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Poor choices at key points in the plot
As expected, the last one came last. The protagonist's first season was written in such detail from the regular season to the playoffs. The final was written in such detail that Baihua won the championship. I don't know what to think. Some parts of the writing are awkward and I won't go into details. Overall, I can only read it. I don't know what I think. Either the protagonist's growth will be highlighted if he doesn't win in the first year, and some competitions will be quickly transitioned to the next season. This book is good. It has written a million words about everything. The results of the first season and the final runner-up deserved to be thrown into the street by the roadside. In the end, no one watched the pigeons.
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It's a new perspective. There's nothing bad about it at the moment. I just hope that the combat part of the online game can be written more. After all, I was dizzy just watching the competition part of the original work. It's a pity that Xingxin is gone, but I think it's acceptable if the staff can be arranged well. In short, it's a rare full-time master fanfic so far.
If it's too extreme, both of them are at fault, they are both stubborn donkeys. It's all Ye Qiu's fault here and Tao Xuan's fault at all. If you want to do business with Mucheng, isn't it business? It has to be One Autumn Leaf. Ye Qiu also said that you couldn't do business because you said there was always a way, so you had to say it.
As for Lord Grim, no one can use it except Ye Qiu. When Tang Rou comes next season, he can use One Autumn Leaf? Will Lord Grim level up first this season?
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Tang Rou (TV series)
Tang Rou played by Li Muchen is one of the few characters whose live-action version looks better than the comics in my opinion.
I haven't watched it, but I can't watch it full-time. After all, there is a problem with this game. The account belongs to the studio, and the famous masters are all studio players. Leaving it means giving up the account.
The problem with basic settings means that this book is difficult to write.
Suddenly thought of
I feel that for Lao Ye... Mo Ce = Fang Rui (bad operation) + Wu Xuefeng (plays the game with his brain and is an excellent deputy) + Enhanced version of Baozi (uneasy operation but useful) + Zhang Jiale/ Huang Shaotian (Pistachio) + Lao Wei (I hurt him to death, but I am really reliable) + Su Muqiu (I am a real gangster, and I really dare to scold him) + Han Wenqing (I want to overpower him at any time) Is there anything wrong with this summary?
Say a few words
1. Is it because the author said that the male protagonist will not win the championship in the ninth season? At least those who read the book One-third less; 2. The fact that the number of posts since the beginning of the book has not exceeded 100 shows a certain problem, and there is a feeling of desertion; 3. Speaking of the return of the boy, the book is also to make up for the regrets, but at least it is to make up for the regrets of the protagonist, but this book let others step on the protagonist to make up for the regrets, the contrast is too great; 4. Finally, when the tenth season begins, I hope some kind-hearted book friends will remind me, thank you!
Is Happy gone?
Newbie's thoughts
The creativity is really good, and the plot development is also good. But there is a question, why does the new plot not look like an e-sports article. The appearance of the Three Arts of Shura, the Eight-Armed Shura, and the Mirror Flower, Water and Moon, gave it a sense of fantasy, more like a fantasy spell than an e-sports operation. Actually, it's okay to be in the second level, but as a widely accepted e-sports event, it's a bit embarrassing, and 80% of it won't be reported in newspapers. The original Z-shaped jitter and shadow steps are more like e-sports operations. Dragon Heads Up is also very tasteful, and it is not embarrassing to write in a newspaper.
Will the originally happy people still show up?
Xinxing recruits people to this team only when there is demand, and the original Ye Xiu has been kicked out, and he has started to train Lord Grim to train new people. Now Ye Xiu is fully prepared to compete for the championship, and he does not know how to recruit people in online games or clear dungeons, and there are not many vacancies in Excellent Era. So unless the author gives a new plot, it is very likely that no one from Xinxing will show up.
I feel that according to the current Sun Xiang, this year's All-Stars will probably choose to challenge Yu Feng... Let's just say "Let's see who is the real number one Crazy Sword"
Have you ever watched Lao Ye's birthday song? It would be great if the new season could have such a style, it's so beautiful
If Chu Yunxiu joins 301, then Xu Bin probably won't transfer. So when Deng Fusheng retires from Tiny Herb, who should he choose? You don't poach white concubines, do you?
The best umbrella repair orange in the world
Picture 1 Threesome Picture 2 Brother and sister group Picture 3 Mucheng solo
This emotional scene really needs to be polished. . . It can only be said that most male video authors are not good at this aspect.
Is the author running away?🤔🤔🤔
Still updated? 😭😭😭
It is recommended that after S9 wins the championship, there will be a return event for the members of the first generation Excellent Era. This event can also be in line with the setting of the protagonist's business talent to increase traffic to the club.
Is the author still here? It's been almost a month. Will there be any updates for this book?
Didn't we agree to compete in the national competition? Why isn't this updated? Waited for so long
I feel like this book is very well written, why haven't I updated it?
This is agreeable
I was diverted here, why haven't I updated it in a month?
I haven't updated it for a long time. I got it from QQ Reading. I would like to ask if the author will update it after this year?
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