Death Crow in Blood Plague

I only saw the trip to the flooded area, so I can tell you my own feelings. The beginning and the subject matter are both good. The writing style is not particularly outstanding but it can make people feel comfortable. Other than that, it is all a problem. The first is the depressive and dark background. The protagonist can be strong, but this has nothing to do with the background, and the performance is not very good. The main line is not clear. Whether the protagonist is faltering or moving forward bravely on this road, it should make people feel how far they have gone and how far they can go. However, no matter how many times you watch it, it makes people feel lonely, as if they are not comfortable after eating marshmallows. And why are there so many Riddlers all over the place? It should be to arouse readers' curiosity. What is known, what is unknown, what is the current development, but this is not right, where is the problem, and then clear the fog or take other actions. It shouldn't be that I told you but didn't tell you, you knew but still didn't know anything, you made a series of efforts and then found out that you were lonely, this is not a curiosity at all, okay? The rhythm is not quite right either. The protagonist has no rhythm from the beginning to the end, or no matter what happens, he always feels like he's having fun. Since you are a time traveler, since you have dual capital of capital and rights, you should use them. If you have money and power, why don't you think of ways to turn it into your own advantage? And why are they all infected and in the protagonist's perception, it seems like nothing happened? ? ? The author's role setting for the protagonist shouldn't be like this. The protagonist is not three-dimensional. You still want everyone to have a sense of involvement or look forward to the protagonist's performance? The violinist is even more outrageous. The initial action is okay, you can force a protagonist who doesn't care, or the protagonist is using her to seduce. The problem is that sometimes her behavior can cause trouble. She said why not eating minced meat is normal. The main character is a downtown detective. If he doesn't kill two people every day, he feels like something is missing. He dances in gangs and darkness. People who have to bribe before doing something don't understand? ? ? ? ? Church is even more uncomfortable. It's okay for you to write a stream of consciousness. I wholeheartedly agree with it, but you can't control it. And why did you write this paragraph? Simply tell readers that the violinist seems to have a plug-in? It's even more fucking uncomfortable. If you have a stream of consciousness, just add your thoughts. You seem to be telling me that she had eaten a meal. What was this meal? It's gone! There is a lot of foreshadowing, and then this? ? ? ? ? ? ? In short, the writing is still very good, the writing style is still comfortable, there is no problem with the logic, but it is very delicate. In addition to the subject matter, it is still worth looking forward to. I hope that this book will become more and more popular in everyone's hearts like the Ember Reign.

Why is no one reading such a great book?

Open a dragon set and a bloodstone weapon building. You can share your ideas. If it's good, Guguji will add it to the book (*^ω^*)

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It's a bit of a pity that there is no heroine. Of course, this doesn't mean that I like harems. I still prefer to watch single heroines. But the biggest reason is probably because I like to flirt with mature men and innocent girls (laughs)

Hickman Abraham Well, there are a few pictures that were washed out by AI inexplicably (=^▽^=)

Carol von Rembrandt

In fact, I have always been curious about the worlds other than Yharnan, just like the worlds outside Boretania and the borderlands. These places outside the main stage of the game are basically not introduced much in the game. Yarnan is just an exclusive city famous for its blood therapy, so what will other cities in the world be like? I don't know if anyone else thinks the same way.

The popularity is very low. It is obviously written about content that is very popular. It is most likely that I was dissuaded by the introduction. The content of this book is really good, with very few fantasy masterpieces. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"819975196915793920","TopicName":"2023 Hongtu Exhibition"}{"TopicId":"575911170507 276288","TopicName":"New book recommendation"}{"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}{"TopicId":"847871037156360192","TopicName":"New book planting"}

Blood Crow

Nightingale

But after learning that her entire family, including her father, was likely to die, Carol was still very lively and showed no sense of grief. This made me feel very inconsistent.

Resurrected? ? ? I thought I was being raised to death

A rare Bloodborne fan, the last time I saw it was Diary of an Outlander, I'll save it and look forward to it.

There's no one with a right mind in there, not even one.

Resurrected😰

After reading dozens of chapters, it is another detective novel covered in fantasy. It is really too slow. The plot advances too slowly. There are at least five or six chapters in the middle that make people feel that there is no progress. Moreover, there is no heroine. The previous statement about meeting the old man and sending him to Sherlock has not been completed. There is Carol after Carol on the left. I see that there is no plot progress in her so far. After reading nearly ten chapters, it feels like I have not read it.

I spent some money here and there to get a monthly pass and gave it to you, and you did this to me

I just started reading it from the beginning, and I was a little scared when I saw the update time of the previous chapter 😭 Is it a cut or a temporary break?

I haven't read it for a year and have updated it for more than 40 chapters. I need an explanation 😡 and I forgot about this book.

It's been four months... Are you still updating?😭