The Demonic Cultivator Becomes an Immortal

You're not the same person who asked the poster on Tieba what the characteristics of the demonic path are, are you?

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I read ten chapters, and the plot moved incredibly fast, with no clear beginning and only an ending. It felt disjointed and the various conflicts were also connected very quickly, making it very uncomfortable to read.

Well, I'd say the writing is alright, but as for the truly satisfying moments, there's almost nothing. The protagonist was reborn, without any special abilities, and still gets beaten up constantly. I can't stand it anymore! Furthermore, even the sorcerer couldn't discern the word "demon" in his appearance.

The plot is nonsensical, lacking any exciting moments, and even creating a sense of frustration. Furthermore, the fact that the main characters are mostly female supporting roles is quite absurd.

The writing is decent, but I found it hard to get into. The first three chapters felt cramped; the protagonist's reincarnation, blind date, beautiful woman, demon-slaying, and treasure-hunting adventure felt like the main character was just talking to himself, launching into a series of events, making it difficult to immerse myself in the story. This is my personal reading experience, and I hope the author can maintain their passion and continue to improve.

The plot is so predictable, it's like a movie storyline.

Swordsmanship Knocks on the Heavenly Gate, a mortal's journey, full of passion, sword cultivation, decisive killing. Fellow cultivators, please teleport over to support me. Thank you, thank you.

The reader was acting strangely; the story started in the second chapter and continued until I gave up on the book.

It was written in a hurry, without any foreshadowing, foreshadowing, or main plot. Who is the protagonist? What is he doing?