future discovered him? Taiyi Organization?

The book can't go very far because it relies entirely on Gee's temporary enthusiasm. The timing is actually very awkward. The strength of the teardrops is too different from the cards of this era. Moreover, the language setting at the beginning is useless and there is no deck setting, which is crazy to destroy the rhythm. The deck is assembled, resulting in some rare or exclusive decks that can be obtained as casually as cabbages. The protagonist can get more powerful cards of the current era at once, and can only continuously improve the deck strength of the subsequent characters, otherwise the whole process will be the main focus. Corner pile tomb, and then one kill, what should I do if I can't write anymore, and then I start to suppress my strength, such as the forced verbal rules in about twenty chapters Then the plot becomes more and more violent, and there are more and more new cards. It's over, and I can only add stronger off-field power or new cards to the opponent. Then the plot becomes more and more difficult to write. Just thinking about how to strengthen the opponent is reasonable, which is probably much simpler than writing the protagonist, and then it becomes a mess or eunuch

I feel that the author needs to read other well-written Yu-Gi-Oh fanfics, otherwise the daily plot is very awkward and has many poisonous points.

You really have to dress up in women's clothing, it's disgusting, right?😤

I should start writing it from gx. The duel and deck series are a bit more complete, and the protagonist's tears are not too dramatic.

The earth angel is limited to one for the whole family, and the teardrop family is limited to one for five. There is no more naughtiness. Merlot, little siren, don't leave. . . . The author will come back quickly to add more updates. I miss my little mermaids

I feel like the protagonist's abilities are so strange. A four-star monster like Indy Angel requires the reversal of the world and the underworld as a medium or key🔑, but non-Jade Tears fusion terminals like Grafa, Millet, Chimera, and Predator Plant don't use keys🔑. It's very strange. After all, these are big monsters, and logically they should be more difficult to print.

Wives

Playing with tears? Are you a cannibal? (Grinning teeth) It seems like the official cuts the beads to tears! (The duelist who was disgusted by Zhu Lei is here)

When does the protagonist become a normal person?

The writing is quite good, but the battle between the protagonists is still too md-oriented. When asked, this is a bad civilization. Is your life in danger? Two old questions in Yu-Gi-Oh novels. One is that when you enter the world of Yu-Gi-Oh to play cards, especially when playing big cards, you must not ask others about the timing. If you can pass, then pass. If you give others a chance to respond, you are irresponsible for your own life. . . The other is the read-only part of the effect explanation. You can even add modifiers when reading to cover up the past. Don't let others figure out your deck routine. Intelligence advantage is also an advantage. When playing cards in the Yu-Gi-Oh World, you have to be in a hurry. Even after Z4, the opponent does not have that much time to look up your actual effect description. When you look at the card surface, the opponent may pass the effect.

Because the deck was too strong, I frantically strengthened the opponent's strength, and almost overturned every time. Is it necessary to include the Elf World when playing cards to prevent me from playing real-life RPGs in the Elf World if I can't continue writing later?

False anti-bead: Using a large number of exclusions and red pits to prevent Zhulei from stacking graves, in fact, countless anti-bead fighters were accidentally injured. Real anti-bead: It occupies a large number of UA card slots in the bead-tear card pool, so that players cannot draw all bead-tear, which truly reduces the amount of bead-tear in the environment.

Did this suffocating feeling like a python wrap around me make me sweat? How could it be possible to face an opponent like Zhulei? How could I possibly be sweating? It turns out he peed

Why can TJ books from two or three years ago appear in the recommendations 😅, although the genre is really interesting.