Laying Low on the Path to Immortality in the Cultivation World

This author's writing is really good. It's not like other books that try to sell dogs on their own. They say they are practicing cultivating immortality, but then they start committing suicide after entering. This book is really practicing cultivating immortality. I love it.

Advantages: 1. The subject matter and ideas are relatively novel. There are no cliche plots that pretend to slap people in the face or threaten to save people. It can be watched by old bookworms 2. The characters are relatively normal. There are no such things as virgins, dog lickers, or those who make the characters very righteous in order to pass the trial 3. Like some titles that sell dog meat on sheep's heads, this book really puts Gou through it 4. There are no plug-ins or systems. It just adds an infinite lifespan. The overall style of the painting is relatively pure, unlike some books that add a little bit of writing and then practice all the skills until they are mastered. Each chapter uses a panel to show the number of words. Disadvantages: 1. There are big loopholes in the timeline, age, cultivation speed, and breakthrough time. If you look a little more carefully, you will find that there are relatively big loopholes in the cultivation growth rate, breakthrough time, and age of the three people from the beginning. In particular, the protagonist's cultivation and breakthrough time are not matched with abundant resources. 2. It's a little wordy, saying a word, doing an action... These have too many psychological thoughts and content analysis. Some of the same analysis will even be written repeatedly. If there is no plot, just chat and think about it, you can write one or two chapters. There is a certain amount of words. 3. Some plots lack rigor, such as the crisis of selling spiritual rice, going out to build foundations, the sect's treasure house to replace a large number of foundation-building pills, secretly entering and exiting the sect at will, a large amount of resources that cannot produce corresponding strength, and sufficient resources but a lack of expendable trump cards. (Most of this content seems to be rigorous but is actually not rigorous) For example: after selling a large amount of spiritual rice once or twice, the sect can just order anyone who encounters a large amount of spiritual rice to be informed of the establishment of the master. Even if you use all kinds of tricks, you will not be able to escape. After selling hundreds of thousands of spirit stones to the Houtu Sect, I only had one investigation mission. For example: The leader of the sect has no way of knowing the whereabouts of the treasure house in exchange for the treasures. A young Qi practitioner spent tens of thousands of spiritual stones and no one noticed or raised any suspicion (could this mean that some of the sect's resources were directly exchanged and sold outside for a price difference, and no one knew)

Is a Dharma title so long-winded? Repeating the same idea back and forth, once is normal, twice to deepen the impression, and after three times it is enough. Your infinite loop of verbosity makes my head spin. There are a lot of repetitive mental activities that are not enough in one chapter but have to be continued in the next chapter. You are a bit too lazy. I really like this type of novel. It would be great if the expressions were simplified and the key points were not repeated, and the useless ones were removed from the mental activities.

Speechless

The male protagonist killed someone and wiped out his whole family; it was just because he stole the cave of his ancestor and he was afraid of being discovered by the other party. This logic of cause and effect is invincible.

Gou is indeed stubborn enough, but too much is unreasonable, and it is no longer refined and self-interested, but also a bit stupid. When he discovered the crisis, he put aside the planning for a long time and ran away. Apart from other things, it was not the place where he should collect information at the beginning, and he wanted to get benefits without touching anything. You have to be at ease and cultivate on your own. I will take the benefits. It will be difficult to pay depending on the situation. These are okay, the most difficult is to set an infinite lifespan and you'll be done with it. Accelerate your qi training and start learning formations, with some talent, it's okay, and then you cheat, grow rice everywhere, build the foundation and turn to alchemy, and then you will become an alchemy master. Later, I feel like you need to refine weapons. Not a buddy. If nothing else, you are. Infinite lifespan is not just a talent hanging on the wall, you are proficient in everything, and there is a specially arranged control group whose training progress is basically the same. Then your formations, alchemy, and talismans are all at the same level. Think about it for yourself, whether you are a clone or not. Let's not talk about watering down. You will just be stubborn. You have to explain everything for a long time. This is a mess.

Really, stop being so long-winded. There is really no need to repeat the reasons for many supporting characters. There are too many psychological activities. Is it necessary to write so much about the supporting characters' psychological activities? It's really too long-winded. You can write a chapter about one action or one thing. This is disgusting. , It would be really good if you re-write it to remove these marks. You wrote the story well, but there is really no need to write and repeat some actions, one look, and write a chapter. It is really disgusting. After reading the update, if you still write like this, I will give up the book! ! !

Just because you are not trying to sell someone else's meat, it is worth reading it in one day. This book is good. I currently only have two books on my bookshelf, Changsheng Marriage, and your excellent book. This is the first time I have seen a real Gou Daoliu. I hope it will be faster!

He stole someone's ancestral cave and didn't care about it in return. He also killed his descendants and wiped out his whole family. And there is no grudge at all, just because I am afraid that trouble will come to my door. Isn't this logic too...

A Nascent Soul Sect is big enough, as big as the sky. If something happens casually, the entire sect will be unable to stay. For example, if something happens in a certain county or city, the protagonist's mind will immediately ring with alarm bells: Mom, we can't stay in this entire province, run away 😭 Remote mountains and rivers, countless lands, hostile monks have nothing to do, and they are searching all over the place every day, right? They just happened to be able to find you, a master of concealment formations, right? That's outrageous!