The Longevity Clan: My Son Gives Me the Potential to Become a Great Emperor

This novel is something of its own, a comparison between immortal cultivators and warriors. Many people can't write well, and if they write too low, they don't regard their innateness as human beings. If they write too high, it means fighting for hegemony.

At the beginning, it was said that there were very few innates. There were even fewer innates and immortal cultivators in a country including the protagonist, and there were even less. Only in Chapter 9, 10,000 innates and immortal cultivators appeared?

Shouldn't this title have multiple protagonists? Why after reading more than ten chapters of the plot, I still feel like there is only one protagonist. When the son and grandson appear, they are all mentioned in one sentence. Is this still a family story if it doesn't describe the other members of the family? After all, the protagonist's golden finger doesn't need to be cultivated by himself. The resources he brought back should not improve faster than training by himself and relying on the golden finger for the younger generation. As a result, we only saw that the protagonist had many concubines and then had nothing. The innate strength is that of the entire family? Is there no outstanding junior? Then isn't this the same old useless counterattack from before? Family story, okay, let's look at it later.

The chapters on the shelves were obviously not written by the same person, had they been replaced? Today's writing style is like a primary school student's journal

What are you going to do with your wife when she changes her appearance and last name? I want to be a green tortoise

This book of yours was already shattered the moment I read it! I have absolutely no desire to open your book. First point, your son can make you a peerless strong man, there is no problem. The second point is the problem, which will directly cause your book to collapse. The first small problem in the second point is that you have no spiritual roots. The problem that directly leads to the expansion of this problem is that you have no spiritual roots but you enter the Tao through martial arts, and you have become a peerless strongman. Then the second problem has been extended. You have to know that the power system of the world of martial arts is not equal to that of the world of immortality. Take the early stage as an example. In the early stage of cultivating immortals, you can fly with a sword and practice Qi. In the early stage of martial arts, you can only run on land. Speed, physique, and skills are all on the same level. The third point is your title. You are obviously in a fairy world, but your protagonist is a strong martial artist. If you don't open the book, you will collapse. Fourth point, I didn't click on your book to read, I only saw the introduction. Evaluation: This is a book with an unclear power system. No matter how many times I read it, I feel like the author is making things up. The ugly part is: bullshit. Finally: I am just making an objective evaluation. I am not attacking you or trying to discredit you. I am just passing by. I can only say that bitter medicine is good for the disease.

It felt good from the beginning, but at the end, I found that I was suppressing the protagonist. He had already reached the foundation building stage and could find a female cultivator partner with better spiritual roots and higher cultivation level. In the end, he still disguised himself as a monk who failed to break through the foundation building stage at the 9th level of Qi training. You've already disguised yourself, are you still afraid that others will find out? Your vest is Han Li's. Why can't you reveal your cultivation in the Foundation Establishment Period? This way you can find a partner with better qualifications.

This book is currently not toxic to read.

Are you preparing to enter the palace? I only updated it after several days.

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