I Get Stronger by Fulfilling My Last Wishes

I re-read it. It's not as good as the first half. I won't talk about the relationship. It's a failure. It's not well written. Joining the Patron Sect is also a mess. The master is crazy to pull the protagonist back to the right path. The protagonist is obsessed with fighting for power and winning over the outer disciples below. Putting the cart before the horse, but in the author's writing, he is very smart. The master's wife starts to fear this kind of protagonist. It's outrageous In addition, the smartest people understand You have to be clumsy, be small-minded, and have small ideas that can be seen through by others. For example, the protagonist gets a huge benefit and has to play both sides. This will bring endless prejudice to the people above. I don't know if the author has ever worked. For example, if you usually play tricks, or be lazy, or quibble, even if you are right, you just did it once, or you were right in the first place, as long as you are found out, it will bring endless prejudice. Sometimes I feel that you know how to be humble, and you explain things clearly as soon as you get started, and the protagonists win the trust, and then they start playing both sides, bullying the superiors and hiding the truth, and putting the cart before the horse. Maybe the author wants to change this situation, but judging from your outline, even betraying the master for the second time has not changed this I feel that the author was influenced by other books and did not calm down. He had many ideas but was not overly good. In addition, he repeatedly jumped between being loyal to himself and catering to the readers, which made him feel very confused. I actually suggest that you write your own things completely and stop caring about the opinions of those who did not read them before. This way you will not feel uncomfortable writing and watching.

The layout is small, the start is good, but the plot goes astray starting from the killing of the master. The starter is established, but the golden finger is gone later. Did the author forget the title of the book and the protagonist needs to join the sect? Only fools practice hard. I, Lu Sheng, rely on talent and hard work. Golden Finger can directly acquire the skills of others who have practiced hard for decades, so why do I need to practice the Kung Fu myself? The best way to use the Qi Men Yin Men Technique is to deceive, frame up, and make a last wish. For example, two geniuses or masters who originally have conflicts, and the protagonist adds fire to both sides, making both sides think that the other side did it, and they can gain decades of achievements from both sides at once. Moreover, the so-called geniuses cultivated by the sect since childhood are not as powerful as the old people. Some old people were once geniuses. The protagonist can look for these to start. After practicing the skills for so many years, it is just that the life span cannot bear it. If you touch the cultivation level of any one, is it not a casual abuse? What's more interesting than a hairy kid? It has only been 20 or 30 years since I was young, so where can I put it to kill the immortal? Mortal flow? It's an old cliche. Remember the title of the book. It's such a powerful golden finger. The writing is so useless. It's polished. I hope the next book will be good.

I'm a little doubtful. Has the author changed? From the decisive killing at the beginning to the unprovoked love now, the apprenticeship plot? And does the protagonist have a brain tumor? Tell me about your experience of killing your master? I spoke about my experience without any reservations. I feel like it was poisoned to death. You should say that you were forced to attack innocent people. In order to clean up the family for the master's request, you also added superfluous things and said that you knew he was his master. Were your decisive killings and witty survival at the beginning just a pretense? And your golden finger is so strong Whitewashing is not about making yourself look like a fool, you can be a person like a generous martial saint Start from being an outer disciple, disguise yourself as a generous good person, collect corpses for masters, and fulfill your wishes If the love story for no reason just confuses me This apprenticeship story made me poisoned to death There is also a story about the master asking him questions If you don't believe me, just let me go back and be an outer disciple. Who cares that I cheated all the way from outer disciple? Isn't it better to be appreciated by others? You have to live like a dog, but you also have to talk about the scenery of being a dog in other people's homes?

Why are many people bothered now? Some authors write emotional dramas. This book is a typical example. It is inexplicable and confusing. They suddenly rape a woman. If you don't know how to write, don't write it. Such a simple thing must be made so complicated. I just want to say: Yo-yo

It feels okay, although the sudden appearance of a female protagonist is a bit awkward, but it is understandable. In the whole book, this female protagonist is a little bit nicer to this male protagonist. Looking at other people in the book, the protagonist's family, master, friends, boss, senior brothers and sisters, passers-by, no one regards the protagonist as one of their own. The protagonist just likes a normal person, but this female protagonist does not feel like a good thing. Her feelings for the protagonist are like finding someone to have fun before getting married.

The author is a person with personality, and his writing is okay. At least before he met Young Master Ye, it was a good book. But after he defeated Lin Tianlong, the plot of "Fighting to Break the Sky" was very mysterious, and then he met love. I have met her twice in total. The key is love at first sight, not just love at first sight. In fact, when I saw Fang Qingxue and the protagonist Fa Xiang thinking about each other, I already acquiesced that this was the heroine, but the author did not give any hint that they would have emotional scenes. Hint, I thought the villain would be Fang Qinghan, and I guessed that the second time they met would be after entering the Patron Sect, but obviously I guessed wrong, and the progress was so fast that I was caught off guard. I thought the first one was Fu The second side of the story is about connecting the past and the future, introducing the villain and foreshadowing it. The third side completely detonates the conflict between the two parties, and officially confirms that they are in love with each other. In short, the author has condensed what you want to write too thickly, and I am choked anyway.

It feels like the protagonist has been controlled by various control methods, and even in the Dharma phase state, is it possible for an individual to make a few mocking remarks? It feels weird, but the book is okay.

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To be honest, the previous ones were very good, but the one about Ten Thousand Years Later was a huge failure. After the failure, I got out of control. What was written was all about. The descriptions after entering the Patron Sect were also messy and not attractive anymore. It feels like the author has completely lost his train of thought.

The protagonist has been working as a gangster for so many years and is decisive and ruthless. Suddenly he falls in love at first sight. It's like changing the character of the protagonist. It feels like he has changed from surviving in the wasteland to rural love. The author hopes to pave the way for the next book.