Fusion of All Things: I Build an Immortal Dynasty in the Mortal World

I hope the author will pin my comments to the top, so that new readers will not see those comments that criticize you. Those comments are simply too abominable. Finally I know why there are only 30 comments. It's because they don't appreciate it at all. I tell you the author, your writing is superb, especially the settings. Even the peak of martial arts is only the Qi refining period. It has well written out the strong character of the immortal cultivator, and there is no problem with combat power. In the later stage of Qi refining, you can soar into the clouds, ride on the mist, go straight up to the blue clouds, fly into the sky and escape from the earth. You are omnipotent. There is nothing about the characters. They are really thoughtful and all are old Yinbi. It is simply a work of a great god. I dare to say that after a hundred chapters, the author will definitely become a god. Take a look at it if you believe me. You will never regret it. Go in and read it if you don't believe me. You will never regret it. In short, if you go in and take a look, you will definitely stay and give me a like.,,, You will all understand what I mean now,,,,

It's confusing, messy, and has a lot of useless lines. Anyone who comes to visit the flower boat will have to write hundreds of words. In Chapter 40, the protagonist asked them to go out, and then asked Zhu how to find the monster. I really don't understand why I wrote this paragraph. Momojiji didn't write out the reason until the end, as if these people were in the cabin just waiting for the plot to continue to develop. Before and after Chapter 40, it happened to be the climax point, and the result was written as a defense. It's the Chen family and Agent Hu. The author wants to write a plot, but he doesn't have the ability. He just needs to think about the characters carefully. It is recommended that the author write a detailed outline before writing this kind of plot. If you don't know how to write, start with a biography. For example, what is Qingyue's purpose, what is Zhao Cheng's goal, and what is the prince's goal. Write down the mission objectives clearly, and then think clearly about what makes it fun and how the plot will develop. Instead of writing like now, with a stick in the east and a stick in the west, it becomes a mess. A good beginning, just like this.

At the fifth level of Qi training, you still have to gain various enlightenments 🙂

Let's wait until the author finishes writing Three Hundred Years to catch up. A typical title is "I want to see you fly to the sky, but you end up swimming in the mud." You are no longer in the mortal world, and your dimensionality reduction attacks are 50/50 hits. Just reincarnate

It's easy to be pure, use absolute strength to suppress all dissatisfaction. Suppress all the little ones, stand aloof, and treat all living beings like ants!

During the qi training period, heaven and earth are all important. I was speechless when I saw what was written about the way of heaven...

With so much wealth in hand, but not invincible in the world, why not practice well first? There are so many irrelevant things in a day, and you interact with people every day.

To be honest... I can't keep chasing. I keep making fun of Tiandao... To pretend to be 13... But the more I look at it, the more disgusted I am... Tiandao is Tiandao... It's a rule... Now that you have found Tiandao, it's just like a brainless demon cultivator... Not powerful, but also seeking death... I don't know what those powerful people who guard the earthly immortal world are for... In short, the more you look at it, the more embarrassing... The more you look at it, the more chaotic you are... If you want to create a conflict, just find a big boss? Anyway, the protagonist is better at Qi training than Yuanying.

After reading more than 20 chapters, if I keep writing this trend, the mortal world will probably be better than the fairy world in the end.

The reviews of the books on the shelves are really clean. There is no arrogance or arrogance, and there is no understanding brother pretending to understand. It makes reading the book look better.