Starfall Mage

Is there a spaceship? It needs fuel? Withdrawn

Isn't this writing a bit too ancient? Seeing this plot, I really thought I was back in the 1990s, when I was playing games.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the adventure of the brave was written 30 years ago, and I suspect it is a poisonous novel.

I was moved by the author's inspirational spirit

The writing is good, with the flavor of an old Western fantasy where level is not important and intelligence is the most important thing. The plot progresses a bit too fast, and the protagonist seems to be superfluous in everything he does. I suggest you spend more time on one thing in the novel. The protagonist group expands a bit quickly, and many people will become backgrounds later.

Waaaaagh!!!!! It's too quiet. I just learned about the new book now, so I'm not happy.

Not bad, update soon 🤓