I Train Lu Mingfei to Become King in Dragon Clan

What do I need a female lead for? A single one is fine too. If all else fails, I could even gender-bent the main character or have Mingfei become Mingfei and they just get together!

Having seen the latest installment, here are my thoughts: Overall, Lu Mingfei has indeed grown in the story, a growth that involves cutting ties with the past and embracing a new beginning. The protagonist, Feng Xi, is a king of a different surname within the Dragon King universe—an interesting and well-rounded plot point. (Is this a spoiler? Sorry if so.)

I don't quite understand how there could be fanfiction with a dragon theme. Do you think you're Lu Mingfei's father? Even Lu Mingfei's father didn't take care of him like this.

Something's not right, let me take another look.

How about a Mai-style heroine? A mature, sophisticated woman would be so much better!

Hm... Lu Hui? But it seems to be Lu Ling right now. Oh, so Lu-kun aspires to be a protagonist in a wish-fulfillment novel? Never mind then.

It would be better to write BL (Boys' Love) novels; I haven't seen a single BL novel based on Dragon Raja.

This part about Chu Zihang is well-written; it's a rare example of a more human-like Chu Zihang among many Dragon Raja fanfics. Many fanfics address the issue of Chu Zihang's erasure from the timeline by focusing on his mother, but the author specifically points out this crucial element. To hell with the Dragon King's power! Even if the world changes because of it, there is only one thing that can surpass all power: maternal love. Don't use the knife of family affection to kill me!

I really like Feng Xi. He has his own ideas about the world and doesn't follow the crowd. Watching him confront Angers is especially satisfying.

I hope that all readers, those who are planning to read, and those who are keeping this book in mind will give the author some feedback. This is really important to me, and it will give me more confidence to continue writing.