Myriad Worlds Mercenary: Beginning with Swallowed Star
诸天佣兵：从吞噬开始
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- Completed
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- 570k Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 3y ago
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207Chapters
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Personally, I think Bibi Dong deserved it. She received so many resources to nurture her, and instead of giving back, she ran off with someone else.
I have a suggestion: could you please cut down on the science-related sections? That long paragraph easily makes it seem like you're padding the word count. Also, the style of the science section is completely different from the main text. It feels like I've jumped from a novel into a classroom setting.
Stop talking about combat power and stats, it's pointless. You know what you're doing. If the comments section gets heated, then we can discuss that.
I've read three books about Li Wei, and all three are systematic. Two of them have already gone through the purification room to work, while you're just waiting in line outside the purification room.
What is this? A commentary? It's fanfiction, bro. You can freely weave in storylines from various universes, add some personal touches, but don't just fill in the gaps. Most people who read fanfiction have probably already read the original work. Do you really need to explain so much? You could at least write some slice-of-life content. What kind of training is this?
What can I say about Bibi Dong? Personally, I think neither Bibi Dong nor Tang San are good people. Bibi Dong was adopted; without the Spirit Hall, she would have starved to death somewhere long ago, or been killed as an evil spirit master. You consumed so many of their resources and still wanted to run away with them. If it were you, wouldn't you be furious?
It's all rambling explanations and setups!
It's so padded out it's practically nonexistent. Every chapter feels like it's half-filled with filler. I managed to read for about twenty chapters, but I just couldn't take it anymore.
Author, please stop forcing the romance plot; it's so awkward. I'm getting goosebumps all over.
When did Li Wei become a villain? He was just cannon fodder.