The Strongest Heat System in Rebirth of Death

Rubbish novel, rubbish waste and timid protagonist 🤫🤫🤫🤫

I can't quite understand it. What are you writing? The book is very verbose. It does not have a clear outline of the main plot. I write wherever I think of it, and there are too many inner dramas. There are also some explanations on popularization, which can obviously be summed up in one sentence, but it takes one or two hundred words to explain in detail, which is very funny.

I don't understand. How can Aizen have the time to stare at an ordinary person? Even if we know that he is the protagonist, in Aizen's view, he is just an ordinary person. Everything is blamed on Aizen. Aizen's alias is Danzo, right? He thinks too highly of himself. .

I don't understand why you guys like to interact with Aizen so much in the early days. In the original novel, the famous Japanese kendo mind-eye that blocks the five senses was blocked for Aizen. Originally, Aizen's comprehensive strength was already at the breaking point of the Shinigami's combat power. You wrote the fanfic to keep Aizen strengthening. Then the fanfic will collapse even more completely.

I don't understand? How important is the protagonist? Just a little shrimp on a horse, getting nervous every day, just because he is afraid that someone will frame him? Does he have this qualification? Rubbish

After reading about thirty chapters, I felt that the protagonist wanted to act like a bastard, and then the author had to force the plot to promote the main plot. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist's personality and what he did were completely conflicting, and the author also wanted to create some foreshadowing. However, the author is not a master who can easily bury himself with foreshadowing, so hurry up and read the book as if it is not exciting.

This book is so poorly written and disappointing

Nowadays, the protagonists are all very domineering, and Aizen can see that the protagonist is outstanding among the crowd at a glance.

Why is the plot structure so similar to Huo Li Yao Tu?

The characterization of the protagonist should be strengthened and childish metaphors should be discarded. For example, Aizen in Chapter 12 is well portrayed, but the protagonist is a bit immature. He said that Aizen and the others should behave well as leaders, and joining them is like changing companies. These metaphors are very immature. Also, when the protagonist and Aizen acted, I found it very awkward and far-fetched. If you are not good at writing, just say that Soul Society is not good and it would be better to join them. The character of the protagonist is a bit childish. For example, his Zanpakutō is very powerful, which gives people the feeling that the protagonist is a younger brother and an older brother. When encountering difficulties, the protagonist turns to the Zanpakutō for help. The protagonist should be the stronger one. The protagonist talks a lot about leaving Soul Society. These descriptions are immature and similar to the compositions written by junior high school students. Just keep the protagonist's personality normal.

The useless protagonist is so awkward

Forehead. . . I've read Chapter 30. The main character is so unlikable that I even find it annoying. I haven't read the rest yet.

The protagonist is too twisted and tangled up and down. What did the author think?

I still haven't realized how powerful your knife is.

🤫 It's just a ghost system, Aizen Spirit King will still pay attention to you? In the later stage, even if it is not the rules system, it will not be on the stage.

To be honest, I think the description is quite contradictory. The protagonist is a timid fisherman, but the protagonist is required to be noticed by Aizen, and then has to participate in various events. However, it is classified as all under the guidance of the Soul King. How can the Soul King be so powerful that he is divided by the five major families and his internal organs are removed? Even in the end, he was stabbed to death by Yhwach... It is obviously impossible. I think the Soul King is more like the emperor in his childhood, and the monk is the shogun. The soul king maintains the integrity of the entire world as a puppet, just like the emperor maintains the legitimacy and unity of the regime. The monk is like the shogun, the manager of the entire world, managing Hueco Mundo, the present world, and all the big and small things in Soul Society.

I don't understand. Rukia is so cute, but not many people like her. Most of the people who watch Bleach are big breasts fans, right?