My Tokyo Miss

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Be kind to Fujii, she has been with the lonely protagonist for so long, and the life choice machine has to lower her favorability. She is a very good girl.

Fujii Tree

Well, let me just say one thing. The plot of Friends of Animals seems to be very juvenile. Animals have similar thoughts and emotions to humans. Even junior high school students may not be able to accept it. Moreover, it is juvenile, and it is nondescript. The description of the animal's character is spoofed, with things like dog licking and shamelessness, which is very embarrassing.

Author, keep writing! It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel. It's delicate and gentle. I don't know why I felt a little melancholy after reading it. Maybe it's because the book Fujii in Love Letters touched me too deeply. The author's grasp of the environment and emotions is very good, and it feels like the romance novels and essays you read when reading. I haven't compiled words for a long time. I don't know how to express my love. I also ask the author to write well and follow his own feelings. Don't be influenced by outsiders. Write slowly and don't rush into the street. Come on...! ! ! !

It can be seen that the writing style is very good, but I think the content and events are a bit too cliche, and there are too many female protagonists. I think two or three are enough. I don't really like the teacher and the little girl who was rescued. Many of the events are just bad, but the writing style of the description is not bad, so I am actually not that disgusted. The writing is good, more from the author.

The title of the book is quite good, but it's a pity. I don't like the teacher heroine, and I don't like the bells and whistles of the system. . . The male protagonist is not a strong one, but more like Asasi. According to the author's comments, it is not to my liking at all, but it is undeniable that the writing is still good, and the writing style is also very good, but it is just not to my taste. I wish you good luck, I will be temporarily disappointed.

The front part is okay, but the back part is too cliche. It feels no different from the all-around king who writes about entertainment 😒

You said you were a eunuch, at least you finished writing it, you said you didn't have a eunuch... Your ending... It's like you were strangled to death if you were not satisfied with the book

So far, this book is okay, food and drink. I was a little surprised that Miss Chiba Nagasawa was unexpectedly not Kujo's type. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

I'm used to it. This is the fifth Japanese novel I've read. Returning to The Unfinished Eunuch, I'm ready to raise Gu. I'll just leave it on the bookshelf and see who can survive to the end.

Please support me. I hope the author will not be ungrateful and treat such a gentle, kind and lovely girl like Fujii tree well.

You are not writing about monsters. When writing a story about being able to communicate with animals, is it necessary to make the animals look like humans?

It looks great, I recommend it to you.

Personally, I think the author's eunuch is better than the messy ending.

It is rare to see such a book with such delicate emotional descriptions in Qidian. It seems that the author is also a storyteller. I hope the author can insist on finishing it and not be a eunuch. Don't sacrifice quality for speed either. Come on, great author.

See Chapter 25. I can't chew anymore. I just feel that the two heroines are somewhat seriously ill at that time, and I suggest they go to a psychiatrist or brain department. The first feeling is somewhat towards the description of Yukinoshita Yukino, but she is more paranoid than Yukino. Yukino can be said to be a chuunibyou, but she quickly mistakenly wrote about her delicate side in the first incident. I didn't realize at all that the first incident was over. The impression is still that there are two arrogant patients with light super in one step (the tsundere and the poisonous tongue have retreated from the environment) Secondly, there is no description anywhere I looked. But I feel like the kind of parasitic giant baby who thinks that money can settle everything, and that his family can settle everything. He looks at his younger sister in junior high school without hesitation and hurts people and may even cause death, thinking about settling everything. She started hurting people when she was in junior high school. According to the age of eleven or twelve years old in junior high school in China, that sister probably didn't hurt people as soon as she could walk. Where did this come from? The second pillar of Naruto was still graduating from the Ninja Academy. Naruto was stunned when he saw someone killing someone. Is this a light novel romance or a young boy's passion Sorry it's a bit extreme, I personally think the poisonous points are only up to chapter 25. To put it simply, the plot pace is too fast and the emotional description is too slow. Generally speaking, after the first event is over, you should be coquettish and you should be recognized. The introduction that should be introduced (leave some chapters to overly ease the reader's emotions) I apologize again for not instructing the author on how to write, just suggestions

The progress is too fast The male protagonist has only been in this world for more than two months and less than three months. How come he suddenly realizes that he "likes three women at the same time"? Moreover, the three female protagonists are almost running in both directions, and they are constantly exploring themselves, which is completely different from the slow progress in the early stages of other novels. And from the way I describe it, it seems like I am planning to capture three fortresses at the same time... Will the book end with less than 500,000?

A personal suggestion. If you don't understand Japanese customs, I don't recommend following the trend of writing about Japan (it's too much and it doesn't taste right). Just use the Chinese background.

This book really makes it hard to suppress the storm and calmness in my heart. I hope the author will continue to work hard (all ordered) (ง •̀_•́)ง

Daily poison guide How about this book Is there any Shen Nong?

A pure tool protagonist with no bright spots.

The first part is okay, but the second part feels too cliche when it comes to daily life, because there was a time when I liked reading this type of novel, and I thought the author would be more innovative in the plot than before. Unexpectedly, it is still about the same. After reading too much, you will feel bored and tired of aesthetics.

The author speculated in stocks and lost himself directly

Let me see who is still watching this

Another eunuch male protagonist in a stock trading novel plus Japanese Asashi?

It ended suddenly... I couldn't see the complete story, I'm so sad...

Does this book have multiple female protagonists? Are you going to torture her?

I actually think that there is experience after each experience. For example, after the physical strengthening experience, there will be a certain improvement.

Chapter 127 is finished, obviously unfinished