I Am Uchiha: Split Konoha

It's not impossible to write about politics, and it's indeed good. But brother, you write like a ninja. The key is that I haven't seen any fights in Naruto fandoms for a long time. I only had a fight with Kakashi halfway through watching it. My grandma likes it a lot, but I haven't seen you develop. It's not that development is not allowed. I saw you have developed in Chapter 86. Even if it's a slow start, I'll accept it if there are more small fights. I don't know when you can start. Just like the dog-head stacking q, you tm stacked it for almost 30 minutes, and the level 6 was a big wave. Then it showed us the dog-head stacking q. The family was almost gone, but you were still separated by the stacking q, and all the readers ran away. It takes a while to develop and fight for a while. We have to watch and post with our sister, or we can't survive without fighting.

The forty-sixth book in full order. This is also a full-book subscription that I regret. In fact, I felt pretty good before seeing the third generation eldest son and daughter-in-law appear. After the appearance, it was a four-faced novel with Naruto's name on it, and it contained a lot of the author's personal items. Let's talk about politics. Anyone who has watched Naruto will know that Kishimoto himself has a hard time justifying himself. There is no point in forcing a conspiracy. The most important thing is that in a world with extraordinary power, strength is everything. Let's talk about the harem. Other than knowing which ones to fall in love with, I don't have any sense of accepting girls. The last passionate fight, apart from the last bit of space, there is really very little. Also, I don't know if I missed or deleted the Dragon Vein section. It was inexplicable. I don't know when it started. No matter who writes a Naruto fanfic, it seems that they have to dig up a little conspiracy here and there on the third generation and the advisory board, and a little political intrigue. It doesn't have the taste of historical political intrigue. A good royal and bloody fighting anime must be a Machiavellian novel (if you like to watch plots, wouldn't it be better to read the history of officialdom and shopping malls)? If you really want to write it, can't you agree to the reform of the ninja world?

I am reading the study version, even if I get scolded, I still have to support the author of the post~ First of all, the writing in the front of this book is really messy, Goldfinger is not up to par, and the protagonist's machinations are awkward But starting from the middle period (more or less The third war ended, the protagonist drove Tsunade's cart), and the book started to look good Especially the plot after the Sarutobi clan got the script of the night of genocide, and the Ino, Deer, and Butterfly Alliance fell apart, which was very refreshing But towards the end of the book, The author did not control the rhythm well. The whole story is full of battles and plot twists, which is a bit boring. However, the author also said that his family members were sick, which affected his creative state In addition, the protagonist of this book is a dark and voluptuous person, not upright and upright enough. Black Naruto used too much force (although the original Naruto did rely on the halo of the protagonist to do whatever he wanted), which was somewhat uncomfortable Overall rating: 3.5 Points (out of 5 points), some plots, such as the night when the Sarutobi clan was annihilated as mentioned above, were super cool

Since when did writing about Naruto fanfics have to include conspiracy theories, whether it is good or bad, it seems that it will not be written without conspiracy theories. The loopholes are indeed Kishimoto's fault, but using conspiracy theories to fill the loopholes, good blood will be messed up, and conspiracy theories are easy to grasp if not grasped well. It's easy to say that some authors are not good at it, so they can only cover up their own shortcomings by denying Kishimoto's settings and creating secondary settings. But I think the author's writing style is okay, but it shouldn't be. The Naruto fandoms in Qidian are basically mixed with conspiracy theories. I have never finished reading any of them. I don't want to read them when I see conspiracy theories.

"My Struggle" Author: Nami Ninja Published at the end of the Third Ninja War Content Introduction: Studying medicine cannot save the ninja world...

Let's talk about your feelings: 1. If you have a system and don't use it, if you talk about downplaying the system, it's better not to have it in the first place and just give the protagonist a genius talent. 2. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the author does not just want to write for fun, but uses the ability of foresight to gain benefits from it. In fact, this is very good, but the protagonist always portrays something, feels that power is good, and is addicted to power (you can read the description by yourself, anyway, it feels like the protagonist is addicted to power)..., But The author probably wants to write about the growth of the protagonist later on, but the protagonist's strength is not increasing, but his ambition is increasing. Again, if there is a system, make good use of it (the author is the mastermind behind the system, so there is no need to have a system.), Or the protagonist should not have a system at the beginning and grow by himself. Anyway, it looks a bit awkward. 3. I keep talking about zz. To be honest, I am not underestimating this work, but it is really boring to watch the intrigues of several small villages. In a world with extraordinary abilities, I only pursue strength first, and other things are just nonsense and empty talk (in reality, only people with bullets can sit down and talk). Anyway, the feeling after watching it is that the protagonist's strength is a bit suppressed (for example, I feel When you wake up and write a magatama wheel eye, you can directly get the magatama peak. If you exchange it for other things, it will be the potential. Forget the potential, you still have to spend 10 million to exchange for the seal←_←This exchange for the seal is probably the most controversial in the early stage) 4. I just feel it for myself. Let's see if it can help the author in the future. If I'm wrong, just treat it as if I didn't say it

Konoha is a terrorist organization, whoever supports it and whoever opposes it.

Definitely the best explanation of political struggle in Naruto.

I seriously doubt that the author was inspired by the idea after watching Kuangbao Being a teacher, marrying a sister-in-law, and becoming a clan leader There is also this conspiracy, the taste of deception on both sides It's perfect, Naruto has become Chinese.

It was discovered that the system or bloodline is what makes Naruto stronger, so why are there no talented people who create their own system? Talent flow is actually reasonable, let me just say a few points. 1 The protagonist of the talent stream is undoubtedly a genius, because he has a strong soul and strong chakra in two lifetimes, and his ninja talent is comparable to or slightly beyond that of people like Minato Shisui Itachi. Reaching the Kage-level powerhouse around the age of 20, because of the prophet, he learned Sage Mode and Flying Thunder God, which makes him a little invincible, only below Madara Hashirama. Secondly, learn Yin Seal, increase the upper limit of chakra, and become proficient in sealing techniques. 2 Many people think that only the Otsutsuki clan can reach the Six Paths level. I just want to say that it is just because the ninja system is not perfect yet. First of all, ninjas are only a thousand years old, and the six paths themselves do not have a complete system. They all rely on the strength of their bloodline talents, and they only spread the chakra system. Secondly, for thousands of years, the ninja world has been at war. The vast majority of ninjas do not live to be 30 years old. They cannot even reach the theoretical upper limit of strength, let alone innovate and improve the chakra system. Just like the thousands of years of progress in the feudal era, it is not as good as the decades of the industrial revolution. Just because the chakra system is not strong now, you cannot assume that the upper limit is not strong. You must pass the Otsutsuki bloodline. If Tsuchikage can develop blood stains and eliminate them, we know that the system can be improved. Modern science relies on education and the popularization of knowledge. The ninja world has always been a monopoly of various secret arts by a few families. In addition, the life span is short, even if there is only one thing to develop in a thousand years, it will be the same as in the feudal era. 3 There are several directions for the protagonist to finally reach the Six Paths level. First of all, chakra is synthesized from cells and spiritual energy, which corresponds to Yin and Yang Escape. Therefore, the protagonist must give priority to developing various Yin and Yang escapes, which should be able to increase the strength and quality of chakra. Secondly, there is no training system for chakra, it all relies on refining, and there are no special organs to preserve it, but some chakra usually wanders in the meridians. At this time, Yin seal is a good entry point, and sealing technique can replace Dantian and the like. It is entirely possible to perfect the sealing technique to make chakra stronger all the time. The perfect immortal mode can continuously strengthen the body and evolve towards the immortal human body. In the later stage, a large amount of natural chakra can be used to fight against the Six Paths level. In terms of ninjutsu, there is no doubt that necromancy is a space ninjutsu, so space ninjutsu is not as unfathomable as imagined. The space ninjutsu system is perfected around the Flying Thunder God. Finally, he completes his own evolution through qualitative changes in chakra and improves the essence of life. These methods require a lot of time, but Naruto has the clone technique to share the part. You can find a few more teammates to study different directions. For example, Tsunade perfected the Yin sealing system, Minato perfected the Flying Thunder God system, Minato's wife perfected the sealing technique system, etc. In short, Taoist friends and teamwork are very important, and the position of Hokage is also indispensable. The protagonist and Tsunade are at their best at the same time, and are expected to complete their transformation in their fifties.

I feel that the political descriptions in it are very realistic. In the world of Naruto, politics is simply a knife that kills people without blood. The reason why everyone thinks there is something wrong with Uchiha is not because the second generation started talking about evil Uchiha brats. When the upper-class characters have the right to speak, the lower-class characters can only be defined. Just like White Fang's suicide. I have always felt that the Uchiha clan is miserable, and the top masters all have some problems. Obito was fooled by Madara, Shisui and Itachi were fooled by Danzo and the Third Generation. But Danzo and the Third Elder Group are the most disgusting people. Others have done the dirty work and reaped the benefits. Some of the immortals lived longer. Itachi, who was scolded the most, died in his twenties. Itachi was really a tragic person who was brainwashed and deceived.

Well written, this is called conspiracy. It is considered the first echelon in Naruto fan fiction. Come on, keep up the good work.

Flames fall from the sky, and the big tree longs for light. The high temperature causes the leaves to wither and the branches to burn. The roots buried in the ground are still greedily absorbing nutrients, breaking through the thick bark of the old wood and growing twisted branches. The fire continues to grow, and the leaves wither in pieces. The water was extinguished, but all the heroes came together. There are too many annual rings. This is his history. It has nothing to do with the branches or leaves. It is completely denied. Birds playing with fire will bring everything and take everything away. Good day, the late sun, the light of sunset, praise the night, praise the moon, praise the sun, praise tomorrow, cut down the big tree. (*´I`*)

There are constant poisonous points. Why are there so many good reviews? Isn't it because of the review control? A Kakashi seal is actually more expensive than a kaleidoscope, and even if you exchange it for Kakashi, you won't exchange it for Uchiha Itachi's, poison, and three magatama Uchiha have the strength of jounin, but the protagonist says that he is the most special jounin, and he forcibly suppresses his strength.

It is said that reform requires bloodshed, but not many people have died so far. The problem of Hiruzen's regime will always remain. A representative of an interest group with different voices and delusions of seizing power again is the biggest offense to the rulers. After exposing corruption, it is impossible to have a decent ending in the original work. Ino, Deer, Butterfly, Sarutobi and other tribes just moved outside the village. As for the delivery of interests, maintaining wood The number of Ye's ninjas is okay, but the benefits of so many years must be spit out, break their backbones, and use the delivered benefits to develop the family of supporters. If they want to reform, they should be thorough. If they are hesitant, what can they do if they kill them? The reason is that no one who has successfully seized power in history has not fought all the way. Reputation can be whitewashed, and the reform of three generations of immortality is a joke.

The extraordinary world does not focus on extraordinary power, but engages in conspiracies, politics, and worldliness like ordinary people? Putting the cart before the horse. When readers look at Naruto fanfiction, what they see is how the protagonist masters powerful power, breaks all the rules, tramples the world under his feet, and does whatever he wants... But you make the protagonist obsessed with power? Playing games within the framework of rules set by others? Sorry, I think you, the author, are not suitable for writing extraordinary novels. At least the extraordinary world you show is not what an extraordinary world should look like...

I have also caught up with the latest chapter. As expected, I am too immersed in the so-called political description This is a world where all laws are unified. You don't need to reach the Six Paths. As long as you reach the level of Uchiha Madara Senju Hashirama, you can basically say that you are rampant and the world has to surrender at your feet. Because it's very simple. In theory, these people can be piled to death, but this is a theory. In fact, it is impossible. You have to ensure that all the ninjas from all over the world have to unite, and you have to ensure that the other party does not escape. Both sides must fight hard on the frontal battlefield and both sides do not flee. Only by fighting until the last person is there can they be piled to death. And for the strong, it is impossible not to have followers. This is caused by the strong nature. In fact, even if you only reach the level of the Third Raikage, as long as you are not stubborn and stubborn, you will not be killed by others. If the Third Raikage wants to run away, it is absolutely impossible for the Earth Ninja Village to crowd him to death. I think this book is now over 800,000 words long, and I guess half of the plot is missing. Do you want to write a pure Naruto fanfic of two to three million words? Then it will definitely be very watery, very watery, because if you don't add Boruto and you just use Shippuden, he can't support a two to three million word fan novel, and it must be mixed with a lot of water. Just like the plot I'm watching now, I feel that after watching it for a week, the plot doesn't advance much, and the protagonist is just there to do nothing. I just have no desire to continue reading. And now the system has been hidden. If you don't want to write, then don't set up this cheat system in the first place. You write it and then it is hidden. Why did you write it? Can't you just disguise the ability you want as a golden finger and give it to you all at once? You said that in the mortal world, only people betray the country, not the country betrays people. So in a world where great power is united, is it the people who betray the country or the country and the people?

Hello, author, I have copied your book and published it on other websites. The response has been extremely high. Please update it more quickly. Don't keep my readers waiting. The author hopes that you will understand what is good and what is bad!

After a long time, it's still 1 Magatama. Balancing a pig's feet is not balanced like this.

I have seen many people who want to engage in politics and revolution in Hokage, and their level is quite good. But the background of Naruto's original work is not these things. He is youthful and passionate, and he is a brilliant ninjutsu. You can use this angle to cut in, but you can't always be entangled in politics, let alone let the protagonist be trapped in politics. To be honest, the plot of Sarutobi Shinnosuke and Sarutobi Umeko has not been done very well recently, and it has deviated from the core orientation of online literature-a reading experience dominated by emotional catharsis. This is the origin of Shuangwen. In the past, the protagonist followed Orochimaru, always took the initiative to cause troubles, took the initiative in things, and it was clear that the political literacy at this time was the highlight. However, the recent plot seems to have a good final result for the protagonist, but the middle process was very passive and was crazy calculated by others. Sarutobi Umeko's death was too dull and did not bring me emotional pleasure. The loss of pleasure was obvious, giving me a sense of embarrassment and political frustration. The essence of online writing is emotion. It only needs a little bit of logic. If it is more vernacular, it is double standards. I can use politics to make profits, but I cannot be bound by politics. This is the cool thing about online writing that I want to read.

The front part is okay, but the back part is really simple! In addition to chatting with F4, there is still chatting! It's as smelly and long as an old lady's foot wrap! I kept mentioning the nonsense about F4 over and over again, just like a semicircle with Alzheimer's disease, always saying "Xia Ke Xing in the second year of Yuan He"! You are writing about Uchiha, not Nara! Why are you so mean-spirited! Hurry up and grab the knife

Burning Release Ninja——Ye Cang

I, Uchiha Ye, crush the darkness with thunder, carry out love and justice, unify the ninja world, and stand at the top of the ninja world. 😃😃😃

A bad book. You are a Naruto fan who doesn't write about strength but politics. You are still a systematic protagonist. The system also requires settings. You need gold coins in the early stage, but you will become lucky later. Even if you use Double Kaleidoscope + Hashirama Cell, you still serve as a dog to Konoha. This is still the Konoha after the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Obito Single Eye + Hashirama Cell dare to dare Konoha alone. You have Double Kaleidoscope + Hashirama Cell, and behind you are the Hyuga branch + Uchiha. + Orochimaru + Mangekyo Kakashi + Mangekyo Shisui, you are so scared of me. The only third generation Danzo Jiraiya in Konoha is the two old men. Jiraiya can read it. You know the trump cards of the third generation and Danzo clearly. If you are exhausted and add Tsunade, you are afraid of blood. After the identification, the protagonist is a turtle. I also read the next one and likes to engage in self-mutilation and cheating on women's feelings. I vomited. I will not read this author's books in the future.

This book is really a pity. The author writes it very well, but unfortunately it is putting the cart before the horse. Power is an extension of violence, and strength is everything, rather than indulging in so-called Machiavellian tactics.

There's no point in talking about things in their early stages. Naruto is a finished work. If you don't look at it as a whole, what's the point? Conspiracy theories are readers' reasonable interpretations of contradictions in works, why the contradictions are the author's problem and not the readers'. If you don't say that F4 is a good person, then explain why the White Fang can't be ranked first, and Kakashi can't be ranked first in the mission; explain why Orochimaru's human experiment is not possible, and Danzo's human experiment is nothing; explain why Naruto's life was so miserable when he was a child, and Konohamaru was a master when he was a child? Don't use the excuse that you didn't want to make a long story in the early stage. This is a complete story. Why it wasn't written well is not what the audience should care about.

Will of Fire can't just talk the talk but not do the deeds. Is there any famous scene in Will of Fire? Just like Zhang Liao's power in Xiaoyaojin, 800 cavalry attacked Sun Quan's 100,000 troops and went straight to Sun Quan's own town. Eight hundred cavalry destroyed Sun Quan's command center. Only a few dozen of Zhang Liao's men withdrew from the encirclement, and the remaining several hundred people shouted, "General, are you going to abandon us?" Zhang Liao then led dozens of cavalry back to the encirclement to rescue the remaining several hundred people.

This fan is actually not the hottest. . I can only say that the starting point is really dark. The author of this article is really good at writing daily. I would like to make a suggestion. One of the great things about fan fiction is the improvement of strength. If you describe it more, it will be perfect. It is recommended that the next novel be about pirates, as it will have more room for development.

Those of you who have recently complained that the protagonist has a harem are superficial, this is the most appropriate way to save them. Anko has already been soul-searched and almost became an idiot. She was hit in many ways. Pig's Knuckles took a strong shot to calm the situation and became Anko's only support. Oh no, pig's feet are the only refuge for those who may have to burn bridges. In the original novel, Sarutobi Asuma's ability to catch up with Kurenai is probably due to his powerful background. The middle-aged person's old-fashioned look is far different from the protagonist who strives to get ahead. Kurenai's character is more like a pig's feet. Shisui died early, Weasel accomplished nothing, Uchiha exterminated the clan, Kakashi wasted his talent, the Hyuga branch voluntarily died for various political interests, the fourth generation guarded Soy Sauce, and Orochimaru's old department was purged. To put it into detail, the protagonist saved many people's lives. It was an act of a saint.

The system of using krypton money to upgrade ninjutsu is the most disgusting, but the main character is supposed to be a loser who can't learn anything and can only talk nonsense.