Versatile Mage: Heavy Water Overwhelms the World

I think there are several rules for fandom. Full-time fan - born with two lines. Douluo fan-double martial arts, licking Tang San. Doupo fellow-surname Xiao. I don't even look at any of the above three situations.

The difficulty of writing full-time also has something to do with Mo Fan's outrageous factor. The dual-type character was originally supposed to have one more type at the elementary level, but as a result, Mo Fan calculated the Soul Transmutation, and one more person added one type. His skills are such that you can kill the opponent by rolling the keyboard twice as much. The second is the cultivation of talent. Mu Ningxue, a natural soul type, spent 8 months on his first spell, but Mo Fan only spent 5 months before using Little Loach. He succeeded in dual-elements in one year. The most outrageous thing is that in the next two years, he had two elementary-level 3 spells. However, after the disaster in Bo City, he self-study in the year of the new dual-elements 3-level plus the intermediate star map and dual-elements and successfully released it. Then there was a chance encounter, two spiritual species, the demon type strengthened the body, many magic tools, and the little Flame Fairy. If you want to keep up with Mo Fan, you need to use your own cheats to keep up without taking advantage of the opportunity. Secondly, some of the paintings with wrong and outrageous styles feel unnecessary and can easily be targeted. Strictly speaking, the protagonist of the fanfiction must have high-level strength when Mo Fan is in the middle level, otherwise it will feel easier to be surpassed by Mo Fan the further he goes.

(Inspired by brainstorming with readers) 1 Homo sapiens starting in East Africa In the most ancient times, humans were just part of the beasts. At that time, they had already demonstrated wisdom that amazed the beasts, such as joint hunting and reasonable division of labor. But there is no doubt that man is a weak beast. Even if they work together, they can only hunt the leftovers in the eyes of the commanders. As for the monarchs, what do they think? Haha, they are just apes, and some cleverness is not enough to change their weak status "I don't know when, hunting snacks like this became a little challenging." A king of the tiger tribe had such a question "I know, it was after the first fire." The fox showed its flattery in this way. After the tiger suddenly realized it, he expressed his gratitude to the fox, and then ate it in one bite. Food is just food, and any efforts to build a bridge will appear weak in front of the natural chasm. Is that so? Not only that, at least people succeeded After the fire.

To be honest, there is a big problem with this book. The middle level takes too long to write. From chapter 15 to chapter 271, there are more than 260 chapters. The original book is about 114 to 663, and more than 540 chapters were written. Then, the original book has a total of 3,233 chapters. If you throw away the less important chapters, it would be at least 2,000 chapters if you compress it. So if you continue to write at your advanced pace based on the advancement speed of the original work, it is conservatively estimated that you will have to write about a thousand chapters. Apart from anything else, whether the author can grasp it is a question. Otherwise, you will compress the space of high-level super-level or forbidden spells, and how to advance the plot will also be a problem. There are also minor issues such as the battle scenes being a bit mundane, the original protagonist not participating enough, and the plot being a bit draggy. I'm curious as to how the author solves these problems?

Whoever wrote the original heroine is a genius

Doesn't the author want to write a book similar to a full-time summoner? This is an original heroine and an original plot. It can easily fall apart when written by a novice author.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt too boring. If you are so talented in the water system, why did you go to a third-rate university? Moreover, there is nothing special about that university, and there is no special treatment for the protagonist.

Overall, it seems to be well written. It can be ranked second among all the French novels I have read. As for the first full-time summoning mage, it is well deserved (this novel has mixed reviews, I only tell my own preferences, don't criticize me). I have also read the excellent novel White Tiger Pendant, and I can only say that it is not bad, but the opening of Bo City One of the female protagonists, Tang Yue, who is born with two types of characters, immediately extinguished my interest. Although I am still reading it, I just treat it as a cool article. (I saw the scene in the latest national server competition where the protagonist is alone in the 15-nation alliance. Don't say I haven't seen it, so I will scream.) This water-type unique skill book written by the author does not start in Bo City, and it does not include the original heroine. It can only be said to be a perfect avoidance of pitfalls, which directly aroused my interest. Moreover, it does not start with the four holy totems. The water system is still the answer to the later version, and it is very operable. However, I hope it doesn't end badly. Of course there is a big disadvantage: the update is too slow! Author, do you know those hard days waiting for your updates? Update once a day! 😭😭😭

It's rare to have a fan with his own ideas, and a rare indigenous protagonist, so he won't just copy the plot without thinking. Come on, author, don't stop updating, 💩 Found this by Li Tao King Kong

It's not interesting, it's quite boring. The first climax point was skipped because the Snake Clan didn't express any passion. The same goes for the rest. After reading the free chapters, I have no interest in subscribing at all. There is no sense of immersion. In the big plot, it feels like the protagonist has never been involved. He is separated from the events and is written as a pure tool. There is also the so-called protagonist's time travel, and I have read the so-called original novel several times. How is this possible? Isn't this a purely indigenous person? If you don't understand anything, forget it. If you don't learn and understand it, you have to ask others about everything you encounter, even some common sense.