
Pirate, I Made the Steel of My Heart
海贼,我出了心之钢
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 396k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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If you don't take revenge, what's the point of setting aside the side plot? What's the use of your side plot? The protagonist should now take revenge quickly and become stronger while determining the future direction, instead of going through some meaningless branch lines.
If you like a quiet life so much, I suggest you find a class.
How can the steel of the heart not match the giant hydra?
The writing is off track. One Heart Steel is enough, but I have to force a branch to get the Sensen Fruit. Is it necessary? Also, I was quite decisive in killing people before. When I get to that branch, I don't know what I wrote. It's so frustrating.
I was speechless after looking at it. They said that Garp no longer has Overlord color, and only Sengoku in the Navy has Overlord color again. Even I, who only watch anime, know this setting. We'll be happy if you change other things, but don't change your basic settings. Just Garp's physical skills and weapon color, why do you need to change the overlord color?
Theoretically, if you stack it 2250 times, you can have 2.1 Billion health, and if you stack it 5710 times, you can have 200 health, which is 1 times that of ordinary people in the book, that is, 10000000000000000 times. This is the real steel door, this is the real... Sorry, I went to the wrong set, let's join the evolution of the steel door.
After entering that island and not being able to get out, I started to get bored. I kept writing about intrigues, but the writing was very plain, and I also liked to bring private goods. It was so nondescript that I really couldn't read it.
At present, the plot highlights one thing. The plot of this island has no meaning, no main line, no goal, no routine, no comedy. The final devil fruit is also the fruit that the green cow eats when and where. There is no drawing at all. It is completely set randomly.
It's for the Heart Steel. You can just do some other side plots in daily life. There is also a saying that the Sensen Fruit is paired with the Heart Steel. But why are you practicing swordsmanship? Sword training doesn't count. You actually don't stack steel because in the game, the health value becomes negative when the steel is stacked to 5.1 Billion? Even though you can't beat Garp, you actually have the idea to stop stacking steel.
The characteristics of Qidianwen are intrigues and pig's feet pressing.
The protagonist talks too much, and the overall pacing is too slow, which makes it seem sloppy. In addition, the protagonist's strength is suppressed. The strangers on the Whirlpool Islands have ulterior motives to take advantage of you, instigate you, and even eat precious food without permission. In the end, nothing happened, no one died, and the chain didn't even light up.
Just don't suppress the protagonist, don't just kill animals and not be able to stack the layers, which is disgusting.
Chapter 33 has nothing to do with the original work.
Your introduction does not include the famous US Army General MacArthur, so I don't really agree with it. The bloodline is not pure enough
It's a good idea, but I just can't stand it. I feel like the author is perfunctory and the writing is very different from what he imagined.
Seriously, don't delay, especially this Whirlpool Islands, does it really make sense?
6% Of 7000 is 420. How did you get more than 50? ? ? It's less than 1%. If you still have feelings, all you've added is blood and no physical constitution. All physical enhancements come from exercise. What Heart Steel adds is blood but no physical constitution? ? ? ? Your data is not data
It's still in the water. If you can't write it out, the plot will be watery.
... As your health points increase, as long as you practice your strength, you can definitely reach the corresponding level. After all, it is not a game.
Traveling to the world of pirates, everyone who wants peace and doesn't want to be a pirate is attacked by pirates or is a Celestial Dragon, and then the protagonist is the only one left on the island. Is there really no other way to advance the plot?