Immortal Cultivation Family's Immortal Family Cave Heaven

It's very strange to see. The devil's path is too powerful and it's easy to get promoted, but the righteous path is too difficult and it's troublesome to get promoted! It is clear that the civilization of cultivating immortals is prosperous, the highest combat power is in the stage of becoming a god, and there are also powerful demonic enemies. However, you have made the foundation-building elixir too rare. It is the same setting as those novels where the highest golden elixir monopolizes promotion resources! Also, if you don't heal your legs after cultivating immortality, you're just drunk if you make wheelchairs for others!

Change the modern words, such as "senior", "bedroom, kitchen", etc. It's a bit strange.

The writing on the talent of the maid is so good, I feel that this is a success. After all, the old books were more popular in the past about the talent of the maid. I think it would be more satisfying to upgrade a maid with average talent to a genius. Some personal opinions.

The strangest thing is to send the clan leader out to fight. I really didn't expect such an operation. What's the difference between you and the beast master fighting on your own?

Oh, it doesn't make sense to be childish. Even if the management of a modern company seeks some personal gain without damaging the interests of the boss, the boss doesn't know why he has come from this stage. Why does he pretend not to know if he doesn't go too far?

It's simply not a compliment! After the male protagonist is a dignified foundation-building monk, his spiritual root is actually not as good as a girl picked up at random? Why doesn't the hero commit suicide?

The protagonist is the clan leader, not a thug. The clan leader's important matters need to be handled personally instead of doing chores all the time. Also, the maid should serve you, instead of acting like a sister just because she has some talent. There is no point in sending her to other sects at every turn, regardless of superiority or inferiority. Since the family is centered on you, you must have the courage to lead the family, instead of always giving selflessly.

You can check the number of family members, why don't you write down the protagonist's parents? If you want to write that the protagonist's parents are not dead, then write them out, and if they are about to die, delete them directly. If you write that the protagonist's family is missing, you don't see the protagonist's family looking for them, and there is no news at all. As a top combat force, he disappeared, are you not in a hurry?

Where is the cave in more than 50 chapters?

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Others will become immortals after many years of introduction, but you will establish your foundation after many years? . . 666666

It's always the same routine

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