Others Cultivate Mechas, but I Am the Only One Who Cultivates Immortality

To be honest, it looks a little strange. That is to say, the protagonist was promoted too quickly, and the skyscrapers fell to the ground. The central contradiction is not reflected. You say it's a confrontation between people, but in a society governed by the rule of law, it's a bit chaotic. It is said that it was a storm before the war, but now there is a little less description of the cave, and only the materials are briefly mentioned. The protagonist has always been going smoothly. He has accumulated enough talents and resources, and even accepted a maid and then a consul disciple, but there were no twists and turns. He said that he would send people who were unhappy with him to the toilet, but it was just a Long Aotian-style cool plot. To be honest, I was a little tired of watching it. Take the rabbit as an example. The rabbit protagonist has a very bad start. The moon is completely desolate, with only Wu Gang and Chang'e. As the plot develops, from being a bitch to having a relationship with other characters, to the experience after descending to earth, it is tender and warm when it should be, and it is passionate when it should be passionate, and the laughs are not embarrassing. At least I feel comfortable watching it. I couldn't laugh at the parts of this book that should make me laugh, and I couldn't ignite the parts that should make me laugh. It's a bit vulgar. Everyone is tired of reading cool novels. I want to read some novels that have foreshadowing and plot, instead of being just as boring as now. Talking about the modern style of mechas, we only saw the mechas being destroyed by Xiu Xian, and the mechas seemed to be useless. Since technology is so impressive, why can't people in this world find a way to cultivate immortality? Or, as long as the technology is sufficient, the so-called savage beasts in the cave are nothing more than that. Compared to other novels with strict and grand worldview structures, this book is indeed a bit unreadable. It doesn't look like a book written by the author of Rabbit. Maybe the author is eager to write a good book again, but I think it's better to settle in for a while. At least this is not a book of your original level.

There are typos, and it's an invincible joke.

I've seen rabbits, monsters, and the big devil from the Labor Reform Bureau. I also read the previous book. How to say it. Huang Liang is powerful. But being banned was too miserable. The previous book had a very similar feel to him (similar to the beginning of the monster in the Labor Reform Bureau), but it was indeed slow-burning and had a plot feel. . . It's a bit watery, and the writing style is also a bit up and down, sometimes good and sometimes bad (the old man stamping the Thousand Miles of Rivers and Mountains picture and drifting away really looks so handsome), and then it's a bit too bland and doesn't get the point. The new book seems to have a bit of a sci-fi style, and I don't know if Huang Liang can handle it (because I rarely saw it written before), but after reading the first few chapters, it's pretty good. It's quite funny without being sloppy (the rugged protagonist is very vividly written). I personally think it's better than the previous one, and the title is pretty good (The Only Immortal in the World is also good, maybe even better than this one). I'll continue to follow it. Come on, I think this book will succeed as long as I don't get messed with. Come on, I will keep chasing. I said before that the writing style was a bit up and down, but now I think it fits perfectly in this book. So update soon.

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Brother, I've been liking your books since junior high school, from "The Old Man Wants to Return to the World" and "The Unqualified Demon King". My favorite is "Urban Fairy" (although it's a eunuch, alas). But writing novels is similar to doing business. You can't become a eunuch immediately with no results. What does this make your old fans think? No matter what, you should keep writing regardless of whether anyone scolds you or what your grades are! I really like the warm and funny feel of your novels. Come on! Like "Gu Zhenren", which was written so well by the author at the beginning, it's not like no one read it. It took so many years for it to become popular. You should persevere and improve, and you can't give up without results!

It's beautiful, don't cut it—_— 𓆡𓆝𓆟𓆜𓆞𓆝𓆟𓆜𓆞​​

Compared to before, the difference is really huge. The writing style and writing style feel as if they were replaced by the same person. There are often inconsistencies in the logic. If it doesn't work, just start it again. This type of article is really different from the entertaining and happy writing style before. Even if you are just a little more specialized, it is better than this kind of direct self-destruction.

The writing in this book is down to earth! The content is exciting! Keep it up. The story framework suggests not to be too awesome! Mecha Biaohan can be used as a reference! Two monthly votes have been cast

I have read both the author Big Rabbit and Old Man, but I felt something was wrong after reading the first chapter of this book. The first chapter gave me the impression that it was a novice cool novel, and I felt that the logic of the first chapter did not make sense. According to the author's description, the original crazy man was a waste, but he was not dismissed from the school and had a beautiful director to uphold justice. I felt that this was the general start of the college cool novel. I have only read a little bit so far, but this little bit makes me feel that this book is not as good as Rabbit and Old Man.

After reading it, I will summarize two points for those who follow. The first point is that the female apprentices around the protagonist all have very awesome physiques, and they will definitely start a harem in the future. The two male apprentices have very rubbish physiques The second point is that the fighting in the later period takes too long. Often the author can guess what is going to happen in 7788 from the first part to the second part. Your book may not really be long. Judging from the current results, it basically has to be cut.

Don't you want to cut again? I feel like the writing is quite good, even the maid will be assimilated soon.

I have deleted, deleted, revised and revised it several times in the book club circle, but I don't know what to say. I just saw this newly released book by Huang Liang today. It still suits my taste. I only have two monthly tickets left. If possible, I hope to see updates.

Has the author given up? No news for more than five months

An author I used to like very much is now a eunuch. It's a pity.

The current Qidian Chinese website, as a rule, forces authors to put them on the shelves in advance, threatening not to recommend them, etc. Most of the people who cut out new books are because they are bullied and can't stand it!

Doesn't this look arrogant?

I'm here. Come on!

What exactly was written? ? Killing people, talking about me, and stepping on horses. The whole article is just a passing comment? ?

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It's not easy to praise this book. It's not easy to choose these angles. If you choose the wrong one, it's easy to be harmonized. {"NickName":"","UserId":124661421} It's not that I don't love it, but that I really can't praise this book. I dare not praise it

The quality has dropped a bit. A robber is a robber, pretending to be a serious person. Otherwise, just skip it. These two days of updates make me feel like you are in the middle of a drama

I feel like the author was suppressed by Qidian. This book is definitely good news for book lovers.