Myriad Worlds: Starting from Douluo, I Leave My Mark

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I felt the writing was a bit self-indulgent. I couldn't continue reading when the protagonist was talking to Xiao Wu in the library. I won't even mention how Tang San and other characters don't quite fit the original story; after all, those who know, know the current reception of Douluo Continent, and everyone has their own opinion. Author, keep up the good work! This book just isn't for me. I'm outta here.

One disgusting point is that every male character in the original work is portrayed as evil, while the female characters are relatively whitewashed. They're all treated the same, whether they're good or evil. This differential treatment is truly nauseating.

The only flaw in this book is Xiao Wu. Why does the protagonist like this rabbit? The current mainstream Douluo fanfiction focuses on torturing Tang San and Xiao Wu, or perhaps Ye Lingling and Dou Dou – aren't these mature, elegant women more appealing? Another flaw is that Shui Bing'er is clearly the younger sister, and Shui Yue'er is the older sister.

Hmm... Why don't you become a teacher and open an academy? With characters like those in *Ever Night* and divine scripts like those in *The Tribulation of Myriad Races*, if you could also enable ordinary people to cultivate and balance the world, that would be awesome!

Even with such a powerful cheat ability, the protagonist doesn't know how to use it! Take cultivation, for example. So what if his aptitude is low? Instead of using the Yi Jin Jing to improve it, he could simply manifest a cultivation technique that refines energy. Then, he could have a Great Rejuvenation Pill and a Blood Bodhi.

This book can be called stream of consciousness.

I've only read the first fifty chapters. The book's concept is alright, but the protagonist is too confident, arrogant, and self-important. He gives off an overly superior vibe. If he were truly strong, reaching level 60 or 70 and unleashing his martial spirit, that would be fine, but he's already acting like he's on top of the world at level 30. It's really not very satisfying to read.

Honestly, the first few chapters of this book are much better than most Douluo Continent fanfics. Judging from the writing style, the author is indeed not very old. But the same problem is the unwarranted criticism of Tang San. Tang San would never bully a blind person like you. As the village chief and a well-known good boy in the village, Tang San would never ruin his own image.