Heiskar Brilliance

Don't believe the introduction, it is seriously inconsistent with the content. The author is fishing, but it is undeniable that this is a more rigorous book on fairy grass.

Why choose Ranger? Whether it is the previous choice to contact the mage or the subsequent talents, they are all related to the mage.

Today is the first time I have written more than 10,000 words. It took me eight or nine hours to write, but I feel like time is passing quickly🥺

It's the third day. Enthusiasm will not go far. . . Not to mention making too many mistakes. The most serious three points that can only be made more serious are: The meaning of the book title is unclear, The introduction does not even show the protagonist and there is no sense of substitution. The specific content first uses a long personal adventure plot to persuade the lord to retreat. Wen readers, who had just been put on the shelves, transformed into Lord Wen and persuaded the remaining personal adventure readers—— It was the same as not only not promoting their products, but also not telling customers what they were selling when they came, even waiting for customers to try it before selling the opposite products to customers. . . To be fair, I read Lord's Stories every day. After reading so many personal adventures on the shelves, I ended up switching to the mainstream after they were released. The plots of the mainstream are still so ordinary to the point of being boring. . . I couldn't help but read a few chapters. The result was that he died of illness. . . Should I say that I had expected it, or should I say that this is how it should be? Mixed mood. Another book to read is gone.

I would like to share my personal opinion and give some suggestions to the author. People do unconsciously use the ending sound of "oh, hum" when speaking. However, if you also write like this when describing character dialogues in a book, I personally think it is very girly, such as the Al, and sometimes when describing the protagonist, hmm, such words also feel quite girly.

I have read Chapter 39 so far, and I feel it is average, the events are progressing slowly, and it is boring. As of this chapter, we have not yet felt the immensity of the Heiskar continent. From the perspective of appearance, it is the size of the earth 😐 and its history is not long enough. It does not look like two million years in the fifth era. It depends on how the author performs in the future, all the recommendation votes will be given. 🙂

Worth a read, I wish the author will release it soon

Book friends who have read it must know that the introduction is just a passage in the book that I copied. Well... I am a bit incapable of writing an introduction. Book friends can post their opinions on the introduction, or write one directly for my reference. There are few people. If there is no one, I will hold one by myself in a few days🥺

The early stage was good, but in the middle and later stages, it was a bit confusing to win over teammates, especially when meeting people like Shelley and Lu Xuan, the protagonist completely changed.

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The protagonist is a refined egoist. The book is okay, but the three perspectives are different and my head hurts when I look at it.

Great book, keep it up to this level and don't be too bad. I will always support it. It's been a long time since I've seen a game and otherworld book of this level, I like it!

Disgusting, I kindly advise you to write, and I have always encouraged you to vote for recommendation and subscribe. This is also a eunuch. That's really mean. You're sorry for the paying readers, and you're even more sorry for the people who encouraged you to write. As you are, you will accomplish nothing in your life. Disgusting, I reread the words I wrote before to encourage you to keep writing, and I feel disgusted.

I go to the new book section every week and it's worth it to find this book this time. Come on, author

Your introduction is seriously inconsistent. Please change it.

After reading the first four chapters, I felt a little confused. The main reason is that you have traveled to another world or you don't understand virtual games. I feel like I'm watching someone else play World of Warcraft

This introduction is written like a piece of shit. It's the first time I've seen such a rude introduction. It can be written in such a way that people refuse to read it.

Look what I found, a new book on gaming classification.