Blood Moon Coming: My Life Game

Overall, this book is okay. The creative ideas are good and the writing is up to standard. There are just some poisonous points, maybe because the author is a newbie (hasn't the author already written several books?) If the author wants to make money, he has to figure out the poisonous points and avoid them. Of course, if you can't do that, then you have to learn to avoid poisonous points, and try to make your book zero poisonous points, plus an interesting world view and a good plot, that's OK But it's basically impossible to achieve zero poisonous points, because everyone's poisonous points are different (some people even have weird poisonous points), so you have to choose your own path, and the general poisonous points of each party are different. For example, in a harem party (if you don't know how to portray feelings and have a female supporting role, it is not recommended to choose one), you have to pay attention to some details about the issue of accepting girls For example, in a party without a female protagonist, you have to pay attention to that the male protagonist cannot have a particularly close female supporting role, and more importantly, he cannot have a female supporting role. There is no sign of a heroine to be ambiguous with a female co-star (I get angry when I think of this) For example, there is no party (ahem, they should be able to read anything) Ahem, I would say there is no party to the heroine. In fact, every time I think about the world of this book I really want to see the boundary setting, but every time I think of that cat (female, also called the eldest lady), I instantly lose the desire to watch it - bb: If you just choose someone to fall in love with and kill with the male protagonist, you might as well choose the system, at least it has no gender... The above are just superficial personal suggestions. I hope the author will work harder. In short, the more you write, the more you practice, and the more you hit the wall, you will eventually understand. 😏 [There are so few comments from the author, and I feel so pitiful that no one reads them, so I typed these words. I hope the author can work hard~]

Everything else is pretty good, except that the system can talk to me, but it just kills me at every turn, which is a bit boring.

It's quite interesting, but why am I the third person to watch it? Normally there shouldn't be hundreds of people? Probably not promoted

So can you stop erasing it at every turn? It really affects your senses. It's 2023 and you're still playing infinite horror. If this kind of world view fails, then it means death, and even if it is the main character, it will be wiped out. It's very sad to see

Super short introduction: either a super god or a super ghost

The system can talk, but you can't talk nonsense. Just ask what happened directly. You can only talk at critical moments or when the protagonist asks it. Talk, and you must maintain a sense of mystery about the system (please improve it)

Let's not talk about the previous ones, but there is something wrong with this recent school mission. During the first mission, I felt that I wanted to take the decryption route, and then I went to the piano room and killed him by force 😥. Then I went to the person named Luo and the tree at the end~ It always felt a bit anticlimactic 😅 The decryption was difficult to write. You can expand the first one and cut off the piano room. After decrypting the first target, you can directly target the person named Luo, and then fight the boss~ Would it be better? Personal advice

Life-style game means that the goal of this game is to survive. It can also be translated as the goal is to turn the survival game into a life game, so update quickly!

I've finished reading it. It started out well, but the sequel was a bit too hasty. I thought I'd upgrade the game first.

Xuanzong of heaven and earth, the root of all things; I have cultivated for hundreds of millions of kalpas to prove my magical power; inside and outside the three realms, Tao is the only one; my body is covered with golden light, which reflects my body; I cannot see it and cannot hear it; it encompasses heaven and earth and nourishes all living things; it has been upheld thousands of times and its body has light; the guards of the three realms are welcomed by the five emperors; the gods pay homage and use thunder; ghosts and demons are frightened, and the spirits have lost their form.

At the end of the story, the white dove no longer stops in the church, and the bird is no longer bound to a cage. We run towards the light, towards our ideals, and embrace our own desires.

This book was okay when I first opened it, but after I got a cat, a celebrity came out and was the cat's original owner, so I couldn't read it anymore. What the hell. Helping people in such a humble manner is really speechless.

Alas, it feels like this big star is going to put a soul-breaking gun on the performance of this book. I can only read one chapter. The author probably won't be able to hold on for too long.

It was pretty good before Chapter 12, but then suddenly started to show off without any brains, which made my brain hurt just looking at it.

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Give me silence

I've just read chapter three. Wow, I was a little put off by the name and introduction. The writing is quite interesting.

Not even close

The front is pretty good, the back is a bit weird, and the talent is weird.

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There is room for improvement in writing. Several books I have encountered have not been marked with cp by non-female protagonists. I immediately persuaded them to quit after reading 😭. Wouldn't the author consider marking it? Psychology is the same as the symbols used in speech, three paragraphs in a row, no Some people added that they were thinking in their hearts, and it looked so awkward. Although I knew it was psychological, it was just like the dialogue between the characters 😥 The male protagonist he created was a bit confusing. The previous article said that he had a high IQ, but I couldn't tell from the article. It even made me feel a bit contradictory.

Does this book need to be cleared in one life? If so, I will withdraw it. It's impossible to get through a world like this in one life.