Lord of the Deserted Sand

Let's talk about the conclusion first. After reading the two volumes, I feel a bit high and low, and I can't stand it any longer Overall, it feels like a three-star version of Honor. It's a good work and very nice to watch. It has many advantages but also fatal shortcomings Let's talk about the first volume first. It is a somewhat flawed divine volume. Whether it is the promotion of the protagonist's cultivation, the description and characterization of the characters, the telling of the story, and the enhancement of the atmosphere, it is the best among the best, a veteran among veterans. But there are flaws, mainly in the poor handling of the three foreign clans and the lead-up to the war. The appearance of the three foreign clans is actually quite reasonable, but the ending is very poor. Hong Fan actually saw the conspiracy behind it and was already a chess player, but he did nothing or should not have set up the overall situation. It is obvious that they can unite with the three foreign families to kill the rebels, but they just take things as they come. Moreover, uniting with the three foreign families is not just a game. It is also powerful for Hong Fan's personal development, the development of the Hong family, and the development of the city. It is really strange that Hong Fan knows that the power of many people is greater than the strength of one person but does nothing. And the chapters about the snake clan war are a bit superfluous. It's not that the writing is not good, but these chapters seem to have been written for the sake of force. The chapters in which the head of the Li family died and the rebels were arrested are already the ending. The second volume is out, and it turns out that I have to write about a snake-man battlefield. It is exactly what the author said that because of Hong Jian's jealousy, he ate a plate of delicious dumplings when he was full of delicacies. I was really speechless especially when I insisted on retaining Tiqi. It would be better to write about spending money and other means to unite the three other families to fight snakes on the battlefield. It is difficult but not impossible. It is nothing more than fame and fortune. It is a pity that the other three families wrote it hastily. The second volume is like heaven and earth compared to the first volume. The first volume is a stranger in a foreign land and lives up to its name. A man named Hong Fan planted the roots of the Hong family and the roots of Jinhaicheng in this world. The second volume of the second volume is written like this, but it feels like it is not worthy of the name. The second volume has a total of 123 chapters. Among the nearly 60 chapters, 10 chapters involve participating in the Shura Sect selection, and 10 chapters are interesting in joining forces with the He family to do serious business. The other chapters can be summarized as Hong Fan's daily riding life (Hong Fan's life as a playboy) (Hong Fan's playboy life) Xianyi's (derogatory) The first 60 chapters have a lot of excessive inter-chapter plots, which are not interesting at all. I don't know what I'm writing. The characters are not described in the main plot but are written in a large number of inter-chapters. It's too outrageous. It's like you ordered a bowl of noodles from the store, and the result was good soup, tender ribs, and fine chopped green onions but no noodles. It was very strange. It feels like eating but not eating, a feeling like eating. Moreover, Hong Fan feels like a playboy, very greasy, and he doesn't seem to be the same Hong Fan as in the first volume The main plot is only entered in the last 60 chapters, but how exciting can you write in only 60 chapters? In these 60 chapters, only the protagonists and villains can be seen, and the others are ordinary, especially the death of Zhan Yuanzi, the emotions are not mobilized enough, you want to achieve fake For example, the effect of Hong Fu's death is only the effect of Hong Ping's death. In the first 60 chapters, is there a plot of Hong Fan and Zhan Yuanzi making friends alone? Is there as in-depth portrayal of Zhan Yuanzi and Bai Jiaci? Hong Fan got angry and started killing people like crazy, but he didn't feel anything at all. It felt like Hong Fan was being played like a chess piece, and the people he killed were all helpless abandoners like all living beings. Furthermore, the description of Hong Fan's inner changes is very blunt. Can a few sentences be enough to describe what's going on in Hong Fan's heart without touching the scene? Xian Yi Ang Ma, author of the second volume, what do you want to tell readers? What did Hong Fan change and what did he do? Is he still Hong Fan? Lord of Mysteries, you have read the author. The most unforgettable thing for me is the clown in the second volume. In Klein's interpretation at the end of the second volume, the clown is a clown who cannot change the overall situation on the stage and can only struggle silently. The first volume, A Stranger in a Strange Land, is really exciting and interesting. The second volume, hey, it's hard to calm down.

The author's writing is very good, and the character descriptions are not too clichéd. When I first saw Jiang Youcai offending the protagonist and provoking his brother Jiang Youde, I thought it would be a show-off and a slap in the face. The protagonist suppressed the Jiang brothers until they could not lift their heads. Unexpectedly, by settling the grudges in a battle, he picked it up high and put it down gently, which gave the protagonist a better perspective on the overall situation and impressed several people in Zhu Yiqi's mind. The character of the little character is no longer ungrateful. After the protagonist has gained strength, he still holds a grudge against past conflicts. In addition, Hong Sheng's psychological changes after the protagonist comes out are also very complex and real. There are concerns about his unstable status as a young master and the generosity that a young master should show to others. There is also the relief, joy and shame of the protagonist after he shows that he will not covet the position of the head of the family, and the subtle psychological changes after being ambushed by Hai Fei all make the character more vivid. It was really surprising to see this book among most novels that focus on plot and neglect characterization.

Good book. The current plot framework is similar to the early stage of "The Lord of the World", where people of heaven, earth and people compete in the world of Chinese martial arts. The writing power is very good. I really like this kind of author who writes honestly and according to the framework of his predecessors. It can be seen that the author can devote a lot of energy to writing about people, emotions, and rivers and lakes, which is very enjoyable and moving. The concubine of a small border family starts the game. In the first volume, Goldfinger quickly unites the family's power without any moronic plot. The characters are all flesh and blood. The family has been vigorously progressing for three generations. The depressing pleasure of killing enemies for friends. Each volume has characters that I like. I found this in the comment section of a public book promotion account. I put it on the bookshelf for a month without reading it. After reading more than ten chapters, I got out of control.

I have read this book so far, and I like it very much! I used to read The Apostle of the End, and its creativity was first-rate, and the writing went from fine to fine. Now that I am reading this book, I find the writing is brilliant, the characters are well-drawn, and the logic and plot are excellent. It can be said to be first-rate! 🌹

It's all ordered. Damn, I read it all in the morning. The author should write it quickly.

I feel that although the author said that the beginning is a bit cliche, the writing style, the story concept, including the connection between people, and the golden finger of the protagonist are all quite outstanding. This level of excellence is worthy of being on the list. Many books on the list are not as profound as this one. The second good thing is the progress of the author. It is obvious that from the volume 1 to the 5th volume, the overall fighting, the connection between people, including the conception of the story, are not like other books. Finally, let me talk about the problems I think. The first point is that I think the person who died in the second volume should not be Xiao Zhan, but Xiao Bai. In fact, Xiao Bai's words actually make the audience feel more involved. He is a boy from a poor family, and his girlfriend who just gave up may make the overall revenge It becomes more reasonable, after all, someone asked me; Then there is the issue of updating. It feels very uncomfortable to see that this book is so wonderful, but the update is so slow. I don't know when it will be completed. Continue to support the author. I hope this book will get better and better in the future.

I don't know why I can't continue reading the new map. I feel like I haven't started reading this book yet.

After reading the book reviews, some people raised comments and questions and the author gave various explanations? My personal opinion is not to explain. I have read so many books that only Squid will actively reply to readers, but it is also a separate chapter. The author should focus his limited energy on thinking about the direction of the plot, and does not need your popular science explanation. Reading is to let people imagine everything. What is the meaning? You can learn from Squid to adjust the plot progress according to the subscription situation, but it should not be influenced by one or two readers. There is no plot that everyone is satisfied with. Everyone wants to give advice, but as an author, you should still tell the story of your own imagination instead of saying what others are satisfied with.

The author's descriptions of scenes and descriptions are full of visual brilliance. After reading too much, I am tired of aesthetics and always feel that the emotional guidance is not in place.

When will I be number one on the list? Kick me and save enough to see again 🙂

As mentioned, Lao Huang recently went to the hospital for consultation due to severe insomnia, gastrointestinal discomfort, and body allergies. He was told that all the uncomfortable symptoms were caused by excessive mental stress. Writing is a protracted battle, so for the sake of health, quality of life, and the quality of this book, the author decided not to serialize it every day, but to update a complete piece of content over time. We will report the progress and estimated update time in the comment area after a while. Thank you for your continued support and understanding. (Huang Taiji shows his heart)

1.Occlusion of respiratory tract: Chapter 10; 2.Shabu: Chapter 36; 3.Sand Thorn: Chapter 46; 4.High-speed sand knife: Chapter 60; 5.Oil Hell (Sand Coffin + Flame Style): Chapter 79; 6.Unpowered Glider: Chapter 83; 7.Not a Cow Dunliu Desert War Armor: Chapter 89; 8.Quicksand Trap: Chapter 124; 9.Overlord Unarmor (sand armor collapses into sand arrow attack): Chapter 128: 10.Power Glider (Sand World + Yanliu Gong): Chapter 134; 11.Burning Sand (Sand World + Yanliu Gong): Chapter 134 (It is hard to seal it); 1 2.Escape: Chapter 157 (it's temporarily put on hold); 13.Sand Drill: Chapter 173; 14.Sand Mold: Chapter 209; 15.Shunpo: Chapter 215; 16.Sand Air Gun: Chapter 221 (Preliminary Study) 17.Sand Shotgun: Chapter 254 (Desert Only Because 😏); 18.Burning Sand (Combined with Fire Innate Spiritual Energy): Unlocked in Chapter 312; 19.Hot Wind Hell (Sand × Fire): Chapter 343; ...(To be continued) The above is the arrangement of the results of the application of Huangsha in this book and the position of the chapters when it was first mentioned. Friends who have questions about the introduction and have limited patience can take a preliminary look at the development rhythm of this book. Since the design of the combat power system of this book is relatively detailed and the planned number of words is relatively large, the growth and development of the protagonist's abilities is a step-by-step process. The introduction is a summary of the whole book. As for high-lethal weapons and equipment such as firearms and aircraft engines, they can only be gradually unlocked by improving the protagonist's destiny star and martial arts cultivation. It will probably start to be covered in the middle of the book. Just sauce~

[Situation Report] Book friends have been waiting for a long time. After taking a break for travel, Lao Huang's condition has stabilized and he has gradually come out of his depression. The book is currently being resumed and will be updated once the second volume is finished. Thank you again for your support and waiting 🙏🙏🙏

[Division of realms in this book] Strength realm: Inner vision realm; Penetration realm (a total of twelve serious meridians); Hongran realm (a total of eight strange meridians); It starts with receiving a trace of innate spiritual energy, and when all the true energy is transformed into true essence, one enters the innate); *Note: The destiny star is the true essence from the beginning, so there is no barrier of interaction between heaven and man. When one reaches the peak of completeness, he will smoothly enter into the interaction between heaven and man, until he completely tames the innate spiritual energy and enters the innate. Qi realm: Xiantian (a total of six realms); Yuanci (a total of five realms); Heaven and man (a total of three realms); Artistic realm: Martial Saint. The level of the god has not yet been revealed.

16 Chapters with a total of 39,000 words are updated today. The remaining content of the third volume will be updated in June after Lao Huang finishes writing. Thank you for your support! Long wait.

Tianbang: "Qi Zhenshan and River" Xiao Ding "Purple Sky Dragon Transformation Sutra" "Wheel of Life" Guan Qimai "Yimu Green Wolf Sutra" "Exerting Punishment on behalf of Heaven" Yi Zhen "Void Thunder Sutra" "Dongzhao Taixu" Hou Zhiqiu "Three Worlds Universal Illumination Sutra" "Color and Void Mutual Exchange" Embrace "Prajna Sutra" "Sword Opens the Heaven and Earth" Wangui Che "Tongtian Sword Sutra" "There is no external object in the heart" Shi Haoran "The Great Dream without Enlightenment Sutra" Place ranking: "Sharp Blade Master" Jiang Huaqi, the heavenly being of the three realms, the first place "The Angry God" Li Pochen, the heavenly being of the three realms, the third place on the list "Amaterasu Sea" Kou Fei, the heavenly being of the three realms, the fifth place "Bound Realm" Fu Jiecheng, the heavenly being of the second realm Fourteenth on the list "Yunshang Peak" Yin Lianfeng, a heavenly being from the second realm, List twenty-two "Ten thousand feet of ice" Shen Maya, a heavenly being from the second realm, List thirty "The Universe Covers Hands" Pan Yucheng, a heavenly being from the second realm, List thirty-three "Broken Halberd Listening to the Tide" Peng Guan, a heavenly being from the first realm, List forty-one "Heavenly Secret" Xu Guinian List fifty-eight "Green Dragon" should hold the sword "Tong Yun Silently Shines" Zhu Zhanran "The sky is frozen and the earth is closed" Leng Luoli "Three feet alone" Fan Longqiu, a heavenly being "Jade Flower True Monarch" Tian Huai List eighty-two "Red Dome" Zhou Wenyang List ninety-seven "Purple Energy Coming from the East" Xiao Minglong Bottom of the list Evil list: "Jue Tian Burial Road" Chen Danning, second realm of heavenly beings, first place "Human Demon" whose real name is unknown, first realm heavenly being, second place on the list "Iron Demon" Zhou Yaowu, innate peak, tenth place on the list (death) We also recruit famous warriors. The following list is not exhaustive and will be added at any time. "Every direction is destroyed" Xiao Qin Wu Sheng "The God of Grain is Immortal" Baili Shi Wu Sheng (death) "One hand holding the sky" Mu Xianzun Wu Sheng (death) "The universe can stand alone" Feng Yeyi Wu Sheng (death) "One Thousand Mile Step" Feng Jianke Three Realms of Heaven and Man (Death) "Bihai Tide" Li Zhuoying Yuanci/Celestial Being "Mu Yuzi" Hou Zhino Yuanci/Celestial Being "Zhe Lei" Tree God Guard Yuan Ci (Death) "Wandering God" Wei Yuanbai Yuan Ci "Han Yun" Tree God Guard Yuan Ci (Death) "Hundred-Armed Heavenly King" Liu Rui Yuanci (death) "The Wind Rolls and the Remaining Clouds" Feng Mubai Yuanci (death) "Iron Palm Opens the Mountain" Duan Tiannan Yuanci Si Pass (Death) "Floating Flame Light" Zeng Yingqiong Yuanci Four Passes "Miscellaneous Clouds and Slender Rain" Tang Shaoyou Yuanci "Lighting Fire" Gong Zhengping Yuanci (death) "Shocking Baili" Jiang Tiehu Yuanci "Desolate Wind" Feng Manyun Yuanci "Flowing Clouds and Hairpin Snow" Qiao Yubai Yuanci "Copper Surrounded Iron Horse" Zhu Shengxiong Yuanci "Lin Handongsu" Lengjin Ferry Yuanci "Three Feet of Frozen" Shen Maoxun Yuanci "Shattering Yue Collapsing Sky" Kou Xiao "Gun Leader" Ancient and New Meanings The first level of Yuanci "Half Mountain Guest" Qin Hong The second level of Yuanci "Nian Shen Shen" Dai Wangchen The first level of Yuanci Star Master (Death) "The Lord of Disobedience" Liu Hong Yuanci Star Master "Liu Yun" Kou Yong The peak of Xiantian "Wudang Divine Sword" Chu Jiange The peak of Xiantian "Little Dou Emperor" Qu Luoyi The peak of Xiantian "Three Mountains Half Fall" The rain in front of the building Xiantian Peak "Flicking the River of Fire" Hong Jian Xiantian Peak (Death) "Dark Tide and Dark Sun" Gong Heng Xiantian Peak "An Arrow Pierces the Clouds" Hou Yueqiu Xiantian "Lingbo Yu" Yi Wuxiang Xiantian Mingxingsi Wuxie "Qingyu Sword" Ling Zhiyun Xiantian Wuhe "Eating Elephant Guest" Hu Zhuang Xiantian Wuhe Star Lord "Chaoyuan of the Purple Mansion" Xiao Zhe Xiantian Sihe "Cold Light Solitary Shadow" Li Feng Xiantian Sihe "Trickster" He Xiuhuai Xiantian Sihe "Sword Crying and Crane Chirping" Li Heming Xiantian (Death) "Fast Light Movie" Yi She Xiantian "Xia Mantian" Lan Hai Xiantian Sihe "Blood Butcher" Chao Zheng The Xiantian Triad "Snow Abuse Fengtao" Feng Tianqing The Xiantian Triad "Shuofeng" Shen Yubo The Xiantian Triad "Feiyan Chasing Stars" Yan Xingjin The Xiantian Triad "Huang Yuzun" whose real name is unknown The Xiantian Triad "Yun Zhongying" Luo Shangming The Xiantian Triad (death) "Crossing the Forest Deer" Lin Luchuan Xiantian "Thousand Points Star" Tang Xingqing Xiantian Unity "Electric Light and Stone Fire" Shi Yuanwei Xiantian Unity "Thunderbolt" Cao Hanhai Xiantian "Huo Luan" Hong Sheng Xiantian Unity "Zhan Ye Gong" Ye Zhan Xiantian Fateful Star Destiny "Tai Suyan" You Yunwei The realm is unknown Destiny star Tai Suyan "Flower in the Mirror" and the moon in the sky "Dragon in the River" Ao Zhiji Compassion between heaven and man "Red Faced God" Su Peifeng Compassion between heaven and man Destiny star Giant Spirit Phase "Great Sun Blade Wheel" Ten Thousand Lights Ji Interaction between heaven and man (death) "A Flash of Lightning" Yi Zuo Hunran PS: The Genius list is not listed here due to the high turnover. This post will be updated in real time. Lao Huang, I am looking at you (｡ì _ í｡)

This introduction is too one-sided. Really, it cannot explain the content of this book. It will only give others a stereotype, like modern people traveling through time and using modern technology to show off. The introduction is not worthy of the content, the content is so good

Recently, the author is in the stage of seeing a doctor and adjusting to rest, and is trying new sleeping and anxiety-relieving drugs. In terms of writing, I am working on ideas but not too much. I still need to coordinate people first to be efficient. In short, I will definitely not run away, just not so fast. Thank you friends for your concern.

This book is really good-looking. The character's character is so well written. It is the rebirth of a person who has truly been in society. The other supporting characters are also very well-drawn. Hong Jian's death was a minor accident. I thought it would be a story of three masters in one discipline, dad on the land rankings, and leftovers on the Tianjiao rankings, but I didn't expect him to lie down. However, it is normal. In the bloody Jinhai City, dying on the battlefield is also a good destination. Perhaps Hong Jian's small role in the beginning was destined to end up with a hiccup. If he really made three rankings in one discipline, wouldn't he become a family cultivator? It would be good to settle all the grievances of Jinhai and embark on the path to the real Tianjiao by the end of the first volume.

It is progressing smoothly and the second volume is expected to be completed on October 1st. Stay tuned😁

The more books I read, the less I read.

，，，， Most of those great writers are not as good as the four. Lao Huang's writing is very to my liking. This is not just good writing, but that he respects readers. He treats readers as normal people with normal intelligence, rather than treating readers as a bunch of pigs🐷. He does not forcibly reduce the characters in the book to create conflicts and create waves for the sake of plot development. But the most important thing is that the characters he writes have a spirit. This spirit does not only include the youthful spirit, but the characteristics of a character that can make people empathize with it. This kind of spirit is the foundation of character creation, which injects vitality into the characters and makes the characters vivid to readers. And this kind of mentality is usually emotional. Putting this kind of mentality into the book, you can understand why Su Peifeng broke the golden lock but still asked Hong Fan to fight to the death. Hong Fan could not accept it but still accepted it. Then let me mention a small flaw. The Shen family has decided to join forces with Xu Guinian, and the sea fishing documents have been issued, so Shen Zhixian's appearance seems a bit too high-profile. If it were bricks and tiles, I wouldn't care if it was full of cracks, but a book is like a piece of jade, and the slightest flaw would be heart-wrenching. In the end, it's better to pay more attention to your health. If you have nothing to do, go for a walk on the street or read a book. Don't be in a hurry to update. You have to know that I don't even read some books that have 30,000 chapters a day, but I think it's worth your 30,000 chapters a day.

I didn't expect that I didn't even take notice of several well-known books. There are such good books in the corner of my library that I put in the library before. Come on, author, your "Lord of the Desert" is among the latest updates 😁 I will recommend a few of my favorites Xuanjian Xianzu Steel Gunpowder and the Spellcaster Wulong Mountain Suppression of Bandits Xiangongkaiwu Xuanchen Road Return OK, these are the first books. If you have other good books to recommend, please leave a message. There is a book shortage 😭

Huang is still working hard to recover and strives to return as soon as possible. I wish book friends all the best in 2024. 🌹

Due to the exhaustion of raising a baby and all kinds of chores at home, Lao Huang has not been in good condition recently. He has reversed day and night and cannot fall asleep for a long time even after taking sleeping pills. Now he is lighter than me and his brain can't move very well. Therefore, there will be no updates in the middle of this month. Things will be better when I move back to Shanghai around the end of the month. Thank you for your support, sorry!

I've been running naked for more than a week and it seems that my collection and scores have not increased more slowly than when there were recommendations. So is it because category recommendation is actually useless or have readers seen this book from other places? Like red chicken? Curious. Jpg

This is my first time posting. The author's writing is really good and the writing style is quite good. I hope the author is in good health. I don't ask for more updates, but for stable performance.

I wish the author good health and encourage creation. A few monthly tickets are a token of appreciation. Never give up.

It can be regarded as the most enjoyable masterpiece I have read in the past year. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and has his own ideas in terms of setting and plot progression. On this basis, it is also an addictive and enjoyable novel. Apart from the fatalistic supporting characters, there is basically nothing frustrating about it. Let me talk about my thoughts on this book. The first is the first few volumes that have been written so far. From the Hong family to Shenjing, both the protagonist and the supporting characters have a minimum IQ. There will be no inexplicable plots that reduce intelligence. The protagonist will think about martial arts on his own, and the supporting characters also have their own pursuits. What is better than some writers is that the supporting characters have more diverse personalities (rather than all being sophisticated people who understand the world). Even in order to be more realistic, the author also tried to temporarily tear away the protagonist's sanity. Unfortunately, this attempt was not very marketable for various reasons. Then guess the direction of the whole book. First of all, Hong Fan will definitely rebel. It is almost certain. I cannot accept that such a modern character shaped by the author's ideology would be willing to be a "Westernizationist". But there are a few small problems here. How to solve Hong's social relations? Let's not mention her status as a noble family. Is Princess Xiao going to break up with her father for Hong? Although her father has hidden something from her, she, a person with such a strong sense of hierarchy, is the biggest supporter of the old system. At present, it seems that adopting a constitutional monarchy is the safest option... Or simply killing Xiao. Then there is the Dragon God. I don't know how to round this up. It's hard to imagine how the royal family plotted a god. It can only be caused by external reasons. If the dragon dies, it may be reincarnated into the dragon tree. If the dragon's blood is enough, the little dragon god will be resurrected. Anyway, the royal family will sacrifice the star officer, maybe Hong Fan will be caught, and then the dragon's blood will be filled with blood, and the star officer's authority will be strengthened. The Xiao family will first kill the people, and then the protagonist will fight back, and finally learn the truth about the death of the dragon god... The above are all random divergence.

The function of the Dragon Soul Tree is bound to be upgraded again in the future, for the following reasons: 1. The Dragon Soul Fruit after Yuanci has little effect on improving the realm Root bones, physique, and understanding, Hong Fan only lacks the root bone There must be some way to improve the root. Bone This is how the realm improves faster 2. Why does the realm improve faster Gather thousands of stars in 20 years at the latest, and then Hong Fan will die You must have the ability to protect yourself, I think a martial saint is enough Obviously there is a group of Martial Saints and Thousand Eyes The fastest upgrade speed (from the first level of Yuanci to Martial Saints, take the average valuation at the level) for more than 30 years But the speed may still not be enough. At this time, something needs to happen to slow down the progress of Thousand Eyes (Fantian Society has some big events, the alien gods have some things) ---------------------------------------- What is the Dragon Soul Tree? Well, I think it is the ancestral dragon fragments, as follows: 1. Collect other ancestral dragon fragments to unlock new functions It is logical to increase the level speed 2. The realm of martial arts is not limited to the martial saint What is the origin of martial arts The Legend of Zu Long How to improve martial arts Look at Zu Long Zu Long may be practicing martial arts If you want to reach the full level, you must practice martial arts To practice martial arts, you need help from Zu Long 3. There may be fragments of the Ancestral Dragon in Northern Xinjiang Because the military and political integration in Northern Xinjiang started from the Rebellion of the Thirteen Kings The Rebellion of the Thirteen Kings was because Zulong was found to be in trouble Zulong may be able to take advantage of the opportunity to have some backup power Where to stay, the most likely possibility is Northern Xinjiang Because the protagonist will obviously stay in Northern Xinjiang for a long time 4. Personally, I feel that Zulong asked Hong Fan to travel through, because there is a similar plot in the previous book It's just a personal guess.