The Hedgehog Immortal of the Mortal World

Animals seeking immortality by joining incense-burning religious ceremonies—this can't be called seeking immortality; it's just seeking divine intervention.

What a ridiculous thing it is that a perfectly good demon has started playing the role of a merit-based sword immortal. I'm speechless.

Hu Tutu has the potential to become an emperor! With just one book, *The Heavenly Official of Fortune*, he revived the Shendao (divine path) genre. There are plenty of Shendao novels that exploit others' work, but you've done it twice, even exploiting the Daoist medicine genre as well.

The protagonist always sees himself as human, which is a bit problematic. Having been human in his past life, he's still a demon in this one, making him an anomaly in the eyes of humans. Therefore, he'd better straighten out his stance and accept reality. He can help humans, but not blindly. Many writers of supernatural beast stories haven't grasped this point. The protagonist should probably keep a backup plan.

The battle between high-dimensional beings shattered dimensional fragments, which merged with the frequency of their true spirits in an instant, causing them to travel through time and form a proficiency system. The hedgehog secretly learned medical skills, entered the Dao, and walked the path of a sword immortal to protect the Dao. It would be better if it involved in incense offerings and the divine path, as that would make it uninteresting!

The outline is okay, but the writing is done in a primary school student's style—not very engaging.

Another traitor. I'm disgusted. Does he really enjoy being a spy?

I feel uncomfortable every time I see the term "invisible person". Can't we just use "soul"?

Deities should be worshipped, not nannies.

Wow... Is it time to start asking for the Five Immortals?