Immortality Begins with Qi-Eating

It would be very embarrassing to pretend to be B before you are strong.

It's irritating to see, Ren Qingxue is so kind to you, why would you want to be a junior sister? Are you crazy?

He actually cooperated with Lin Xi and married his previous master. You don't have to do this to repay your kindness. Am I a bitch? Keeping your pig teammates next to you is afraid that your cultivation will be too smooth and you will die early, and you will make the person next to you hate you. No master wants to marry the slave he has humiliated before, just like no one wants to marry a dog.

After reading 10 chapters, I watched the main character 3 times. Feeling a little poisonous

Chapter 14 is what this is about. I just mentioned that I have a bad character, and then I start fighting with others. I didn't expect that the protagonist dares to fight with others even if he has no experience in fighting with others. Isn't he afraid of losing the game and everything will be in vain?

Take it and read it, if you really choose to marry Lin Xiaodie, then this novel can be cut. It is already different from your original intention. This is a big poisonous point.

Find a factory to make screws

Author, I suggest that you might as well write a protagonist who helps the Lin family after becoming rich, or the protagonist's talent makes the Lin family invest like a dog...

Something is wrong with the new chapter. Has the author changed the outline? !

It's okay for now, but I don't feel like the author is a newbie.

The poisonous articles on the panel will hit the streets sooner or later

I've been reading since I was in grade zero. The more I read, the less I can read. Now, including your book, I can't read more than 10. I'm tired of reading other books that pretend to be invincible. Now I only pay attention to the concise plot and reasonable logic of the book, and do not deliberately lower the enemy's IQ. Your book is consistent with everything except marrying Lin Xiaodie. I can see that you are not a new author. Marrying Lin Xiaodie means opening a harem. Can you write it well? Or do you have to marry a wife to practice Qi? Aren't you afraid that the enemy will find your weakness in the future? This plot of marrying a wife does not follow the logic of normal people. If the protagonist has cheats, he must develop well. If others treat you well, you must marry others. If you don't marry, you will let others down. What kind of logic is this? It's not that you fell in love with the other person at first sight and you have no meaning in life if you leave him. Why should you marry him and leave yourself a big weakness? Your book is concise and logical in style. This style should be written well, without adding such illogical elements as marrying a wife early and leaving a fatal weakness for the enemy. In addition, the unexpected and reasonable or the ups and downs of the story can further improve the writing level. If your book is 95% of the books that are pretentious and invincible plug-ins, I will not read them. These books are only suitable for students or recent graduates, not for people like me who have been reading for many years. Don't be influenced by others.

All I can say is that it feels very similar to the previous book, and you didn't even change the cover.