Global Cards: I Create a Beautiful Girl Deck

Hello everyone, I am Pujie Yin. Because this book has many problems and has been frequently criticized by readers, I have decided to revise Chapter 3 and all subsequent chapters. Subsequent updates will be reported here.

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It's too messy There is no complete line to connect the plot It's almost a chapter composed of fragments that the author suddenly thought of one by one Even after I read a few chapters, I still don't know what the world is after the protagonist travels Is it medieval or modern The plot points are very exciting But please connect these exciting points with a main line And the first light elf king didn't even see why it was said at the beginning that this was set/done in the game. Then he suddenly summoned and was unconscious Can't understand Nothing was explained Written too fast I guess the author didn't even have an outline.

What about worldview? There is no obvious explanation of the world view, and I am still confused after reading it. The first chapter says that it is about starting a journey. What is the world view of the journey you enter? There is no explanation about the world structure and so on.

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The book idea is great, but it's too messy 1. Although the memes are good, they should be in moderation. Too many memes will only affect users' engagement. Because the jokes are very dramatic, I was originally immersed in the world view of the book, but in the end, there were several jokes in one chapter, and I went back to my original state. 2. Who am I? Where am I? What should I do? 3. The scene changes too quickly, sometimes a and sometimes b The above factors make me feel that this book is very confusing. Of course, the book itself is very creative and attractive. I also believe that the content written by the later authors will definitely be of higher quality than the earlier ones. After all, everything is difficult at the beginning.

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I was quite interested at first... But after reading more than ten chapters, I felt that it was too confusing, and it was easy for people to feel that they had missed something. If the plot logic was brain-burning, I could accept it, but it was messed up with scene changes and character dialogue scenes... Also, I really don't recommend frequent jokes when writing novels. After all, this is the starting point and not the two-dimensional zone next door. Taiwan, too many jokes can easily make people tired. I don't know about other people, but personally I want to watch the plot and see the protagonist enter the card world and interact with the people in the card world according to the theme. And your dozen or so chapters are not only messy but full of jokes, and there is not much interaction and background with the card characters. Personally, this affects the reading experience.

This is the first time I've seen someone so aggressive. Didn't you even test the waters?

It's too painful, otherwise I'd cut it and write a new one