The Pirate King of the Elf World

The sauce suddenly bubbles up, and comes with a set of hot pancakes and fruits, tofu curd, fried dough sticks, soy milk and fried dumplings surrounded by a large book. Give the author a big call, ^_^

The road is narrow, Jiang Han, it's your boy, right? Opened a small account, haven't seen each other for a few days, why are you like this?

When will we solve the weakness of Koga Ninja's Poké Ball? Don't wait until the enemy will use it against him 😒. That would be too bloody.

Kamiri-ryu·chanmie

Entered the palace again and became the eunuch prison ～

Why don't you give me a message? You can accept it if it reopens.

Sure enough, he has a criminal record. . .

Dry! Lu Zhai, Jiang Han, don't be a eunuch. Your name will be revealed at a glance, okay?

Chapters 38 to 57 are all quantum reading, nothing exciting. The protagonist keeps typing here and there and doesn't even know what the main plot is.

Since I want to write about One Piece, let's make a broken steering wheel, ghost + grass, special steel ability user: the power of steel-type moves is increased by ½, exclusive moves: anchor throw 80 physical damage, the target cannot escape, physical attack 131, physical defense 100, special defense 90 is pretty good, speed 40 is barely enough to beat the space team, can resist and fight

I believe you pounce three times, please give me some strength this time! ! !

It's cold again. Every time I read his book, my heart always feels cold and I'm always worried that I'll cut it again

I kind of regret seeing that 😭 is too short so early. If that doesn't work, I might as well keep it up. I'm afraid of it to death again.

In the first chapter, there is "all the elves". It should not only be Frog, but also the insignificant and developed stealing elves. I blindly guessed that there are old trolls, Gengar, and lazy kings. Also, the division of levels is not clearly explained, and the characteristics of Frog (should be able to change freely) can be written in an article. The name could be more Chinese. So far, there is no clear main line, and it seems inexplicable and confusing. Imposing goals is weird, so I suggest changing it in the first few chapters. How can I find my parents and find a wife to become the Pirate King? I hope that there will be a single heroine who can hang up if she doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, or something about the children of high-ranking officials in the Elf Alliance. It is recommended to only super-evolve and improve the status of super-evolutionary stones, which are only available to the top batch. I haven't watched One Piece, but I feel that in the mid-term, you can open a vest, hang out in the Elf Alliance, get your own elves, sneak attack your address book when you were a pirate, and ease the relationship. Then make a real Chen Mu hunt Hai Chen Mu. If you have a specific outline, it's a fart. It's not too much to write 2 million words. Don't cut it.

I have a suggestion, do you understand the decisiveness in killing? There is also the female protagonist Qi Xuanyu who came out at the beginning. She was relatively optimistic about pirates at the beginning. After becoming a pirate, you should show that free and easy character and that kind of character. The same goes for pig's feet. I suggest you make it decisive and decisive, with a little conscience, but don't be careless when it comes to taking action. Who likes to watch a hesitant protagonist these days?

I guess it's the eunuch again, this is the fourth part, right?

Cut or cooled? No update in 4 days

Can the author write one more chapter, or even two chapters into one, so that the feeling of being immersed in reading a book will no longer affect the viewing experience (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it 🙏)

Soraya is not that eunuch, I will use my head as a ball for you to kick

I remember that there are superpowers in the Pokémon world. Superpowers can be learned, and they are extremely powerful. They can manipulate objects with their thoughts, form attacks like air cannons, move instantly, and even turn people into ragdolls.

I would like to give you a suggestion. If the author says that he is not writing a book for his own personal pleasure, but wants to make money, he should not write in a way that is too expert, because most of the people who read the book are laymen. I often want to read some Pokémon books, but the books are too expert, and the various characteristics and detailed values ​​give me a headache. If you really want to make money, don't think about it and just stay in your own small circle. Write it briefly, as long as you understand the settings, but don't write it too deeply. Your writing is too in-depth and may please some Pokémon insiders, but most of the readers will be laymen. The author of Unscientific Beast Control, the few Pokmon books he wrote before are also very good, but why are they not so popular and out of the circle like Unscientific Beast Control? It is because there are too few people in the Pokmon industry. Like his Unscientific Beast Control, he writes in a shallower way, and everyone understands it, but it has a wider audience.