A Necromancer's Everyday Life in the City

My assessment of urban necromancers is either that they are completely unrestrained and don't try to revitalize spiritual energy or ancient martial arts in the city, or that they cause rivers of bloodshed and create a global catastrophe of undead. Otherwise, I'll abandon the book (based on normal logic or just for fun).

Over 700 years ago, you were the supreme ruler of the undead in another world, and you wrote it like this? How can a superhuman and an ordinary person even talk? Even if you were reborn and lost everything, you're still not an ordinary person. It's good enough if you can even greet each other, let alone hang out with a bunch of high school students. What's the point of setting up this background?

This is just my personal suggestion, please don't criticize if you disagree. It would be best to accept Yang Yu as your daughter's husband, given the debt of gratitude. However, she's single, and if you don't accept her, she'll eventually need to find someone to settle down with, which carries the risk of exposure (unless you create a soul contract or something).

In my personal opinion, the author's protagonist acts too hastily. It feels like he wants to handle everything at once. A peaceful city, and having lived in another world for over 700 years, why is he so eager to make money as soon as he returns? If he has a unique magic ability, shouldn't he take a break first?

The protagonist of this urban rebirth story is always a simp in his past life, always fawning over a scheming, womanizing playboy. I don't know who started this trend, it's ridiculous.

I couldn't keep going past chapter 18. Is the author afraid no one will read this? From the very beginning, they keep digging holes, deliberately leaving things unresolved, thinking it's to whet the appetite, but actually making it utterly uninteresting.

Amnesia or memory sealing are fine, but please don't use memories from hundreds of years ago to write about a teenager... This old bookworm has given up.

Could you speed this up a bit? If you want to watch a school-themed movie, why not find something else? Isn't the point of watching this to see the clash between a necromancer and modern society? It's all about trivial things on campus, I really have no desire to continue reading.

Necromancers are only suited for chaotic areas. Trying to work in modern cities will likely lead to your downfall. A peaceful life doesn't need too many surprises. Unless you want to write melodramatic plots and various face-slapping moments, you should move to the Myanmar border or the Golden Triangle region. There are tons of scumbags there, making it a paradise for experimental subjects. It's incredibly fun!

Another eunuch?