Yusha

The book is classified in the category of Classical Xianxia, ​​which is not actually Xianxia. The writing style is really good. There is a story chapter in the middle that seems boring, but it can arouse my desire to continue reading. Although it is a refreshing article, it is still a good book.

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Refining

The character setting and plot background are very good, but I can't stand the writing style. There are too many long and difficult sentences, adjectives, and descriptive words. It's really tiring for the eyes.

How can I put it, the early stage is very exciting, but most of the descriptions in the whole book are about the protagonist's understanding of Tao and Dharma. Once or twice is okay, I think it is good, but there are too many, iron, and the rest are like this. I am tired of aesthetics. After reading more than 800 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Now we generally know why traditional immortality writings are difficult to become popular even if they are well written. There are a lot of people who say they like these articles very much and like the writing style very much, but at first glance they are unsightly. Traditional cultivation of immortality is simply a precise attack on the poor.

I have read more than 200 chapters, and these Taoists do not behave like geniuses (they can't all be outstanding in cultivation, and everything else is a mess), and the talent of the protagonist directly puts me in the protagonist's face. The skills are all patchwork, although the grade is very high. However, the Thunder Technique and the Sword Technique are as good as or even better than those who specialize in Thunder Technique and Sword Technique. Using thunder method to add some changes in Yishu can make the great sect of Fuyun Palace with its heavenly secrets feel inferior to him. The systematic inheritance of skills, excellent talents, and easily obtained resources combined are not as good as the protagonist's casual practice (the protagonist's sword skills have not been practiced for several years). The character portrayal is not as good as the previous drug store owner, casual cultivator and others

There are so many details about cultivation that it's confusing to read, and it's very, very, very, very long. I can't hold on anymore

If you talk about it in vernacular, your results will definitely be much better. Reading this book reminds me of analyzing long and difficult sentences ()

It is an excellent classic fairy tale. I have been reading the novel for so many years. When I saw the introduction of Yu Sha at the beginning, I understood that it was a classic fairy tale. I did not expect to find a treasure. After all, in recent years, novels have been pursuing the pursuit of fast food and cool writing. It is extremely rare to carve out the characters, plots and backgrounds in such detail. The author definitely has the foundation and hard work in it. I have been following the book for so long. To be honest, there are many things that surprised me at the first sight, such as the nomenclature, but this It's hard to start talking about it. After all, it is inevitable to talk about it, but there are really only a handful of books that can maintain the momentum of writing after such a stunning opening. The dining table of the Tang Dynasty, the lingering fire of the night, the fairy basket, the fairy cage, the secrets, and my current memory is limited. This is all that I can think of. Yusha is definitely not bad compared to these books. Both the world background and the character description and plot advancement are extremely interesting. The author also updates well. No one has read such a good book in vain.

It's indeed a good book, but I usually read too many novice novels, so I felt a little tired after reading this 😂

The writing is good, but it may not be so bad. Especially the third master and apprentice in Baihualou seems to have a collecting habit. The first apprentice in the later period is also disgusting with the relationship between master and apprentice. Don't you think about the impact 😅

I haven't read this book since I was almost choked to death by the Dragon King. I felt uninterested for a moment. Grandma, I forgot to turn off the automatic subscription and subscribed directly to the helmsman.

After reading two hundred chapters, I feel that the author's rhythm and writing power are really not worth mentioning, and it is not just a matter of plot design. I don't know if you all feel this way. In many books, after hundreds of thousands of words have been carefully crafted by the author at the beginning, even the low-level enemies are deeply vivid and full of wisdom and pressure. In the later period, in order to update and fill in the water, the big bosses become more superficial after they appear, and the plots are just to fool people, or they are reduced to violent confrontations. The design here by the author is great. At present, the highest combat power is Jin Dan, and all kinds of Jin Dan bosses have appeared and have their own styles. I heard that in the latest update, Jin Dan is still the boss and has not declined, which shows that the control of combat power is very good. Moreover, in many novels, the boss appears too early and the protagonist is too weak compared to the protagonist. Especially when the protagonist must be involved in various whirlpools for dramatic conflicts, it makes the protagonist feel like duckweed. It is easy to make people feel that the protagonist is being abused, especially when the progress of this kind of classical cultivation of immortality is still very slow. But as I read along, the author focused on his descriptions, which made me feel that the protagonist is not frustrated but looking forward to the future because of his talents. On the other hand, the frequently switched battles between gods also let people appreciate the scenery of high-level people. It is very reasonable and does not overwhelm the protagonist. The integration is very appropriate.

The protagonist is too greedy, has many and complicated cultivation..., All the benefits are taken advantage of, the supporting role is no problem to describe alone, but once you get in touch with the protagonist, the IQ is gone. In short, it looks very tiring, and the writing is really good

The protagonist is simply a walking harvester of the senior elder sister. All the senior elder sisters of Xuanmen and Yuanmen have an affair with him.

Zhu Yuzhi.

The protagonist of this book is not the traditional Xian Xia, but the young villain of the traditional Xia Xia who cannot die in the ending.

As the name suggests, it is a dragon building. If you have a name you like and a style you think is cool, you can write it down. The minimum elements must be "name", "gender", and "approximate school (sword cultivation, thunder method, alchemy, etc., Demons are also acceptable)". The author will choose a character setting that suits the style and write it into the book~

After it was put on the shelf, it was like the author had changed. Getting more and more verbose!

I read almost 200 chapters in one go, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. The plot was well written, and the character descriptions were okay, but I was too tired. I had to read them word for word to understand them. But I read novels to relax, not to read compositions. I have to give up, what a pity. I hope the author will consider the readers' feelings when writing the next novel.

This is the most flavorful book about fairy tales in recent years. The harem is not to my taste, but the flaws are not concealed. Good luck to the author! A rare product.

As the title says, the title of the book "Spiritual Chapter"

😭It's so miserable, why is it exempted? It's okay for people who usually order.

When you were young, you awakened to Su Hui. Suddenly one day you saw a figure flying freely in the sky, and a rainbow light appeared. You realized that there were immortals in the world😲. You recalled a incomplete Qi training recipe that you accidentally obtained in your previous life, and made up your mind to transform from the mortal world🤓, so you started practicing cultivation at the age of three. It's a pity that you have useless qualifications😂, your family is poor🥶, and you have wasted countless years. Finally, you reached the first level of Qi training at the age of thirty. I lament! One day while meditating on the bed, a virtual panel appeared in front of you, with many options in it———— a: From now on, every ten years, the spiritual root qualifications will increase, and the foundation can be established at the age of 100, and there will still be normal bottlenecks after that; b: From now on, you will have one house of wives and concubines every year, or every time a descendant with spiritual roots is born, the family's luck will increase. , Luck can feed back one's own qualifications. If one keeps repairing oneself, the foundation can be built in the Year of Jiazi, and there will still be normal bottlenecks after that; c: From now on, when one is a teacher, the world will be filled with peaches and plums. Whenever the disciple's cultivation reaches a great level, the teacher will feed back the qualifications. The better the disciple's qualifications, the stronger the degree of feedback will be. The foundation building time is uncertain, and the bottleneck is uncertain; d: From now on, Connect cause and effect with others, solve the cause and effect, the higher the level of the person who is connected, and after solving the cause and effect, it will feed back their own qualifications. The foundation building time is uncertain, and the bottleneck is uncertain; e: From now on, every time you learn a practice method, your life span will increase. The degree of increase depends on the level of the skill itself. When you increase the level of the skill, when you break through the bottleneck, it depends on the recharge of your own life span; f: From now on, travel through the double portal to any city/apocalypse/oriental ancient martial arts/western medieval world. The soul of this door is bound and will never fall, never be inherited, and will be unbound after death; g: From this moment on, sell the void coordinates of the local world, become the Lord God's space material, and be given certain cultivation resources. The soul will be bound to the reincarnation identity, but its own qualifications will not change. Return to the main god space to start your own adventure. If the mission in this space fails, it will be wiped out. After ten missions, the ownership of this space will be determined; h: From now on until the end of your life, you can choose to please the ancestor of the demon with your own flesh and blood at any time, and then become a As a member of the Heavenly Demon Clan, all creatures and even objects in the world can be taken away by you. You can be someone else's grandfather, and when you are about to overcome the inner demon tribulation, you can take advantage of the opportunity to seize the body. You can also turn into an instrument spirit, and when the life of the person you hold ends, you can devour the soul of the person you hold to nourish your own life; I: From now on Starting at this moment, you get the prototype of a fairy mansion. The fairy mansion is manifested in the form of objects, which can be dropped and passed down. You can start the journey of farming and cultivating immortals. The fairy mansion can increase the growth rate of crops, refine elixirs and weapons, speed up cultivation, and deduce techniques. During this period, the consumption of the fairy mansion is to swallow the blood of living beings. Meat; J: From now on, you will get a point-adding system. Points can modify your own destiny and master skills. Points are obtained by swallowing the essence of ancient artifacts and the essence of living beings. The former accumulates slowly, while the latter accumulates quickly. How to develop can all be done in a single thought.

It's a very interesting book. I really like the character dialogues designed by the author. Unfortunately, there are too few dialogues and psychological descriptions of the characters in the middle and later stages of the novel. I feel that character dialogue is the author's strong point, and it would be better if the new book could continue this style. By the way, regarding the conversation description in Chapter 6, I really should make a few videos with Douyin Mucheng, maybe it can bring some other traffic to both parties.

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AI made a batch and I feel like this one is quite suitable for the occasion.

It's a great classic fairy tale. I haven't seen it for a long time. I'll vote for two and leave a stamp. Come on, author 😚

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