Immortal Immortality Starts from the Calamity Point

Abandoning books as soon as I see books about the Black, Red, and White Lotus Cult, writing about religious people that are particularly disgusting, endlessly following the trend of writing, what the hell

It's too messy, everything is messy, can the author straighten it out? After reading more than 20 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The everlasting victory! ! ! Do you understand your own life? A little disgusting

A word of confusion.

Why can't I read it smoothly?

I would like to give the author a piece of advice. Hold on and write at least one million words as a practice. Then you can look forward to the next book. This book has a second-rate young and Dangerous flavor, and it reads like you are being swilled. Try to improve your writing skills.

Why did Goldfinger have such an awkward name? It's a bit of a disaster. . .

The settings are okay, but the writing feels a bit messy.

Just a few book reviews? You won't delete the bad reviews, right? You'll get criticized for wasting readers' time. Okay, okay, I'll tell you after reading it, and I'll start reading it now.

The plot and setting are okay, but they are too dry and not smooth enough to read.

There are a lot of typos. Why don't you check them after you finish writing?

If you have any opinions, please leave them here!

There is a bit of confusion between men and women. Can't she take a closer look at this?

The sword knocks on the gate of heaven, mortals shed blood, practice swordsmanship, and kill decisively. Please send me a wave of support from all Taoist brothers. Thank you, thank you.

Come on, come on 😎

The book is readable, and there's nothing too bad about it. It's just that the grades are so bad that it's probably hard to finish the book.