There Is Indeed Something Wrong with My Tokyo Girlfriend

Finally the first time

In fact, isn't this just a copycat of the original plot? It just changed the male protagonist. It can't be said to be exactly the same, it can only be said to be very similar.

I was almost killed by a knife. Sakura did not die, but lost her memory. It can be said that she was half-killed. Moreover, there is no Sakura after the famous chapter of "Kai Zuo Jun". Each chapter has nothing to do with the previous one. This will lead to some people reading the book for a certain character, and then after reading this article, they find that there is no more behind, so they just abandon it. It is okay as a stand-alone chapter, but it is difficult to retain people if they are not connected in series.

I didn't want to watch the Pancreas movie at the end. All memories were lost and the heroine never seemed to have the disease. The world line has changed. So is she still the heroine who likes to eat pancreas? This episode is really queasy and I can't stand it anymore. You might as well end it at the moment she dies.

If I told you it was a unit drama earlier, there would be no need to waste my time. After reading the second part, I realized it was a unit drama (;´ヮ`)7 The plot is similar to the original work, so why should I read the fanfic? The same is true for the first chapter. The sword is inexplicable, the he is inexplicable, and resurrection is possible. It is not enough to cure it from the beginning, but it has to die to clear the memory and then resurrect. Forget it, why are you talking so much for nothing?

Are you asking me to relive the plot? This is really not interesting😞

You told me about the unit drama earlier. If you have a suggestion, it is best to describe it clearly in the introduction. This way you don't have to waste time.

Do you want to be the first author to write about Suzuya's journey? O_o

Unit drama, if you can't accept it, run quickly, I'm done╥╥

My suggestion is the same as the previous ones. I suggest you connect them in series. The units look very uncomfortable. If you connect them in series and write about Shura Chang, Master of Time Management, your grades will definitely be much better than now. The number of words can be improved as much as possible 😂

Miyamizu conquered Okudera, did the protagonist enjoy it? ? ? Why does it feel so weird?

How should I put it? It seems strange to write it into short stories one by one. If you want to have follow-up reading, you should connect the stories together. Otherwise, one short story will end, and readers will not like the next short story and abandon the book directly.

There are too few people who write about Yamauchi Sakura. As long as you write about Yamauchi Sakura, we will be good brothers. But this ending is too ridiculous and it is a one-part drama. I hope Sakura will be the main heroine when you write the next book.

The author's plot is inconsistent! The random stitching monster... Makes my head hurt😣

You can talk about the copy you want (limited to love)

It's more like a short unit drama novel. I don't like it very much. I can only say that it is like a short love story with the original plot If you read it with the intention of reading it as a fan light novel, it will feel very strange.

Didn't the author have the idea to create a big world from the beginning? If Makoto Shinkai's Disaster Trilogy is written together, the number of fans will definitely not be low as long as it can grasp it. After all, Suzuya's popularity is still there. The Tokyo Girlfriend Illustrated Book Next Door Mitsuha also has a lot of fans, which shows that good writing can be successful.

There is no description of the relationship between the protagonist and Hina in Weathering With You this time.

The author's writing style is quite good, but there are too many traces of the original work. I think the author can make more changes to the plot. It is best to write a true comprehensive comic world, but it must be done within one's ability. Too many stitches can easily lead to collapse. In terms of the protagonist's creation, each volume is written separately as a unit drama. I think it is difficult to see the long-term growth of the protagonist or it will be strange for the author to suddenly change the protagonist's personality ability... Maybe it is because I have read too many comprehensive comics written by other people, and I always feel that the harem Shura field is the most suitable (because the protagonist is usually bloated and does not know how to refuse or is not firm). If I'm single-posting, I prefer someone who has emotional intelligence but is very loyal. I've seen someone single-posting Kasumi Shiko before, and her writing was pretty good. In fact, if you read more about the harem, you won't want to watch it, because once the main character is not written well, it will give people the feeling of a loser falling in love with a bunch of goddesses. If it is not included, it will feel disgusting, and when it is included, it will feel very outrageous.

Find out more about Friday's trip to Suzuya

I feel like it's been a bit scripted lately, so I still need to add something of my own.

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If the author changes the introduction and then connects them in series, the results will definitely be much better. Many people lose a lot of people because of the unit drama, so it is best to connect them in series.

Suddenly I remembered that I still have comics.

I feel it, and I like the taste very much 🌙

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I was wondering if I could add some Japanese dramas.