Mortal: I Replaced Han Li

Write a brief review. Chapter 72 has been read so far. The beginning is a bit bland, which may lead to misunderstanding or even discourage a group of people. I think the turning point started when I returned home, where I gradually became more determined. Obviously the concept of this book is very different from the original version of Mortal. If you read this book with the stereotype of the original version of Mortal, you probably won't be able to read it. Personally, I think this book can be seen as a regretful compensation for the original version of Mortal. Currently making up for the Mo family, the younger sister's parents, Xin Ruyin. The author tried to remedy (guessed) those places in the original work that were difficult to understand and made people sigh. Therefore, the writing method must be different from the original work, focusing on emotional lines and layout lines (such as those guessed by Yuxian Temple). So let's make another guess: this book has more female readers. Is the author male or female? But he is so skillful in dealing with women... While pulling and pulling, he keeps PUAing. I can only say that I admire and admire... I'm going too far, now the intention has been established. The protagonist obviously wants to change the entire mortal world and break the ruthless and selfish state of the jungle, but he just doesn't know how to proceed. And the system seems to be very useful at present, but it also has great limitations. It is obviously a later development. That talent 2 is estimated to be awakened by foundation building? Come on, author, write well!

This book has several major features: 1. Features. 2. Be careful about sex. 3. When the author describes women, his brushwork automatically becomes delicate. 4. The protagonist is very distinctive, small things are bad, big things are right, unambiguous. 5. From the new perspective of mortals cultivating immortality, everyone is an ordinary person with a fishing net. 6. It's too short. Can you please give it more? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

The world of cultivating immortals is full of intrigues and extremely dangerous, so you have to cultivate immortality with your family. Aren't you afraid that your enemies will catch you in your weak spots?

Change the introduction: My name is Han Li. I have replaced Han Li through time travel and have done what Han Li has never done~

Personally, I feel that the road to immortality is very difficult, even if Han Paopao is so favored by luck, it will be bumpy every step of the way. You, who just entered leisure, want to get out of the house and fly to the top. . . Somewhat confused

It seems that the three sisters of the Mo family are going to be taken in. That sentence, senior brother, is it really impossible to cultivate immortality without spiritual roots? Won't appear anymore. Ink color ring:

I hate the so-called repaying evil with kindness. Mo Juren wanted to seize you, but you got him a heavenly spirit root to cultivate immortality. Aren't normal people like me to kill anyone who wants to mess with me first? I want to use love to influence the person who came to you to kill me. Such a vicious approach is unbearable!

I found a very interesting picture, haha😄😂 Let's SPA together!

Let me start by saying that I only read the introduction. The resources in the world of mortals cultivating immortals are already pitiful. Han Li is not enough to open elixirs. He needs to conquer a whole world. If he wants to ascend one after another, he must either directly activate the system and hang up, or completely eat up the mortal world and wipe out all the links, completely cutting off the spiritual energy.

The protagonist should change his surname to "Zhao Ma" and his first name to "Yu", and his full name will be "Zhao Ma Yu".

There are many beauties, beauties, and beauties over there in the Chaotic Star Sea, so don't leave any regrets.

Haha, I didn't expect the author to arrange CP for both Han Yu's sisters. Zhang Tie won't go into details. According to the original trajectory, it was very miserable. He was used as a puppet and had to protect Han Tianzun until he formed a pill, so there should be a reward, but arranging a Yan Ge for his sister always feels weird. Think about it, you cheated on the protagonist yourself, and gave others Tianlinggen to act as your sister's CP. Wouldn't it be weird to be the protagonist's brother-in-law? Isn't it a different kind of ntr?

Good writing, affectionate and righteous, the real Mr. Han

You, a time-traveler, are actually strangers to the Han family, yet you lead them all to practice immortality, and are you so nice to them? Nowadays, the protagonist of QD novels was basically born in an orphanage, but you did the opposite and found yourself parents and brothers.

After reading the introduction, I knew it was not a mortal stream, but there was a mortal stream in the tag of the work. Is the author perhaps having some misunderstanding about mortal flow? !

In the animation, Nangong Wan seems to be the most beautiful, and Senior Sister Chen really relies on the kind of animation that looks better the more you watch it.

Han Tianzun understands the law of time, and you actually want to replace him? ? If someone just stares at you, you will turn into ashes👻

I didn't know until the end that this is the continuation of the Fairyland chapter 😂

Generally, those who are flamboyant will not survive long in the mortal world.

What about 82.83?

Among mortals, it is said that the most despised thing among women is Mo Yuzhu, what the hell! Dong Xuan'er's personality charm is stronger than hers

Good guy, the protagonist is a super virgin, and she's also a diaosi virgin.

It's so toxic at the beginning, this protagonist is really disgusting

Very good subject matter, but the writing style and plot are really disappointing

If you don't know how to write, don't write. Read more books before writing. What you write is wrong.

Mortal Characters 5

The last two

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.

This article is a bit holy, the writing is average, and the plot changes are a bit stiff. Overall, it is considered average among mortal fans! Come on, author

The plot in episode 24 is ridiculous. Why should we change the original work and it's so bloody?