Myriad Worlds Mercenary: Beginning with Swallowed Star

By the way, I personally think Bibi Dong deserves it. They have so much resources to train you, so you can run away with someone without giving back.

I would like to make a suggestion, can there be less popular science? That long paragraph can easily make people think that you are skimping on word count. Moreover, popular science and your main text are two different styles of writing. It makes me feel like jumping from a novel to a classroom

Stop talking about combat power and data. It's meaningless. Just know it yourself. If there's a quarrel in the comments, post it in the comment area.

I have read three books about Li Wei, and all three are systematic. In two of them, I have already passed through the cleaning room to go to work, and you are queuing up outside the cleaning room.

What is this, a commentary? I'm a fan, big brother. There are also plots from all over the world that can be interspersed casually, and some private goods can be added without being casual. . Most of those who can read the fanfic have basically read the original work. There is no need to explain so much, you can just write about daily life. . . What's the point of this practice? Look at the anime practice time. Just jump down the date. . I think the bald head fitness method is most suitable for you. Just do a little exercise every day. There are only a few chapters here. Take a look for yourself and see for yourself how many interesting sentences there are in one chapter. They are all filled with various explanations. .

What should Bibi Dong say? I personally think that Bibi Dong and Tang San are not good people. Bibi Dong was adopted. Without Wuhundian, he would have starved to death in that corner or been killed as an evil soul master. You eat so many resources from others and still run away from them. If it were you, are you angry? I would have used the resources to raise you to raise a dog. It would be a hybrid beast that is about 60,000 to 70,000 years old. If it were me. If you want to run away, I can just kill Bibi Dong and expel her from the Wuhun Store. Everything you have is given by the Wuhun Palace. It is reasonable for me to take it back. Only the Wuhun Palace can awaken the martial arts for civilians. Without the Wuhun Palace, she cannot awaken her martial soul.

Luo Liba Suo, it's all about explanation and setting! ! !

It's so watery that I can't wait to lose more than half of each chapter. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading ten or twenty chapters.

Author, stop writing emotional lines, it's so embarrassing. I got goosebumps all over my body.

When did Li Wei become a villain? He is just cannon fodder