Start from the Absurd World

The narration should be plain and simple. I can't stand the kind of rant-type narration.

It's okay. Just tj. I've subscribed to more than 700 books. Without tj, I've seen less than 100 disciple-level books. I prefer reading new books. On average, 6 out of 7 books.

Alas, keep writing reviews First of all, let's talk about the advantages of this book! The advantage of this book is that the author sets off the atmosphere very well. This atmosphere is of great benefit for horror novels like this. And I found that the author's writing style is still good, compared to most new authors, and the author's setting is relatively clear. Of course, it is limited to the early stage, and the author The author protrudes the golden finger from the side rather than from the front, which is worthy of praise. The conflict set up by the author can also be said to be shown from the side rather than from the front. However, even so, readers can quickly discover this point, which is worthy of praise. Novels like this can generally capture readers. Urgent Mind gives readers a good reading experience, but I still want to talk about some shortcomings of this book. First of all, the shortcoming of this book is the lack of descriptions of some environmental factors. Environmental factors are very important for horror novels like this. There are also descriptions of some foreshadowing factors that give people a very direct feeling. The most important thing is that Well, the fantasy factor is very useful for all types of novels, but this novel does not fully reflect it, so I ask the author to try his best to change it. I hope the author can finish the book. In fact, the author has already written it very well, and there is no need for major changes. He can write slowly, revise slowly, and finish the book. I hope the author will become a god soon and I hope this book can be completed. It's not easy for every newbie. Don't be afraid of single-player. Every newbie comes from single-player. Come on! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Seeing the plot of the first investigation in another world, there are many unreasonable things. First of all, based on the hundreds of thousands of people in Huilin City who traveled through another world, the description of the travelers eating grass porridge in the newcomer dormitory, the vegetable market, the investigation of the missing chickens, and other details, it seems that the food resources should be insufficient. According to what Charles said, the resources are good and there is no problem with energy, so there should be no shortage of minerals. According to the introduction to the time traveler, there is a textile factory inside the factory, which shows that there is no shortage of such industrial raw materials. According to the fact that Huilincheng's power system can maintain the city's basic needs, it means that there is at least hydropower or thermal power, otherwise it cannot be driven. According to the fact that Huilincheng can also use cars to travel around the city (such as vans in the book), it means that the oil and gas resources are not bad, and the urban roads are also not bad. According to the description of the black chimney, there is also coal as a fuel. According to the fact that Charles is a Westerner, it means that there are people from other countries in Huilin City, or Westerners living in the East. Also, Charles said that there are no more advanced weapons, which means that there are basic firearms. According to what Charles said was a time traveler three years ago, and the buildings in Huilin City, it means that Huilin City has existed for more than twenty years. If it has not existed for more than twenty years, then it means that more than 90% of the hundreds of thousands of people should be time travellers. According to the death ratio at the beginning and the survival of the different world, more than five million people must survive. According to the architecture of Huilincheng and Charles's driving, it shows that the city is very big, which is normal. There are hundreds of thousands of people without high-rise buildings. If you refer to ancient times, you will know that it is ridiculously big. According to the reference to a population of hundreds of thousands, it means that the population is at least 200,000. Everyone knows this concept. How to describe hundreds of thousands in China? In fact, everyone basically uses the reference to around 350,000. According to the time traveler and the buildings, there is no shortage of information on the complete early industrial system. So what is the reason why a semi-modern city with a population of hundreds of thousands, an almost 100% literacy rate, and a peak steam industry that never sets in Great Britain has no industrial development? No weapons manufacturing? Is gunpowder difficult? Is it difficult to make steel? Is it difficult to burn cement, burn bricks and dig out sand? As for the performance of this power system in the book, when those supermodels don't know the existence of power and it is just a background, industrial development is still optimal.

My reading experience is that in horror novels, once the scary thing speaks, it will no longer be scary.

I urge all book friends to continue reading, the new book will nourish you 😢

It started well, but it was very frustrating after the first scene, such as the foreshadowing of a sister, and the encounter with the first wild mission boss while casually strolling on the road. It was too deliberate.

When I saw a woman on the profile, I knew it was a dog-licking article.

I feel bored after joining the official organization. What's going on? I am asking too much...

After reading ten chapters, I feel like I don't like it. Physical monsters that can be directly attacked with weapons are too boring.

A good book, the logic is tight, and the important characters are not stupid at all.

A typical good book series that is not popular, the author should promote it

I think the author should not cut it, but open it in two parts. There is no need to rush this book. First, change the outline and re-imagine it, and then there will be no rush.