Family Cultivation: the Xiao Family's Path to Immortality

The overall structure of the story is quite good, and there are many systems for cultivating immortals. But there are also some problems, 1. Personally, I feel that the path of the protagonist is a bit vague, unclear, and a bit weak. 2. The spells are very monotonous. During the Qi training stage, I have no impression of the spirit-drawing technique and the spirit-transforming technique. In the later stage, Yimu Qinglei has not been used much; after the foundation is established, the spells are even more monotonous. 3. The problem of cross-realm battles. Group battles can cross-level confrontations in a short time, but don't write that the golden elixir can be killed so easily. Also, when Nascent Soul was promoted to God, it destroyed the fifth-level Zhaokong beast. This is an exaggeration. Although it was explained that Yuanying could use some methods to use magical powers to fight against fifth-level monsters, it was a bit unacceptable to kill him. He could still kill him just after he upgraded. 4. Regarding the problem of the Dragon and Tiger Golden Pill, I thought that when it came time to form the pill, I would use it for my own use. However, I used it in the early stages of foundation building and did not get much benefit. This is the golden elixir, or the golden elixir that quickly completes the golden elixir. Just this, isn't it a bit sloppy? The overall story is good, but the details are a bit problematic. It depends on whether you can endure it. Recommended for book-hungry readers. It's pretty good among the recent articles about cultivating immortals.

How does the protagonist look like a cultivator?

The writing is good, but there is too little. The protagonist is too light-hearted. He needs to be more steady.

I couldn't stand it after watching five of them. The main character looks like a ZZ. I can't figure it out.

One of the best among newly opened family articles

After reading one or two chapters, I am a little unclear about the opportunity under the mine. I hope the author can answer it. Someone in the first clan has already discovered it and did not send anyone to guard it? Secondly, when the family declined, the skills were not brought back? Not open to the tribe free of charge or with low contribution?

Half-literate, it looks awkward In order to inherit the family, the golden elixir master exchanged the family for a second-level spiritual vein that was at the forefront of the war? Are you kidding me? I can't stand the first chapter anymore

All good! I just feel that if I write like this, prices will collapse and inflation will occur. If you practice Qi, you will only need third-level spiritual stones. Then, will you have to trade the best spiritual stones to buy things in the future? Is this period of cultivating immortals an ancient period? The products are so rich, be careful not to overwrite it.

The good guy didn't take good care of him, so he felt a little embarrassed if two people died? ?

The protagonist's temperament is to cultivate immortality. If he encounters a demon cultivator, he may suffer a loss in a battle with the demon clan. I hope he will change his temperament after some setbacks and grievances in the later stage.

You even deleted my comment, I'm speechless, the family has lost the heroine, how can you have a child with yourself?

I have been unable to access online reading, and there are no smart recommendations. It seems that there is a trend of being listed on the shelves 😂

Family Food: The background story and characterization are both remarkable, but perhaps it is a new book, and the background of the novel is slowly unfolding. I feel that the author wants to write a novel that softens the setting of Chinese history and prehistoric times. However, the background story is too grand and easy to write. If a newcomer works part-time as an author, it will be more difficult to write. Prices and typos need to be carefully controlled by the author, otherwise they will affect the overall look and feel of the novel.

Is there a heroine? I feel like it would be better if the family cultivator has a heroine.

At first, I thought that this Hongchendie with this space bloodline and free and uninhibited character was following the route of Zhuang Zhou Mengdie. I didn't expect to open up a new world of mortals.

Nowadays, mortal sex is no longer popular, and everyone is tired of seeing it.

There is a book about family history and no harem. What are these authors thinking? A studio novel?

Author, consider transforming yourself into a puppet, which can be updated 24 hours a day.

Such a beautiful book, please feel free to post it.

The writing is very nice. Why have I never seen it before? 😰

As an old book fan, the writing is pretty good and worth recommending.

The first sentence of the book's introduction doesn't fit in with cultivating immortality. Making a movie? . . .

Holy crap, it's so beautiful. Is this an old author?

Borrowing a building and recommending yourself [Family Cultivation: I Have a Palm Immortal Mansion]