Cultivation of Immortality Among the Heavens: Starting from Mortals

Running account... The protagonist's single-player clearance of the game has been identified!

Speechless😑I feel like it's over when I see Douluo. Goodbye

In the beginning, a character who looked like an ant came to Tianxing Zongfang City with hundreds of spiritual stones. It was truly an annual miracle. He dared to take out a few millennium elixirs before even building a foundation, and there were all kinds of other problems.

Can't the protagonist have a better start? You are not a mortal, but a heavenly being, so you must be oppressed! If you don't get bullied, you won't start the game?

There are many differences between the author's setting and the original work. I'll give it a try before I read it.

Why do you want to relax if you can travel through time? Practice essence to transform qi, practice qi to transform spirit, practice spirit to return to emptiness, practice emptiness to combine with Tao. Like a sun god, a coiling dragon, like covering the sky, like swallowing, the stars become... Godhead

We went to Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty earlier, and he practiced the Secret of Immortality. He said that after practicing, he would open up the world inside his body, and he could continue practicing indefinitely until he reached the great avenue. But in the end, he returned to the mortal world and had to rely on a foundation-building pill to achieve a breakthrough. Do you think it's ridiculous?

God, the author, you can actually be targeted by the Eternal Heavenly Lord in the mortal world. You have not killed any Heavenly Lord. How could you be targeted when you come up? And then the Heavenly Token is unexpectedly fixed by the Heavenly Lord. This is the most rubbish golden finger ever, right? He was able to travel through all the heavens and realms, and he was still able to be immobilized by the Heavenly Lord. The central protagonist practiced and attained enlightenment several times, almost approaching the Golden Immortal several times, but he was still beaten like a dog, and he was reincarnated in the Douluo Continent. It was so embarrassing, right?

It's so vicious. The alchemy skills of mortals are not as good as those in Douma Continent. Are you belittling immortality and exalting fantasy? Write a novel and understand the two words "cultivation" in a novel. Then write it again. You can practice immortality as long as you have the resources, but Douqi Continent can? You can't do anything as an immortal, and that's not good. What kind of immortality can you cultivate? I won't talk about the realm. Every realm of immortality can correspond to every realm of Douqi Continent. Poison, even Shen Nong will be pissed off by you.

The front was okay, but when I saw that he had accepted the human monster Yue Qiluo as his subordinate, he was just a piece of trash who deceived his master and destroyed his ancestors. Also flirting. I feel so sick.

The author is as greedy as a demonic monk. He only wants to make money and does not want to read "A Mortal's Story of Immortality" in depth.

Garbage garbage garbage. I advise readers to delete it immediately. This book is really rubbish among rubbish! The combat power level collapsed into a complete mess. There is no difference between being promoted and not being promoted. The realm of cultivation is repeatedly restarted. In the end, I simply reincarnated and started all over again. It was fucking disgusting.

. How did you manage to write 7 books in a row, each one worse than the last?

ai flow writing, the preface does not match the subtitles, it is so convenient to write novels now

It makes me sick to see a useless start. If you can't write well, don't force yourself to use a template.

The author Jin Dianfan commented that in the past, the basic books only talked about the mortal system. It almost made me laugh to death. The combined realm of other mortals cannot surpass the excavator. The system is terrible. The realm is directly only the difference between accumulated spiritual energy, and the realm cannot be withdrawn at all. Let a dog eat the same resources as Han Li and still become the Taoist Daluo in the mortal world.

It's a really good design, the front is in the realm of the protagonist. Now I can't suppress it anymore, so I'll try another method and let the protagonist start over again, so that I can enjoy the number of words in the water.

How the hell did the author have the nerve to write this? Is it purely money fraud? Having written so many books, my writing skills have not improved much. Copy a little bit here and there. He would change it himself and it would become his own. After memorizing a few chapters, start writing them repeatedly. I don't usually troll people, but this was outrageous.

Author, what are you writing about? ! After obtaining the Secret of Immortality and writing it so well, the result? Third level of Qi training? Are you still writing according to the Jindan Yuanying formula? They are all cultivating the world inside the body, but are they returning the golden elixir and Yuanying? A golden elixir for globalization? Slipped away

Funny, can you go to college just by reading all the elementary schools in the world?

When I saw that the protagonist needed a foundation-building pill to build a foundation, I didn't want to watch it. The layout was too small.

A typical studio book, with inconsistent logic and inconsistent combat power. To tell a joke, if Ye can beat Haotian, it would be the pinnacle of foundation building for a mortal.

It's rubbish, the logic is wrong, the content of the chapters is wrong, and it was definitely not written by a human.

I'm quite interested in this author's books, but the content didn't even make it to the shelves before he was poisoned and died. Can't he polish his writing skills?

I really can't stand it anymore. It's a mess, with pieces here and there. I don't know what it is written at all. There are so many confusing things, it's boring.

It looked good at first, but I have to criticize your method of marrying Yan Ruyan. You dug a hole, you took it, and you went through a heart-torturing process. What's going on?

I have read the first fifty chapters and stopped reading if I have a problem with my combat power.

This kind of world combat power system collapses one by one

It's so messy. The details are even rougher. Is this a draft?

Two inner worlds have been opened up, and the 13th level of Qi Refining has reached Dzogchen. I still have to find hard-boiled eggs to build the foundation. I'm convinced.