The Fourth Disaster: I, Slime, Am Definitely Not a Kind Person

I hope the whole game won't affect real life😞

If there is a problem with this lord, it should be corrected.

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It seems to be okay so far, nothing special about it. But it still needs to be raised.

I feel like the introduction of characters in the first few chapters is confusing. This fourth-day disaster will introduce many characters at the beginning, and their unique IDs are not easy to remember. The author, you also added everyone's real name and mixed it up, so you were afraid that I would remember who is who, right?

Seedlings, catch up to the latest There are currently no major poisonous points in the plot, setting, or characters For me, the core reading experience lies in the nonsensical fun brought about by the conflicts between the characteristics of the player group and the indigenous world, and the role of the protagonist as the mastermind behind this. Although the author's relevant plot design is not very brilliant, it is adequate. The shortcomings are also very obvious. I don't know if the author was affected by this chaotic state. The story he wrote was very urgent and messy. The main problems arise in the narrative rhythm, plot structure, and perspective switching. Specifically speaking about the reading experience, the most obvious thing I feel is that the author cannot write the plot thoroughly and cleanly. He starts from the beginning and then leaves it there. The plot is like this, and the plot is even more so. Many plots only have the beginning and no follow-up. It is even close to a notice. This is urgent. Chaos is inseparable from urgency. Frequent switching of narrative perspectives, taking a relatively long section of text (compared to the length of the plot itself) and then continuing, is actually changing the plot before it is finished. Incoherent text and no other design connections make it difficult to have a reading experience, which makes it rushed and confusing. In fact, the author does not isolate every plot or plot, but it is difficult to have a sufficient reading experience for those plots or plots that are fully expressed. On the one hand, it is not enough to provide an impressive experience. Generally speaking, the two ways novels solve this problem are either through more words and ink, or through more powerful and vivid writing. On the other hand, the bad experience brought by other broken plots and plots will affect the adjacent plots and plots, not to mention that the connection between plots and plots in the book is either stiff or accompanied by frequent and confusing narrative perspective switching. Changing it day and night is not a good thing. Characters, atmosphere, and descriptions can all be crazy, which can become a feature, but the author himself cannot be messy.

Did the author draw this from "These players are all slimes"?

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Coming! 🧡ྀི💛ྀི❤️ྀི

Your sense of déjà vu is too strong, right?

Good looking and non-toxic! You can hit your family members!

It's a very interesting book. The plot is like a game about dungeons. It summons the player to become a goblin. This is a very innovative way for the player to transform into a slime and a ball.

I came here after seeing that there is no heroine. I wonder if the author has seen Slime and wants to be an evil god. I suggest that the author punches hard and turns into an unspeakable or ancient evil thing.

**Tower What exactly is a tower?

In the eyes of ordinary people, aren't the mechanical ascension faction lunatics? Well, although those who engage in biological ascension are not very normal. From the perspective of ordinary people, the degree of acceptance of absolute mechanical ascension and giving up the body should not be that high. Well, biological ascension, well, if it affects the use of technological items. The bottom line that ordinary people can accept, I think. It should achieve physical strengthening and genetic optimization. It's difficult to do it online. Mechanical ascension can only reach brain-computer interface. If other things are promoted online, they will encounter a lot of resistance. Well, the most likely thing is bloodshed. . . . To sum up, you can't take too big a step. Take it step by step and accept it step by step. There is also mechanical ascension. The old mechanical ascension personally believes that the metaverse is a chronic suicide and the potential to give up all civilization. There can be a metaverse, but we cannot all be obsessed with the original universe. The original universe used for reality is good.

By the way, you are acting like a fool, right? It's really a mess! Just a few chapters after so long? Is it enough to watch for two hours?

The last few pictures are so confusing! Curious

I haven't seen it for a long time, but you are still updating,