Journey to the West Lingtai Square Inch

When it comes to assisting the dynasty and governing the country, it only writes about the results of copying documents and being praised by the masses, without mentioning principles, policies, and personnel processes; when it comes to becoming an immortal, it only writes about worshiping Lao Tzu and enlightening to the golden elixir, without mentioning the great dharma and planning for leaving the world. As a novel, it needs plot but not plot, artistic conception but not artistic conception. All it writes is setting and outline. Overall, the introduction is well written, the content is disappointing. Let's all leave as soon as possible. The author can think of the next book as soon as possible.

It's not so much a novel as it is writing a setting. The sense of substitution of pig's feet is too poor.

There is a shortcoming. This book has too few stories and too many truths! P. S. Personal opinion. There are too many Taoist and Buddhist theories. There is too little story, and the starting point given to the protagonist at the beginning is too high. What about the journey to the west later?

I would like to call the author the comma fairy

There is no plot at all, it's all about setting

Why, what, such, paragraph, sentence, I am tired of reading, writing, what, fun, meaning.

Why do complete sentences have to be separated by commas? Why does a complete sentence have to be separated by commas?

The author must first think clearly about what he wants to write about. Don't think of it as a conspiracy theory about Journey to the West. The setting is so lofty and very fragmented. Is there anything that can be wiped out in the book of life and death? Does the entire underworld use dead people to practice martial arts? So many people who died have changed their life and death books, so they can't be traced, right? You can either go all-out conspiracy theory and set the gods and Buddhas up so high, but when you talk about monkeys, you are just pretending to be monkeys. Same kind of Journey to the West: Take a look at the game next door and win Laojun's book. There are not so many conspiracy theories.

The author will receive the first round of recommendations for Qidian's new book at 2023-02-05 00:00:00. Thank you all for your continued support. I hope I can write better in the future so that more people can like it.

The author broke the sentence, which made me feel so uncomfortable!

It's very well written, don't write it again

This is the first time I heard that the Journey to the West system has a god-like figure like Lord Tongtian.

The whole article discusses mysteries. It actually shows that the author's writing style is stiff. ?

It's so annoying. I'm here to read a novel. You checked the information carefully. It's no problem, but can you stop showing off? You have been preaching to me there all the time, half-literate, about what, what, why should I listen to you here instead of watching the real Chinese studies that you are preaching? There are too many words piled up, and I really don't understand the story you want to tell. You start to say that you want to build a school palace in a few sentences, and then you talk about it in two or three sentences, and then you start to preach. You didn't listen to anything in the sermon, but the protagonist begins to realize. What have you realized? Suddenly he became a god, and then he became a disciple, and then he agreed, and then he became a farmer, an emperor, or a famous person. Can you tell me clearly what happened? What do you want to express? What is the role of the plot? Half the day is spent on where you are in the sky, on the earth, and among people. Where can I put science popularization? Do I need it? I'm here to read the novel. If you have any intention, please add it to the plot. Don't take classes here. It's very annoying. The plot is a mess. It's this and that. Is it interesting? It's okay for you to quote scriptures, but you do it all throughout the article. It feels like you have directly copied the entire history book. You have written these things in several chapters. It's just verbal nonsense.

This broken sentence is so broken that my head hurts. 😰😰，

This is my first time seeing a novel that is both good and bad. It is well written but has no sense of immersion. I can't understand it but I can't scold you for your poor writing, nb

Ten chapters, all in classical Chinese, are of little use.

A person with no cultural background like me can't understand it at all!

Can't you change the punctuation? Will you die if you take the time to revise the previous article?

It's too fast, I just finished posting my encouragement😔

Isn't Shangqing Heaven the heaven of Lingbao Tianzun? Is Miluo Palace the heaven of Haotian God?

The setting is very good and it can be self-explanatory, but the punctuation marks are so damn uncomfortable that it doesn't read as well as Jia Qianqian's poems.

I have been reading for almost 20 years, and this is the first time I see an author using punctuation marks to count words, and I am convinced 🙂

It's a eunuch's book, but it's a pity

Come on, author, I love reading your book. I hope the quality can be better, please update, come on, come on, come on!

The first few chapters were pretty interesting to read, but the more I read, the more strange it became. It shouldn't be like this throughout the whole chapter, right?

Damn it, just because you didn't update me, I drank too much today, several kilograms of rice wine

Come on, author, I really like what you wrote. Don't care too much about what others say. Some people don't like it, and some people like it. Keep writing and I will order them all once they are released. All the tickets for this month are booked, and I will give them to you next month.

The plot connection is not very good and the outline needs to be further refined.

Come on, author, I think you've collected more interesting ones, so take your time.