Eat Well All Day Long, Add Some to Cultivate Immortality

Grass! I've flipped through more than a dozen chapters, what should I add? ! This is completely trying to sell someone else's meat!

Is the first chapter something that a normal person can write? 🤔

I signed a contract with 1.3 Million words. Do you understand the value of Luoshen's products? (Look back)

In the first chapter, because there were people watching around, the protagonist stopped running and turned around to fight the squirrel. What the hell was that? Are you so eager to perform?

After reading three chapters, not only does the protagonist Goldfinger know nothing about it, but I also don't understand the plot I want to express.

Does this author have a shopping system, where you get a lot of rewards for buying a book?

Chapter 1: Persuasion to retreat. Goodbye to the Riddler later.

I think good writing requires talent 😅

... I feel dizzy after reading this. Is the author engaged in academic research? Throughout this academic discussion, this is a novel, not a thesis. , I can't stand it anymore, ◝₍ᴑ̑ДO͝₎◞

The article is unparalleled, Confucius was troubled by Chen Bang; the military strategy is outstanding, Taigong fished in the Wei River. Although the talents of the Jin Dynasty kings are not in the starting point, time, luck, and fate are all.

I'm really sorry to watch it for free, but I would like to give you a hundred points to show my appreciation.

Chapter 1 is just stupid, goodbye

From the discussion thread, why is there no one there?

There are so few people, I worry when the author will become a eunuch

What a good boy. In the first wedding picture, nothing was explained. At the beginning, the incident happened and I didn't even know what the background of this world was.

From the twenty or so chapters after Chapter 67 to Chapter 67, I don't know why, but my head hurts when I look at them. Is it because I want to write about the main character who wants to do something, but he doesn't accomplish anything, and he doesn't intend to learn anything deeply, and he wants to do something new, but he doesn't have much materials. I wrote the idea of ​​inspiration, thinking that there would be some profound realization, but in the end I didn't write anything. After reading more than 20 chapters, it was reflected in the discovery of exercises and so on. I didn't dare to read how many chapters I would write for the next few exercises, and I didn't expand on the world of cultivating immortals 🙂. Can anyone please go back to the beginning of chapter 100? You can do research and write slowly and change it. Why do you write it like an excerpt from life?

I saw in the last book that someone said that 2 million words were released in level 2 just to shit. If you are level 1, you are eating Wallace.

How long the author can keep going, no one cares.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the overall story is very ink-writing. It breaks down everything and writes it in great detail. I feel like I am rushing through a diary. I opened the table of contents and flipped through it. It is estimated that the main story will not start until dozens of chapters. I would have finished writing it this way. . .

? ? , And looked at the comment area. Could it be that some author opened a trumpet?