The Longevity Clan: My Son Gives Me the Potential to Become a Great Emperor

This novel has its own unique perspective, contrasting cultivators and martial artists. Many writers fail to do this well; they either portray the innate realm too humbly, failing to consider the human condition, or they depict it as a power struggle.

At first, it was said that there were very few people with innate talent, and that there were only 3 cultivators in a country including the protagonist. However, by chapter 9, 10,000 people with innate talent and cultivators had appeared.

Shouldn't the title suggest multiple main characters? After reading over ten chapters, it still feels like there's only one. The son and grandson's appearances are brief, just a single sentence. Without any description of the other family members, is this even a family story?

The few chapters that were published were clearly not written by the same person. Has someone else been assigned to write them? The current writing style is like a primary school student's diary entry.

Author, what are you planning to do by changing your wife's appearance and surname? Do you want to be a cuckold?

The moment I saw your book, I was completely disgusted! I had absolutely no desire to open it. Firstly, there's no problem with your son turning you into an unparalleled powerhouse. Secondly, here's the problem: it can directly cause your book to collapse. The first minor issue in the second point is that you lack spiritual roots.

The beginning was good, but towards the end, it felt like the protagonist was being suppressed. He'd clearly reached the Foundation Establishment stage and could have found a female cultivator with better spiritual roots and higher cultivation levels, yet he still disguised himself as a cultivator who failed to break through to Foundation Establishment at the 9th level of Qi Refining.

There are currently no downsides to this book.

Are you preparing to enter the palace? You only update once every few days.

Could you describe it in more detail? Send me the parts you've written but are hesitant to post privately, and we can discuss it.