Myriad Worlds: Starting with a Broken Engagement with the Xiao Family

I haven't read the book yet, so I'll give you my thoughts based on the introduction. You said you were going to break off the engagement after you became a man. Why were you breaking off the engagement? Do you need to break off the marriage? You can just become brothers when we meet. You're a man, why do you want to break off the engagement? Become brothers directly.

If you turn back into a man, what's the point of traveling through Nalan?

So he turned back into a man, not a female protagonist in the name of transformation? That's okay

It turns out that the protagonist can change from female to male, so you don't necessarily need to break off the engagement. You go to the Xiao family and say that because Xiao Yan is dead, you plan to become a male and plan to protect and marry Xiao Yan, so now you only need Xiao Yan to change into a female. If you don't agree, break off the engagement, and the theory of tearing down the house and opening windows will never go out of style...

The writing is very natural, just do what comes to mind. The tone and attitude of the words are not right, and there is no consideration for rationality. The idea is indeed good, but the plot is unreadable.

The protagonist was originally a man who traveled through time in Doupo and became Yanran and then turned into a man again. If you want to see a story about the heroine's transformation, you can go ahead.

I want to be Xiao Yan's man. Marry Yanzi home and hand in yogurt every day.

Xiao Yan said: Isn't it just marriage? Men don't seem to be incompetent. Brother, you smell so good. No retreat, no retreat. In 3 years, I will call your house and propose to you.

I feel like a lot of details are not in place. I can't just tell the story about the talents and IQs of the people in the original work. Those who can establish a sect and leave their names behind are all very capable.

Brothers and sisters, the exposure resources and follow-up recommendations of the new book issue are currently limited, and there are many people queuing up. Now everything is decided by the pursuit of reading. Especially, the number of paid readers accounts for the highest proportion. Therefore, please do not keep it during the new book period. Now even if a book is recommended, it will be taken down halfway if the book is not read enough. The so-called follow-up reading refers to the number of viewers who have read the latest chapter within 24 hours after it was released. And this effective pursuit of reading is not just about turning over, it is necessary to read the latest chapter for more than one minute! Nowadays, there are too many cases where many books are sold to death during the new book period. So, please, don't save books, it will really kill people.