Mortal: If You Can't Be a Prince-In-Law, You Have to Break Through the Taozu

Thanks to all the book friends for their support, this concludes the Human World chapter (Chapter 40) There are many excellent fans of the Human World, and I believe that all book friends have read it. This game takes the spiritual world as its home ground. The spiritual world is so vast and there are many unexplored areas. I believe it will give everyone a different spiritual world. The chapter on the spiritual world will be launched soon, thank you for your support.

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Forcing the protagonist to have a short lifespan is disgusting

If you don't have the strength to complain, just complain about that person who is a mortal who carries around with you in the Immortal Mansion. You can't live without Han Li's Little Green Bottle. Force feeding poison

The changed name is too long, not as good as the original name

New year, new journey, keep updating!

The protagonist doesn't know the plot, and doesn't know what's the point of writing this. What's interesting about it?

If Luo Hu is the heroine, I admit that you are the best.

Forcibly arranging the plot of the personal world, it is better to start writing directly from the spiritual world, which seems nondescript.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

"Knocking on the Heavenly Gate with a Sword", mortal flow, sword cultivator, decisive killing, all Taoist brothers please send me a message to support, thank you, thank you.

What's the point? The protagonist is wandering around without knowing the plot? Doesn't it feel too artificial to forcefully involve the original characters into the plot?

I don't even know why you forced me to write about the two girls from the Mo family. I was speechless when I read it.

Author, this book of yours is just as bad as the previous one. It's just trying to attract some readers in the name of a mortal fanfic. It won't last long. Otherwise, just write a serious mortal fanfic.

An incarnation gives you the feeling of building a foundation. Mo Nu and Xutian Temple are simply forced additions.

Let the protagonist come here to love the world.

Forget it, there are mortal fans who like you

Looks weird, lacks depth and structure

I wrote a fan fiction about a native, and after reading dozens of chapters, I didn't find anything interesting about it.