Tokyo Ghost Stories: New Game Plus

How come it's 2023 and people are still writing novels like this, with money earned in the form of 50,000 or 100,000 yen? The protagonist gets targeted by the mafia, goes to their door and wipes them out, and the mafia boss begs for mercy, offering only 100,000 yen, which the protagonist accepts and lets go... To be honest, if it were me, I would feel like he's humiliating me.

A promising start followed by a disastrous finish? Just when things were starting to feel promising, the "Sunny Doll" episode hit the brick—the "Black Bear Group" plot. It feels like removing the Black Bear Group and the "Milk Fragrance" storyline wouldn't have affected the story at all; I don't understand the point of including them. The transitions are jarring.

I had appendicitis last time, oh no!

I've read 200,000 words so far, and I have two points to complain about. First, that "idiot black bear group" paid too little. Only 5000 yen for someone who helped settle things? Are they kidding me? It should be at least 100,000 yen! Besides, Tokyo's prices are already high. What can you do with 100,000 yen? And the protagonist even looks smug about it; he's truly an idiot.

6. Recklessly acting without the necessary strength is unacceptable. Each time, it depends on the guest's invitation and luck; otherwise, it's all over. Is the problem with the protagonist, or with the author? Why did they arrange this kind of plot? 😅

We're saying if you're going to cut it off, just say so. Don't keep us hanging like this. Can't we just part ways amicably? Why do you have to stay silent? Do you expect us to keep writing? Do you expect us to wait until you come out, apologize, and then see you continue writing? 😆😆

Even a poorly finished ending is better than an unfinished eunuch story!

Who's so poor on their second playthrough? Where's the equipment and items from the first playthrough? All I have are a bunch of demon jades and no upgrade materials yet. Hilarious.

Hmm, this seems to be a new author's brief overview of the book's current state. The story's premise is quite appealing, but the writing style and some details are poorly handled. Simply put, the first few chapters, featuring a sunny day doll, are concise and to the point, creating a positive impression. However, the problems become apparent when writing about the yakuza organization.

The main character has little motivation and is just going through the motions.