Immortality Through Taking Wives: Gather Dao Companions Far and Wide, Miss, Please Stay

Are there any people like me who look like Celestial Silkworm Potatoes at first sight😂

Tiancan Tiandou is not bad. There is no need to use a pen name to ride on other people's popularity. It's too copycat.

What are you writing about? I saw that you always talked about the imperial court. I thought you wanted to pursue an official career. Now a cultivator appears, and I thought you wanted to cultivate. But in the blink of an eye, you have established a new imperial court. I don't know what you want to write. Also, in the family panel, the birth is less than seven months away? Calculate for yourself how long it has been since your first pregnancy, okay? Alas, the more I write, the more my hips stretch.

This introduction, to build a family, you still have a wife, this... It also has a "Renaissance" flavor.

No, the protagonist planted so many flowers for the future of the family and to have children. Why is the taste so delicious? Even if the wife is ugly but has a good temperament, it will be the same when the lights are turned off. I recommend trying the taste of an ugly woman 😂

I just like harem species🐴, the author keeps it up

I can't say how bad the writing is, I can only say it's average. The biggest problem is that I don't like the characters. It would be better if the plot and characters were to my taste, but this situation looks like a brain hemorrhage.

Actually, I think it's not bad. Harem Wen, I haven't met her in a long time.

Plum blossoms

On their wedding night, the protagonist wants to have sex with the maid in the bridal chamber, and the maid agrees... They have only known each other for a day or two, and the contact does not exceed ten minutes. It is unlikely that one or two people are so horny, and they risk their lives to do it. Suddenly the personality charm of the two characters is gone. It's too easy to succeed, no matter how beautifully written it is, it won't have any charm.