Slashing My Way to Ascension

You wrote this protagonist very well, it suits my taste, but can you not be too tolerant of the girl you like? It feels a bit licky

I feel like there's a bit of a contrast between the previous and later articles.

If there are plug-ins, you don't need them. You say you're afraid of inner demons, you're afraid of big men in the fairy world, you're afraid of this, you're afraid of that, you're going to be bullied if you practice honestly, and you need support from your master. I don't know what's the use of writing this plug-in?

It looked good at first, but then the sense of fragmentation at the top and bottom of the mountain was too strong. Especially the part about the Lu family brothers and sisters. One second you killed their sweetheart and said harsh words, and the next second you went back to the mountain and apologized to others, saying that you were impulsive. Then there was a competition in the secret realm, and the matter was over.

I write so slowly, can I do it? Write more, otherwise you will forget about it.

Nice write-up. What is that magical power? Same as Wuhun? Do you have dual cultivation?

A rare good book. This is probably the best book ever written by Qidian.

It's been more than ten days since I finished reading it, and I said I won't write it anymore?

Spend some money, go to various platforms, and become popular. Ask about the price.

How can I put it, the more I read, the more I like it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. It may not look good at first, but after seeing 50 pictures, it is very good. This book has great potential.